What did you want to be growing up?

[MoneyPowerRespect]

I can't edit sooooo.....

*marine biologist

*translator for the Embassy

*singer/rapper/spoken word artist

*chef

*teacher

Now you just a single mother

Actually, I start school this summer.

No time to waste !!!!

 

[A$AP_A$TON]

A real nigga. #MissionAccomplished

Momma I made it!!!!

 

[TrueraPP]

wanted to be Lebron.................

If only i was a few inch taller.........

 

[OmegaConflict]

I can't edit sooooo.....

*marine biologist

*translator for the Embassy

*singer/rapper/spoken word artist

*chef

*teacher

Now you just a single mother

Actually, I start school this summer.

No time to waste !!!!

Good job piglet

 

[Lustchyld]

@Lustchyld

i listened to those freestyles, b. they were alright, but they were just that....freestyles. your beat selection was cool because it wasnt the most recent beats out, but at the same time, they didnt leave much for the imagination because the tracks are so old. last time i heard the "round & round" beat was when god knows when....prolly watching how high.

what i can say is that theres work to be done! you sound is kind of dated and generic. its exactly what id expect to hear from someone on the internet who says that they rap. nothing is wrong with your rhymes, they just felt impersonal. you need to inject yourself into these songs so that the listener can distinguish you from other people and know exactly why they are listening to you. maybe if you had an original track in there, it would be easier to hear YOU.

but thats my critique. if you feel like returning the favor, my music is athttp://www.isntiteyeronic.com.

I saw the website, listened to one of the tracks can't remember the name. You got some skills, but something about your shit just screams "industry nigga". I'll try to check out the other tracks within a week or so to give you my full opinion.

 

[aladdin1978]

I wanted to be....

 

[TonyDubbz]

nba or rap was always my dream growing up. played ball all through school, but realized the league was probably out of reach by college. been bout my music career ever since. here's a semi-recent track I made off my mixtape:http://youtu.be/RhfZNEVryKU there's 11 tracks in all feel free to check me out

You sound bored/boring bruh.

Theres no excitement in your rhymes if you gonna focus on a career in music then atleast rap like you love that shit.

 

[5th Letter]

Actor

 

[Lustchyld]

nba or rap was always my dream growing up. played ball all through school, but realized the league was probably out of reach by college. been bout my music career ever since. here's a semi-recent track I made off my mixtape:http://youtu.be/RhfZNEVryKU there's 11 tracks in all feel free to check me out

You sound bored/boring bruh.

Theres no excitement in your rhymes if you gonna focus on a career in music then atleast rap like you love that shit.

ok, so THAT'S all you got out of listening to me. The majority of people have told me I'm an incredible spitter. But I should overlook that for the sake of living up to your contrived notions of being 'exciting', right?

 

[Lustchyld]

@Lustchyld

i listened to those freestyles, b. they were alright, but they were just that....freestyles. your beat selection was cool because it wasnt the most recent beats out, but at the same time, they didnt leave much for the imagination because the tracks are so old. last time i heard the "round & round" beat was when god knows when....prolly watching how high.

what i can say is that theres work to be done! you sound is kind of dated and generic. its exactly what id expect to hear from someone on the internet who says that they rap. nothing is wrong with your rhymes, they just felt impersonal. you need to inject yourself into these songs so that the listener can distinguish you from other people and know exactly why they are listening to you. maybe if you had an original track in there, it would be easier to hear YOU.

but thats my critique. if you feel like returning the favor, my music is athttp://www.isntiteyeronic.com.

I saw the website, listened to one of the tracks can't remember the name. You got some skills, but something about your shit just screams "industry nigga". I'll try to check out the other tracks within a week or so to give you my full opinion.

lol what does that even mean?

industry niggas let the record labels dictate what's hot/fly/real as opposed to in-the-street niggas who do the opposite and trust their own judgement

 

[Lustchyld]

@Lustchyld

i listened to those freestyles, b. they were alright, but they were just that....freestyles. your beat selection was cool because it wasnt the most recent beats out, but at the same time, they didnt leave much for the imagination because the tracks are so old. last time i heard the "round & round" beat was when god knows when....prolly watching how high.

what i can say is that theres work to be done! you sound is kind of dated and generic. its exactly what id expect to hear from someone on the internet who says that they rap. nothing is wrong with your rhymes, they just felt impersonal. you need to inject yourself into these songs so that the listener can distinguish you from other people and know exactly why they are listening to you. maybe if you had an original track in there, it would be easier to hear YOU.

but thats my critique. if you feel like returning the favor, my music is athttp://www.isntiteyeronic.com.

