The Official Post Your Music Thread *****New Rules Inside****

[FlyFreeCt]

Now this is a track I finished a few weeks ago, and it's my first single in over a year, so I'd like feedback:
http://goo.gl/pCJ2P7

Yea I felt the beat with the "Dead Presidents" sample...You don't seem to be comfortable on the mic though, you need alot more repetition. I've heard alot worse lyrically though...Once you practice alot more "flow wise" you'll be ok...Also I think you need to find a style that would be easier to deliver your bars cuz it sounds like you're trying to spit like whoever your favorite artist is, as opposed to finding "you"...That's my honest opinion, keep workin at it man...

My new video that I just dropped...Check it out.

This was tight watching and listening made me wanna step my audio & visual level up with this music shit. Like I said song was straight got your flow down packed, stayed within the concept and hook blended in nice as well, dope shit.

Excuse the quality I'm working with random daw's right now...
https://soundcloud.com/bizbilla/cigarillo-slim-prod-by-mj-nichols

thanks man. I appreciate the feedback.

 

[FlyFreeCt]

Now this is a track I finished a few weeks ago, and it's my first single in over a year, so I'd like feedback:
http://goo.gl/pCJ2P7

Yea I felt the beat with the "Dead Presidents" sample...You don't seem to be comfortable on the mic though, you need alot more repetition. I've heard alot worse lyrically though...Once you practice alot more "flow wise" you'll be ok...Also I think you need to find a style that would be easier to deliver your bars cuz it sounds like you're trying to spit like whoever your favorite artist is, as opposed to finding "you"...That's my honest opinion, keep workin at it man...

My new video that I just dropped...Check it out.

This was tight watching and listening made me wanna step my audio & visual level up with this music shit. Like I said song was straight got your flow down packed, stayed within the concept and hook blended in nice as well, dope shit.

Excuse the quality I'm working with random daw's right now...
https://soundcloud.com/bizbilla/cigarillo-slim-prod-by-mj-nichols

Your soundcloud link is broken so I couldn't hear your track. I instead watched the previous entry, the CTK video. I liked it! But it was a bit complicated. I feel after seeing the ending I need to watch the whole thing again. Solid "my girl is down" track.

Here' s track I did on the cyber-punk tip called Metropolis:

Basically, she's my wife and he's my best friend...When I see the hotel key fall out of his pocket in the beginning and see the same key in her purse, of course I automatically assume that she's cheating...However what I don't know is that they are both undercover cops and they're tryna bring me down because of all the criminalistic things they assume i'm doing...Which is why at the beginning he's asking me "when are you gonna tell her about "things" you're doing"..Basically tryna get me to talk....So at the end I go to the room expecting to catch them cheating and automatically shoot him when I see him, and then hesitate and shoot her as she shoots me....That's when I figured out who they really were when I walked over to the board with the alleged evidence.

 

[Cigarello Slim]

Now this is a track I finished a few weeks ago, and it's my first single in over a year, so I'd like feedback:
http://goo.gl/pCJ2P7

Yea I felt the beat with the "Dead Presidents" sample...You don't seem to be comfortable on the mic though, you need alot more repetition. I've heard alot worse lyrically though...Once you practice alot more "flow wise" you'll be ok...Also I think you need to find a style that would be easier to deliver your bars cuz it sounds like you're trying to spit like whoever your favorite artist is, as opposed to finding "you"...That's my honest opinion, keep workin at it man...

My new video that I just dropped...Check it out.

This was tight watching and listening made me wanna step my audio & visual level up with this music shit. Like I said song was straight got your flow down packed, stayed within the concept and hook blended in nice as well, dope shit.

Excuse the quality I'm working with random daw's right now...
https://soundcloud.com/bizbilla/cigarillo-slim-prod-by-mj-nichols

Your soundcloud link is broken so I couldn't hear your track. I instead watched the previous entry, the CTK video. I liked it! But it was a bit complicated. I feel after seeing the ending I need to watch the whole thing again. Solid "my girl is down" track.

Here' s track I did on the cyber-punk tip called Metropolis:

Fixed that linkhttps://soundcloud.com/bizbilla/cigarillo-slim-prod-by-mj-nichols

I wasn't crazy about the beat but you made up for that by having a decent flow. Alot of the sound effects were overlapping the lyrics in the verse so some lines went over my head but I did like the Metropolis concept.

