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its over: 2012!;1277895 said:
pilot-to-control tower, pilot-to-control tower, this is Capt. P-Dogg piloting DyckrydyngAirlines, and arriving right on time...

I didn't know they let mental patients use computers over there .
 
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Genstasia, no shots, but why u looking like a dike dude on your mixtape cover, are u a butch? N can u put this song on youtube, soo I can check it out...
 
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I hate the autotune, but it's an alright song. You need to work on your delivery, your flow isn't bad.
 
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This beat goes hard....umm the hook im not realy feelin it the first guy rappinn hes coo i like his voice... Ughh i cant stand audio tune,,the second due he should have not came in liek that..oh shyt but his flow is coo he got a good voice but naw hes gonna have to come harder than this..specialy wit that voice...ok you need to find a diff type of flow cause you sort of sound like just another female tryna rap your energy is realy good and its there but i think u need to find your flow (anytime a woman is on atrack wit dudes she must come harder) work on ridein the beat..other than that i like the song you guys did a good job!
 
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the first to dudes carried the track tbh

the mix with your vocals wasn't great imo, taking awaya lot of what you were saying...try remixing it maybe?

nice beat and decent chorus too
 
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lol now this is much betta herr gen u betta make sure u post that mixtape on herr cuz i wanna hear them solo trakz from u & when r u gonna drop a pik??? no simp or is that mixtape cover pik all we get? lol
 
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PimpMVP;1278159 said:
I fuck with everyone...but listen to the song and give your honest opinion and see if our comments match

I already gave it, she needs practice.
 
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its over: 2012!;1278171 said:
fucc these haters and don't let them change your styles, gen, I've not even listened to your raps yet and still I love what you doing;

...it don't get more gutta than that!

hater, singular not plural...only pimp has done anything remotely close to hating and you on the other hand literally dick rode her before you listened...no offense but bruh...
 
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Most music sounds the same nowadays. The hook is sickening.

Gen's verse could be more focused...all that addressing imaginary haters and other people is unnecessary IMO.
 
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its over: 2012!;1278264 said:
you're an untalented lame, so you won't comprehend
respecting someone's courage to display what's within:
to show pride in their ability, or whatever's fulfilling thee
You ain't feeling me bcuz of ya cowardice-virility

lol these lil raps are cute but don't call me "untalented" because i know i can out flow you and song for song would murk you out
 
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Its Aight Gen...You need To put more passion in your rap and ride the beat better..Don't Stop,Keep getting better..Practice everyday
 
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its over: 2012!;1278314 said:
niggu. please. you couldn't murk me, anywhere
so back away from keyboard/return to child-care
perhaps on AHH.com you win/where realness is hated
As fakeness, like yours, is highly-celebrated

your foolish blood...see you when the tape drops...if it ever does
 
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genstasia;1278389 said:
Thought i did ride the beat being that i hit every snap on it... I guess it's more than being one with the beat...

Honestly, you were the weakest part of the track. No hate, but it woulda been better w/o you
 
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genstasia;1278389 said:
Thought i did ride the beat being that i hit every snap on it... I guess it's more than being one with the beat...

Im impressed, this is the best one that you posted so far.

The mixing and levels sound alot better than the others
the first cat came nice....wasnt feeling the second cat
the levels were off and uneven on the second verse too
they started your fade-out too early on your verse
the lows need to be brought up too.

Im not nit-picking I know its a rough-draft, and the mixing issues aside its a cool track.
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I love your voice and your flow but they put the wrong effects on your voice, you will sound better with just a little delay and some layered vocals and ad-libs.

Keep doing what you do, I can see the improvement.

*Salutes the "General"*


 
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