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[REAL_POETICAL]

wow......I'm speechless to how powerful this piece is...death is something that we all are not prepared for....from our time to go to enduring a fallen love...in the end it strengthens us and sheds an after joy that the fallen rise from the ashes to the sky....life begins as death ends...just reading this brings me back to a time when I experience death of a loved one and how much it had a domino effect...in the end i look at it as preparation to accept it when its time to bow out of the show called life....

A bond of love always, always still remains,

it's unbroken even in the darkness of death.

God's breath recreates every renewing life,

even as death reads again, it's Macbeth.

those lines alone gave me chills....bottom line amazing piece and god bless the fallen...i hope your time away from the wte is nothing but blessings and influence to rock this part of a fallen site...you are the epitome of why poetry is the key to life...why people write..and the reason the wte will never end despite those that come and go

always keep writing the words that sheds light to the dark called poetry my fellow poetress

peace

 

[Tupacfan]

Thanks for the props on this piece real p,

I was hesistant to share this personal piece with ya'll but you know I had to vent somewhere..

Indeed, death is something hard, especially when you know it wasnt the persons time and their life was taken in a blink of an eye.. In fact its something im tryna cope with, but I believe I can overcome, its a testament I'm going through and in the end I shall prevail.. I just hope nothing traggic is thrown my way hereon after..

This drop right here is actually longer, I just share a piece of it with ya'll.. Im glad you can relate and feel this joint too! Thanks again for reading and sharing your thoughts on this topic as its deeper than tree roots..

Peace my fellow poet! Much blessings your way...

 

[Legend24]

This was a great piece... I remember reading it about a week ago but I guess I forgot to comment.

Your stuff is too real; My next step as a writer is to try and open up like this on a track. Keep up the great work.

 

[Tupacfan]

Thanks for dropping on in an taking the time to comment legend!

Feedback is always appreciated. And I'd love to get on a track and drop a few verses in the near future.. It will be part of my healing process with just everything I been thru this year so thanks for the advice .. and my material is all spoken from real life experinces, nothing sugar coated or fictional.. Again Thanks Legend!

Peace and serenity!

 

[Tupacfan]

Dang, a moment of reflection from last year.. and somehow thru the mist of all this, i'm still here....

 

[aijalon]

This is really heartfelt.
My apologies for your loss.
They say that the poet thrives in moments of great pain.
Creativity does but I can tell that your heart is heavy.

Keep writing as it's therapeutic. You did your people justice in this piece

 

[Tupacfan]

This is really heartfelt.

My apologies for your loss.

They say that the poet thrives in moments of great pain.

Creativity does but I can tell that your heart is heavy.

Keep writing as it's therapeutic. You did your people justice in this piece

Thank you for commenting.

That saying is actually very relevant Aijion.. Glad you can capture my bleakest moments in this piece.

peace!