I saw the website, listened to one of the tracks can't remember the name. You got some skills, but something about your shit just screams "industry nigga". I'll try to check out the other tracks within a week or so to give you my full opinion.

lol what does that even mean?

industry niggas let the record labels dictate what's hot/fly/real as opposed to in-the-street niggas who do the opposite and trust their own judgement

Lol. Let me know when you listen to my projects, man. You've got the wrong idea.

whatever you say...yeah i'll be sure to give you my review. gimme a week I'll get around to it

 

[TonyDubbz]

nba or rap was always my dream growing up. played ball all through school, but realized the league was probably out of reach by college. been bout my music career ever since. here's a semi-recent track I made off my mixtape:http://youtu.be/RhfZNEVryKU there's 11 tracks in all feel free to check me out

You sound bored/boring bruh.

Theres no excitement in your rhymes if you gonna focus on a career in music then atleast rap like you love that shit.

ok, so THAT'S all you got out of listening to me. The majority of people have told me I'm an incredible spitter. But I should overlook that for the sake of living up to your contrived notions of being 'exciting', right?

Link me to your other shit.

I'm just saying it was boring, I aint even listen to the whole thing because it was.. boring. Just constructive criticism bruh I rap too. Like Eyeronic said it sounds like you were reading frrom a paper but your rhymes were straight.

 

[dallas' 4 eva]

Growing up a Jehovah's Witness, I wanted to serve at Bethel, the world headquarters.

At one point, a rapper/producer

Wanted to go pro... Played 2 years of arena ball.. I wanna make a NFL team tho.. Then a college head football coach

You get a GOAT for that I grew up a Witness as well, brother.

I wanted to be a porn star growing up (yes I was always mannish). I didn't grow up to be one but I fuck like one.

 

[Lustchyld]

nba or rap was always my dream growing up. played ball all through school, but realized the league was probably out of reach by college. been bout my music career ever since. here's a semi-recent track I made off my mixtape:http://youtu.be/RhfZNEVryKU there's 11 tracks in all feel free to check me out

You sound bored/boring bruh.

Theres no excitement in your rhymes if you gonna focus on a career in music then atleast rap like you love that shit.

ok, so THAT'S all you got out of listening to me. The majority of people have told me I'm an incredible spitter. But I should overlook that for the sake of living up to your contrived notions of being 'exciting', right?

Link me to your other shit.

I'm just saying it was boring, I aint even listen to the whole thing because it was.. boring. Just constructive criticism bruh I rap too. Like Eyeronic said it sounds like you were reading frrom a paper but your rhymes were straight.

God damn man if you go to youtube and search "lustchyld" the tracks should pop up. That's lazy as a muthafucka..."link me to your other shit" smh. I might drop the links tomorrow or something if you still interested.

 

[skpjr78]

pilot/astronaut

that all went out the window when the air force told me i was color blind. im not doing bad but im nowhere near doing what i wanted to do. just doing shit to get a decent paycheck gets old after awhile

 

[TonyDubbz]

nba or rap was always my dream growing up. played ball all through school, but realized the league was probably out of reach by college. been bout my music career ever since. here's a semi-recent track I made off my mixtape:http://youtu.be/RhfZNEVryKU there's 11 tracks in all feel free to check me out

You sound bored/boring bruh.

Theres no excitement in your rhymes if you gonna focus on a career in music then atleast rap like you love that shit.

ok, so THAT'S all you got out of listening to me. The majority of people have told me I'm an incredible spitter. But I should overlook that for the sake of living up to your contrived notions of being 'exciting', right?

Link me to your other shit.

I'm just saying it was boring, I aint even listen to the whole thing because it was.. boring. Just constructive criticism bruh I rap too. Like Eyeronic said it sounds like you were reading frrom a paper but your rhymes were straight.

God damn man if you go to youtube and search "lustchyld" the tracks should pop up. That's lazy as a muthafucka..."link me to your other shit" smh. I might drop the links tomorrow or something if you still interested.

For somebody who wants a career in music you lazy bruh. You should be dropping those links anytime somebody ask to hear more of your material no matter who it is.

 

[Lustchyld]

Lol. Let me know when you listen to my projects, man. You've got the wrong idea.

Went to the site. Checked out the 3 tracks that were under 'music' and the tracks that you featured on in the 'video section'....my feelings are the same but good luck to you

 

[Lustchyld]

For somebody who wants a career in music you lazy bruh. You should be dropping those links anytime somebody ask to hear more of your material no matter who it is.

yeah whatever. I done dropped links to plenty people such as yourself without any real feedback but somehow missing out on your input, which likely isn't worth the effort since you didn't even listen to the other track all the way through, will make a difference in my career. How bout you drop links to YOUR shit and I'll do the same?

 

[Lustchyld]

damn it wouldn't let me edit...in my last 2 posts the first is @TheEyeronic1 and the second is @TonyDubbz

 

[Karl.]

Gangsta rapper or a fireman.