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Peezy_Jenkins;6232974 said:
got damn niggas just skipped over reviewin my shit lol, i had to take a song down anyway tho from my original post in here

heres 2 of my favs from my last mixtape, and my remix of Control


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End of Story was dope. I'm all Control'd out so I didnt vibe as hard with the Control remix but you was spitting on that jawn.

Can someone embed Soundcloud music?

www.soundcloud.com/truegodimmortal
 
TrueGodHS I'm listening to you,now . The songs are really dope and fresh. They are mixed really well. You def have a place in hiphop.

I really think that piece of me is beautiful. I can feel your lyrics in this one. It paints a really good picture.

American Ghetto is really a dark romp through the ghetto, in the 90s(?). I def feel this one 100%. I also like the gil scot sample. Dope stuff for sure.

Zuri's song is cool. It's a really dope sound and it also is very descriptive. A lot of new school cats try to be descriptive, but it comes off as fake or forced. This seems honest and sincere

Your lyrics are reflective and deep. Your beats are classic yet new sounding. I'm defiantly going to follow you on soundcloud.

here's my new song. It's a trap beat, but it's not to be rapped over, just listened to/mixed with other instrumental. Think of it as dubstep meets rap beats.
https://soundcloud.com/drgoo/surgery-single-from-my
 
Checked out that Surgery from Drogo, I'm feeling the beats, checking out Eyerone right now. New track here off Soul Revival 2 as well
https://soundcloud.com/truegodimmortal/authentic

Eyerone- That One Time joint is going hard. I fucks with it. The beat for Debt is my type of shit right there homie. Fucks with that and the 7Five too. You got some dope ass shit man.
 
True God, I love "piece of me." takes soul to rap truths about your kids. I think you could improve a bit by varying up your flow, speedin it up early in the song, before slowin back down, or speedin up the chorus, or somethin.

It's dope though, and you do speed up after the hook. How fast can you get? showcasing multiple different speeds could get peoples' attention. keep up the good work!
http://rapgenius.com/Scorpio-hands-off-syria-anti-war-protest-rap-live-on-september-11-2013-lyrics
 
TrueGodHS;6265556 said:
Checked out that Surgery from Drogo, I'm feeling the beats, checking out Eyerone right now. New track here off Soul Revival 2 as well
https://soundcloud.com/truegodimmortal/authentic

Eyerone- That One Time joint is going hard. I fucks with it. The beat for Debt is my type of shit right there homie. Fucks with that and the 7Five too. You got some dope ass shit man.

That "Authenic" joint is dope, nice beat, thoughtful lyrics and a steady flow. Good shit.

Here goes a freestyle I did while playing Xbox with the homies.

"The Execution Freestyle"
https://soundcloud.com/bizbilla/the-execution-freestyle

Looking for feedback, 'preciate it.

Excuse the quality we were drunk and high out of our mind.
 
zor;6268958 said:
True God, I love "piece of me." takes soul to rap truths about your kids. I think you could improve a bit by varying up your flow, speedin it up early in the song, before slowin back down, or speedin up the chorus, or somethin.

It's dope though, and you do speed up after the hook. How fast can you get? showcasing multiple different speeds could get peoples' attention. keep up the good work!
http://rapgenius.com/Scorpio-hands-off-syria-anti-war-protest-rap-live-on-september-11-2013-lyrics

I have a varied flow, but my albums tend to be on some storytelling shit, which is why it's like that. I can do a fast flow like Bone Thugs and Twista, but honestly? It just never fits for the cohesiveness of my album to be real. Mixtapes I've done it on though.

Checking out the Execution freestyle now and the Hands Off joint.

The Hands off joint lyrically was on point.

The Execution joint was lyrically on point, the sound quality of course was off, but I'm sure when you get back on that shit, you gon be good

 
zor;6268958 said:
True God, I love "piece of me." takes soul to rap truths about your kids. I think you could improve a bit by varying up your flow, speedin it up early in the song, before slowin back down, or speedin up the chorus, or somethin.

