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French-Bad-Boy
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bigmackrapper;7107568 said:
Your vocoder hook is good, I like it. And your video clip is clean. But maybe you need to add more dynamic transitions on rolling snares and high hats. Except this, it's good and the next song at the end of the video seems great.
So I post my first music in this thread below, it's an instrumental, I need reviews on it. Thanks!
=youtu.be
Dj Doo Wop Mixtapes Not Dead pt 2 mixtape feat. my Drake Trophies freestyle .Also feat. Redman Joe Budden AZ Troy Ave,Mop,Murda Mook,Action Bronson,Camron,Scarface, Ransom,Raekwon and more
http://www.mixcloud.com/doo-wop/doo-wop-mixtapes-not-dead-pt-2/
https://soundcloud.com/toigirl/doo-wop-mixtapes-not-dead-pt-2-full-mix
http://www.mixcloud.com/doo-wop/doo-wop-mixtapes-not-dead-pt-2/
https://soundcloud.com/toigirl/doo-wop-mixtapes-not-dead-pt-2-full-mix
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Cigarello Slim
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French-Bad-Boy;7266094 said:bigmackrapper;7107568 said:
Your vocoder hook is good, I like it. And your video clip is clean. But maybe you need to add more dynamic transitions on rolling snares and high hats. Except this, it's good and the next song at the end of the video seems great.
So I post my first music in this thread below, it's an instrumental, I need reviews on it. Thanks!
=youtu.be
When I saw the title I was expecting some darker sounds but the beat is catchy, a bit repetitive but I think it's a good canvas to paint lyrics over.
So my boy out here in Atlanta dropped a tape, I usually don't spit over down south type beats but he got me out of my comfort zone on the tracks he had me on, here's one...
http://soundcloud.com/l-e-s-musichead/skinny-niggabiz-ft-bamm
PS: shouts to @loch121 that feedback u gave has made a difference.
Cigarello Slim;7272822 said:French-Bad-Boy;7266094 said:bigmackrapper;7107568 said:
Your vocoder hook is good, I like it. And your video clip is clean. But maybe you need to add more dynamic transitions on rolling snares and high hats. Except this, it's good and the next song at the end of the video seems great.
So I post my first music in this thread below, it's an instrumental, I need reviews on it. Thanks!
=youtu.be
When I saw the title I was expecting some darker sounds but the beat is catchy, a bit repetitive but I think it's a good canvas to paint lyrics over.
So my boy out here in Atlanta dropped a tape, I usually don't spit over down south type beats but he got me out of my comfort zone on the tracks he had me on, here's one...
http://soundcloud.com/l-e-s-musichead/skinny-niggabiz-ft-bamm
PS: shouts to @loch121 that feedback u gave has made a difference.
Glad it could be of some help.Just my opinion
5th Letter
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You gotta review a previous song.
French-Bad-Boy
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Cigarello Slim;7272822 said:
Thank you for your review. You're right, it's rather repetitive. I need to add more variation.
loch121;7302267 said:
Thought it was a dope freestyle. Did think it started of a tad bit slow and too much intro for my taste but it picked up considerably about 4 bars in and built momentum from that point. Im just not a fan of a gang of shout outs but other than that the shit's certified.
heres my shit
im on the first verse and the second part of the hook
https://soundcloud.com/pre-k-2/tha-best-ssgz-pre-k-x-chance-t
im always workin so anybody message me for collabs
im on the first verse and the second part of the hook
https://soundcloud.com/pre-k-2/tha-best-ssgz-pre-k-x-chance-t
im always workin so anybody message me for collabs
French-Bad-Boy
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dj pre-k;7316766 said:
I'm french so I don't understand all your lyrics but the beat is good and I like your "lazy" flow. With a better mic it will be a very good track. Keep going like that dude.
So I post my second music on this thread but it's not rap music. I don't give a fuck! lol
Wind in my hair:
https://soundcloud.com/white-house-bn/wind-in-my-hair
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Louis Devinear
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French-Bad-Boy;7317896 said:
Louis Devinear
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To be honest the beat. Was cool reminded me of some black eyed peas shit. I give you credit for stepping out the box. Most dudes won't do it. I actually have pop record but I'll never post it. Cool shit though bro.
I don't spam the board either, I hardly post. I'm an artist not national but I respect the craft of making music. This shit is very hard so tip my cap to you guys. The track I put up got taking down. The first track I put up I @ a lot you dudes and gave positive yet no listens. I lurk this board for the longest and some of you have valid intention and opinions. I've actually been lurking since 07. Facts don't have it in me to debate with dudes who have very biased opinions. Could name names but it's pointless like some you guys opinion. I say all that to say this. This is suppose to be a progress. Correct? So if you hear something dope let it be known. If it's not let it be known. Correction is never punishment. The two dopest artist on this board is @nmcfly @loch. The rest should could stand to work on their craft. Sorry bout the long post. Oh and when it comes to music awareness and how in this bitch @sion and @5thletter are official.
This old shit let me know what's good. Peace.
https://soundcloud.com/devinear84/doin-it
I don't spam the board either, I hardly post. I'm an artist not national but I respect the craft of making music. This shit is very hard so tip my cap to you guys. The track I put up got taking down. The first track I put up I @ a lot you dudes and gave positive yet no listens. I lurk this board for the longest and some of you have valid intention and opinions. I've actually been lurking since 07. Facts don't have it in me to debate with dudes who have very biased opinions. Could name names but it's pointless like some you guys opinion. I say all that to say this. This is suppose to be a progress. Correct? So if you hear something dope let it be known. If it's not let it be known. Correction is never punishment. The two dopest artist on this board is @nmcfly @loch. The rest should could stand to work on their craft. Sorry bout the long post. Oh and when it comes to music awareness and how in this bitch @sion and @5thletter are official.
This old shit let me know what's good. Peace.
https://soundcloud.com/devinear84/doin-it
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