 

[carolinaboi]

^Cigarillo, thats a smooth beat. Damn that's a smooth sick beat. Flow was on point on hook and verses. Got me calling round for some og ku..Real chill man. Overall quality production.

here's a sneak peak track i just did today

[youtube]MAd8xpWsBxk[/youtube]

 

[EarPlug0128]

@smp4life I thought your track was dope and I really love that synth bass line too. The song sounds like something that would fit a Sci-Fi soundtrack. My only thing is that the vocals could have set in the mix a bit higher but enjoyed it. Here's a remix I did to Katy Perry's This Is How We Do
https://m.soundcloud.com/instereo28/instereo-katy-perry-this-is-how-we-do-high-order-remix

 

[dj pre-k]

i can dig it

tha percussion is tight and i could definitely hear some raps over tha track

you lodt me when it went all dubstep-ish tho

heres my new track
https://soundcloud.com/pre-k-2/parking-lot-music

 

[loch121]

I have a new project dropping called Afro American Psycho where I'm dropping a song a week until I drop it as a whole. I would love get some support on the project.This is the 1st song I'm dropping called "Aristaraps", based on the Aristocrats joke.Thanks

Loch "Aristaraps"http://www.reverbnation.com/q/5ln50w

 

[5th Letter]

@loch121 review the previous song.

 

[loch121]

@loch121 review the previous song.

Cool.Almost forgot rushing

i can dig it

tha percussion is tight and i could definitely hear some raps over tha track

you lodt me when it went all dubstep-ish tho

heres my new track
https://soundcloud.com/pre-k-2/parking-lot-music

I like the beat.

Got a real Rnb feel.Kinda reminds me of something Nelly would do.

This isn't really for me.It's decent.It's on beat and has some type of melody.

It's obviously made for cars and radio.it's not my style really honestly.

I think the raps could be better.

 

[loch121]

@"Cigarello Slim" Yeah that track is nice.Reminds me of some Texas type shit.I fuck with it.

 

[loch121]

This is the 2nd song dropping from Loch's Afro American Psycho project.This is a song loosely based on the confession scene from American Psycho.

https://soundcloud.com/loch-last-flip/heaven-knows

 

[G.Avant]

@loch that aristarap song is decent. I like the satire towards the industry. It's not really my type of production though.

Here's a beat I finished like a few weeks ago that I could hear somebody like J. Cole on or something. Let me know what yall think.

 

[RepUrCity]

@Gavant Nice track, like the groove and the change ups. Drum pattern was tight and went well with the groove.

Here's a song off debut mixtape of an artist out of Texas I'm working with. Dre Austin...he's a problem.
https://soundcloud.com/andre_austin...uiat?in=andre_austin/sets/dre-austin-nception

 

[dj pre-k]

^he can obviously rap, but hes stuck in being a lyrical stereotype of "now-a-days" rappers

heres a track of mine
https://soundcloud.com/pre-k-2/all-day

 

[RepUrCity]

@dj pre-k if you're going to be negative in your commentary at least make sure your own sh%# is on point...everything about you is cliche...from tha ground up...here's one more for you..."These Nigga$ Ain't Got It" You should be able to relate...

 

[5th Letter]

@dj pre-k if you're going to be negative in your commentary at least make sure you're own sh%# is on point...everything about you is cliche...from tha ground up...here's one more for you..."These Nigga$ Ain't Got It" You should be able to relate...

You're dope, good flow, good lyrics your song is mixed down properly as well. Keep grinding.

 

[loch121]

@dj pre-k if you're going to be negative in your commentary at least make sure you're own sh%# is on point...everything about you is cliche...from tha ground up...here's one more for you..."These Nigga$ Ain't Got It" You should be able to relate...

Yeah this song is dope.Keep grinding.i could see this rocking live.

This is the 3rd song from my project Afro American Psycho called "Woke up".I'm putting my youtube and soundcloud so if you're on soundcloud follow me and I got you back.And on youtube,subscribe and I got you back,just let me know your youtube.I already follow a lot of ppl on here.
https://soundcloud.com/loch-last-flip
=youtu.be

 

[dj pre-k]

@RepUrCity dont get your feelings hurt over my opinion

@loch121 if youre tryna go tha horrorcore story route i can dig it.

personally it gets boring after a while, but the ending wasnt bad

heres my newest shit
https://soundcloud.com/pre-k-2/my-way

 

[loch121]

@RepUrCity dont get your feelings hurt over my opinion

@loch121 if youre tryna go tha horrorcore story route i can dig it.

personally it gets boring after a while, but the ending wasnt bad

heres my newest shit
https://soundcloud.com/pre-k-2/my-way

I always liked that sample.Nas used it.You could use a more energetic vocals,sharper lyrics and you should have left that Suge Knight punchline alone unless you was gonna really say something clever about that.

Loch Afro American Psycho music video snippets.Follow my IG too
https://instagram.com/p/1ROaXAkjKw/?taken-by=loch121
https://instagram.com/p/1RH3WlkjAa/?taken-by=loch121

 

[loch121]

#Loch #AfroAmericanpsycho #music #video #snippet #3 Follow me on IG @Loch121https://instagram.com/p/1ZaK7zEjCd/?taken-by=loch121