It's dope though, and you do speed up after the hook. How fast can you get? showcasing multiple different speeds could get peoples' attention. keep up the good work!
http://rapgenius.com/Scorpio-hands-off-syria-anti-war-protest-rap-live-on-september-11-2013-lyrics

The lyrics on this one were thought provoking but the delivery killed it for me it's all over the place, the violin was a nice touch though.

This track I'm posting is not from me but my brother from another mother Hannibal King off of his upcoming project "Floral Print"
 
Cigarillo Slim I'm fucking with your brothers lyrics could work on the flow tho but lyrics are dope


This right here is my new video first one I've ever made "Cruise & loh - Cream" check the mixtape out as well on Datpiff under "The Debut"
 
VlBurrough;6330175 said:
Cigarillo Slim I'm fucking with your brothers lyrics could work on the flow tho but lyrics are dope


This right here is my new video first one I've ever made "Cruise & loh - Cream" check the mixtape out as well on Datpiff under "The Debut"


The beat cool, but there's not much to the lyrics and the content though. I figure yall was aiming for more of a vibe out track and for that purpose it's solid. Which one are you?
 
G.Avant;6371260 said:
VlBurrough;6330175 said:
Cigarillo Slim I'm fucking with your brothers lyrics could work on the flow tho but lyrics are dope


This right here is my new video first one I've ever made "Cruise & loh - Cream" check the mixtape out as well on Datpiff under "The Debut"


The beat cool, but there's not much to the lyrics and the content though. I figure yall was aiming for more of a vibe out track and for that purpose it's solid. Which one are you?


Nice "Vibe out track"...Agree with the poster about it not being very deep content wise, but I think it was intended to be a track to just ride to...Beat is nice and the video fits the concept,,,Flows were nice too...I'd bump it in the right setting...Overall a 6/10..better than average.
 
FlyFreeCt;6390359 said:
G.Avant;6371260 said:
VlBurrough;6330175 said:
Cigarillo Slim I'm fucking with your brothers lyrics could work on the flow tho but lyrics are dope


This right here is my new video first one I've ever made "Cruise & loh - Cream" check the mixtape out as well on Datpiff under "The Debut"


The beat cool, but there's not much to the lyrics and the content though. I figure yall was aiming for more of a vibe out track and for that purpose it's solid. Which one are you?


Nice "Vibe out track"...Agree with the poster about it not being very deep content wise, but I think it was intended to be a track to just ride to...Beat is nice and the video fits the concept,,,Flows were nice too...I'd bump it in the right setting...Overall a 6/10..better than average.


i hate that style of beat. I wish there was a different beat the flow on the 1st verse tho >>> this is the joint i'm talking about the other video doesn't playhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=Nz1szjxgNss
 
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@n.mcfly I went into listening to this with the worst expectations because you know hella niggas be trash, but this was honestly cool,no BS. I like the beat. Hook could be tighter, but the bars are right.

My video,mixtape,and links already in the sig and I'm still promoting them, but I invite you all to our new sitehttp://ebonicallyspeaking.com where I'm doing some writing.

We are also going to be offering feats. to indie artists so holler at me if you want music,video,interviews, and etc posted
 
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loch121;6416464 said:
@n.mcfly I went into listening to this with the worst expectations because you know hella niggas be trash, but this was honestly cool,no BS. I like the beat. Hook could be tighter, but the bars are right.

My video,mixtape,and links already in the sig and I'm still promoting them, but I invite you all to our new sitehttp://ebonicallyspeaking where I'm doing some writing.

We are also going to be offering feats. to indie artists so holler at me if you want music,video,interviews, and etc posted

yooooo this video was funny as hell smh your a fool lmao that flow ate that beat too dope shit lmao smh the wack rapper video shoot tho lmao @loch121
 
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