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Peezy_Jenkins
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kzzl;8318974 said:French-Bad-Boy;8288520 said:Nice record. I love your flow, it's very catchy. I really dig it. Maybe with a better compression on your vocals the track will be perfect. Nice job.
Check your PM, I sent you a message about the last beat.
And here is my new beat. A chill one:
https://soundcloud.com/white-house-bn/power
When I was showcasing beats I would try to keep it short if the song didn't have any change ups or progression, I figured it made browsing my shit easier. With this, you've pretty much heard the whole song after the one minute mark. With that being said, maybe some change ups and progression would compliment the song. Not that you should, most east coast songs don't, but stuff like that gives a beat more character and can help with the impact of lyrics.
https://soundcloud.com/kzzl/ride-or-die
seems like it could be catchy, but you'll be doin urself a disservice if u aint get this mixed/eq'd and/or prolly an new mic. unless thats just how u wanted it
I'm going to be brutally honest;
I checked out about 4 or 5 tracks on page 9 of this thread. I'm hearing too much bass and not enough substance. It seems like you guys think a lot of bass is enough to carry a track. You gotta remember, everybody doesn't have 18 inch woofers.
How would the song sound on a clock radio?
I have a lil boom box in my living room that I use to listen to the radio. And just so you know, the radio stations in Philadelphia are fire. I have no complaints about what they play. I also have a clock radio in my bedroom that I listen to sometimes.
Some of you guys music would sound completely empty, meaning there wouldn't be any sound if you played it on a radio that didn't have a sub woofer.
Something to think about.
I checked out about 4 or 5 tracks on page 9 of this thread. I'm hearing too much bass and not enough substance. It seems like you guys think a lot of bass is enough to carry a track. You gotta remember, everybody doesn't have 18 inch woofers.
How would the song sound on a clock radio?
I have a lil boom box in my living room that I use to listen to the radio. And just so you know, the radio stations in Philadelphia are fire. I have no complaints about what they play. I also have a clock radio in my bedroom that I listen to sometimes.
Some of you guys music would sound completely empty, meaning there wouldn't be any sound if you played it on a radio that didn't have a sub woofer.
Something to think about.
French-Bad-Boy
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Hey! I listened 2 of your songs.
Dreams: The beat is good, the vocals mix sounds pretty nice too. Unfortunately too short.
Exhibit K.C: On this one, the beat is heavy, very good choice. The vocals mix is still good, you got a good vibe on it. It sounds professional for me. It's definitely my favorite one from you. Very good job on this one.
So, here is my last beat. Tell me what you all think about it. Thank you!
https://soundcloud.com/white-house-bn/gangsters-paradise
Dreams: The beat is good, the vocals mix sounds pretty nice too. Unfortunately too short.
Exhibit K.C: On this one, the beat is heavy, very good choice. The vocals mix is still good, you got a good vibe on it. It sounds professional for me. It's definitely my favorite one from you. Very good job on this one.
So, here is my last beat. Tell me what you all think about it. Thank you!
https://soundcloud.com/white-house-bn/gangsters-paradise
French-Bad-Boy;8338737 said:Hey! I listened 2 of your songs.
Dreams: The beat is good, the vocals mix sounds pretty nice too. Unfortunately too short.
Exhibit K.C: On this one, the beat is heavy, very good choice. The vocals mix is still good, you got a good vibe on it. It sounds professional for me. It's definitely my favorite one from you. Very good job on this one.
So, here is my last beat. Tell me what you all think about it. Thank you!
https://soundcloud.com/white-house-bn/gangsters-paradise
I can rock with this beat, personally not what i'd gravitate to artistically but musically i'd listen to it especially if somebody laced it right with the lyrics. it gives me that street bang bang type vibe, production wise you are on point.
about that dreams track that I did, that was just a snippet of my verse, I did that song with two other artists that I lost contact with.
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FlyFreeCt;8336309 said:
I really do like that back to basics track, you was throwing some darts on there, it's structured right and that beat is always gonna do justice. it's mixed clear and I even liked the visuals in the studio just showing the process.
the try track, I do like the concept and the lyrics but the techno style beat isn't so much my vibe, now I do know some people do have a strong appreciation for that sound, me personally not my style of music. I see what you doing on it though and I know the song is geared towards the ladies.
YoungRider
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KINGTRILL;8368254 said:
Ain't really a big fan of the drill sound but I think it would sound better with just your voice and no effects but keep grinding lil homie and find your own distinct sound.
Check me out y'all posted just the song a while back this the video
Swagger Vance
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YoungRider;8395017 said:
Damn video looks legit man, wouldn't look out of place if it was by any random mixtape rapper that's semi-famous and honestly the song is just as good as what a lot of them put out as well. Dope shit man Ill check for your ish.
Here's my ish though, not as much gangster ish as what Ive heard on here but still piff.
https://soundcloud.com/swagger_vance/1-order-66
it's been a min but i'm back here ya'll gohttps://soundcloud.com/neme-4/love
5th Letter
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@5 Grand please review the previous song that was posted.
illestni99ainne
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This my nephew Eric King's new video. Not my cup of tea but some of yall might like it. Let me know what yall think.
5th Letter;8417078 said:
If you're talking about Qawshun's track, Love, I listened to it a few times last night and this morning with the volume low, but now its a little bit later in the day so I can crank the volume.
The first thing that struck me is that it starts immediately. I hate songs that have a slow build up and take a full minute to start, by the time the song starts you've lost interest. So thats a plus.
I like the sampling, I can't tell if its a bunch of samples thrown together from different records or if its all from the same record. I like the all around vibe, compared to most of the stuff that gets posted on the IC, this song is a breath of fresh air. Also, it has a decent amount of bass but not too much. The song has melody and harmony whereas a lot of songs nowadays rely on deep 808 bass and not much else.
I like the lyrics, although realistically I don't think this song would appeal to the masses because its too deep. There's too much substance. It would make a good album cut though.
I'd be interested in hearing what else Qawshun has to offer.
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