I can dig the concept of "not mine", however, the mix could be better. Consider that I'm listening to it on my computer so I can't speak on how its sounds in a club or in my whip. Vocals don't seem to be melted into the track, I'm getting a "home studio" feel out of it mane. Moving and shakin out here with the big boys, if you're not already, I would suggest creating the track at the crib studio, and then sending the (track out) to a "pro" studio, and lacin the vocals there for the full mix and master.
I'm currently working with Reasons 7.0, pro tools, and IMAC, which gets very good sound in my opinion, but after I'm done with the track, I send the (track out) to an established spot, catch the flight and lace the final song there. I never attempt to do the whole run at the house (not sayin thats what you did, but it sounds like it).
With that said, enclosed is the instrumental for our latest release, "Learjets no Luggage", featuring ScottyAtl, StonetheButcha, CharlieWise, and myself. After you all taste the instrumental, I'll post the video. Over here at KingMadeMusic, we call it "PlayboyFresh whip music", not too much trap or club tracks from us. We're moving across all digital media, to include Amazon, iTunes, etc, not doing half bad. Its said you should promote a single for six to nine months, so its a fire and forget (about sales) right now, just straight promo and I'll check sells in a few months to see if I grabbed any supplemental income off of it. I just now started posting music to sound cloud as of a few days ago. Hope ya'll enjoy. One.
https://soundcloud.com/kingmademusic/learjets-no-luggage