Raw-Material -vs- iMpIoDez

[RiGGA]

16 lines.
50 posts to vote. Votes must be explained.
No feeding, no biting, no editing verses after second person has dropped.
5 votes to win. 3-0 KO rule. Whoever has the most votes after 2 weeks wins if neither battler has 5 votes yet.

Do you want to make a verse due date? Thursday night by midnight ET? or Friday? It's up to you.

son it takes me like an hour to make a verse, and maybe another hour or so for revisions. So it all depends on how long you need to write it. I'm ready whenever....mic check

oh and vote on this joint yo http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?119433-Love-Yal-vs-iMpIoDez

 

[raw-material_ahh]

son it takes me like an hour to make a verse, and maybe another hour or so for revisions. So it all depends on how long you need to write it. I'm ready whenever....mic check

oh and vote on this joint yo http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?119433-Love-Yal-vs-iMpIoDez

Aight. Since I'm just getting on and IDK if you are, then Friday, tomorrow, by midnigt ET.

 

[raw-material_ahh]

This boy is a coward cuz my punches like planes enter towers/

Cuz this bitch is going down like gays in the shower/~

I'm the pound-for-pound scrapper and he's just another "underground rapper"../

When he digs his own grave cuz spitting that weak shit makes you drown faster/~

Moving the force forward is the only time you'll see me "break my lines"/

Bout to invade your territory with atom bombs, fucked up your internet or should I say "state of mind"?/~

Won't let this ho hide, every punch I spit connects and spreads his head/

Cuz like the old Nikes I just threw away, you getting "checked" and left for dead/~

This dude is "gassed" up, bet if I put Mentos down his neck, his body implodes (iMpIoDez)/

That's the only way he spits sick looking like cum driven nymphos/~

I'm looking at a dead man, punches over your head like sweatbands/

Cuz I'm so sick, I always gotta lay down, shitting on you homie like bed pans/~

No one is fading me dumb fuck, not "weak in force" like your ladies be/

First battled love yal and now me? He's the new LE dump truck, dropping trash a few days a week/~

Feel like I'm battling Freddy Krueger cuz this dude afraid of the way my flames spit/

And people thinking I'm "Psycho" cuz I killed you with an "insane script"/~

 

[RiGGA]

Check this, expect this…Hexes sever ya nexus
Aimin at ya core, pull the .44 bangin’ from the Lexus

Bodies sprawled out over the floor
Nigga say he eatin but to me he piss poor

barely saw some cereal but tryna talk imperial
Metrics is in use when dealing with raw material

Lead tricks execute I aint known to be hospitable
I spit at you…listen dude, mommy shoulda finished you

Chemicals not in ya physical, that shit don’t mix
In heat ya pistol drew but won’t let the chrome dispense

Son Get shown some bricks, watch dem boys Hit lickss
in ya spot, shot, for packages..still the block, hot, we savages

for cabbages, and speaking of the green shit
I’m smoking sticky weed on some trippy fiend shit

But back to the topic, this faggot’s soft as Downy magic
He’ll never stop, cock it and pop it, pussier than beauty pageants

 

[raw-material_ahh]

Cool. Uppin for votes.

 

[raw-material_ahh]

We need some votes on this battle. Up!

 

[bbkg79]

1 vote for Raw

 

[love yal]

Nice battle!

Favorite line by Raw-Material - feel like I'm battling Freddy Krueger cuz this dude affraid of the way my flames spit
And people thinking I'm psycho cuz I killed you with an insane script.

Favorite line by iMpIodez- But back to topic this faggot soft as downy magic
He'll never stop, cock it and pop it, pussier than beauty pegant.

Flow-~Raw
Rhymes-Tie
Punches-Raw
Structures-Tie
Metaphor-Raw
Mulites- tie
Vocab-tie

Good battle, verses were good from both..keep up the good work..thanks for letting me vote.
My vote: Raw-Material

 

[gns]

vote for the implode guy. reason: he was better

 

[Vader_F_Kennedy]

Raw............................

 

[thedesolateone]

votes must be explained

 

[RiGGA]

lol honestly I rushed my verse so I can't exactly blame people for voting raw, but at least explain why...

 

[white715]

it would help if ya post the instrumental yall wrote to

 

[raw-material_ahh]

it would help if ya post the instrumental yall wrote to

IDK about him, but I didn't write to an instrumental. This was just a text battle, my 16 lines against his 16 lines. Then people jump in and vote based off the lyrics solely; metaphors, punches, rhyming, creativity, wordplay, best verse, just whatever you can think of.

And I agree with iMpIoDez, if you take the time to vote, at least explain why you voted that way BC anyone can hop in and say, "I vote for this guy BC he was better." How was he better and how was I better?

 

[RiGGA]

I wrote to Araab Muzik "I Got Em Hands Down"

EDIT: yeah tell these lil niggas son...(lol)

 

[coopersgirl]

i would vote but I don't have 50 posts, nice battle though

 

[jonlakadeadmic]

as a diss ill go Raw

but on some shit i could hear in a actual song, id go with the other dude

 

[MC The Rapper]

I vote the dude with the weed avi because his shit flowed better

 

[cobbland]

Raw's flowed better, but iMpIoDez had some nice lines, though it could have been longer.

 

[damnkp]

i gotta go with raw material. more punches and metaphors. but implodez was good as well. more radio ready