Nightmares vs Legend24

[Legend24]

Good luck. I can have mine done by tonight.

 

[Legend24]

Done mine, I can post it now if you want... just let me know when.

 

[C.Melendez]

*lurking in the corner*

 

[Nightmares]

I'm at work and have half a verse done but it's at home so when I get off, I will finish it and post it later this evening. Good luck.

 

[Nightmares]

If you see this dude..warn a brotha/
Cuz I got warrants..and he's more a sucka/2
That reminds me of a cop that was born a "mother", what's more, he suffas../
Cuz he was never in charge, i'm a "bad mofo", so i'm born to fuck ya/4
Ima "use you to get mine" like a porno rubba/
Cuz I could "beat you all day" like go to war with drummas/6
"Legend 24" you'll suffa this year like Kobe when I bring the "Heat"/
Ima three headed monster, never gonna lose when I "King" the beat/8
I'm ending you at the beginning, your raps are self-destructing, especially tonight/
Cuz the only way you "make a path to the top" is with a machete on a hike/10
Did I mention... he's second ..to my rhymes, so attractive-and-they-know../
He's threatened.. What Legend?... His "fire has been extinct" like an inactive-volcano/12
I've never seen anyone "spit more dry" than than the last time his girlfriend literally gave me a BLOW job/
This is so "UNexciting" like my dick turning into a raisin when her shirt go off/14
I'd rather battle it's over: 2012, at least he sounds half smart/
This "jackass is more stupid" than Johnny Knoxville reading a graph chart/16
I'll turn you into a bigger sore loser and have you waking up sweating from Nightmares/
And saying "I'm scared" then you'll need somebody to hold your hand like childcare/18
Get some light air, I'll fly there to Toronto for your funeral because I care/
After I "destroy your life without your knowledge" like spy-ware/20

 

[C.Melendez]

someone wakes me up when this is over

 

[Legend24]

If you see this dude..warn a brotha/
Cuz I got warrants..and he's more a sucka/
That reminds me of a cop that was born a "mother", what's more, he suffas../
Cuz he was never in charge, i'm a "bad mofo", so i'm born to fuck ya/
Ima "use you to get mine" like a porno rubba/
Cuz I could "beat you all day" like go to war with drummas/
"Legend 24" you'll suffa this year like Kobe when I bring the "Heat"/
Ima three headed monster, never gonna lose when I "King" the beat/
I'm ending you at the beginning, your raps are self-destructing, especially tonight/
Cuz the only way you "make a path to the top" is with a machete on a hike/

Let me take this new cat in and initiate him
Make him regret his decision to offer his participation
I pawn rooks, so mate, check your ego
Cause ain't no white knight coming to be your hero
I dodge your lines like a former coke fiend institutionalized
Then relapse for this appearance and start abusing your rhymes
You ain't no nightmare dawg, you unicorns and rainbows
About as harmless as a police officer in plain clothes
Your mother gave birth to you, afterwards, she couldn't sleep
That's about the closest you've ever come to haunting dreams
You been reclusive ever since, I'm here to crack you open
Keep you living in your fears, truer words have never been spoken
You joined the IC looking for acceptance
I regret to inform you that you've been misdirected
I'm that demon that you dread, the monster under your bed
I'm your motherfuckin nightmare pullin inception in your head
Implanting you with an idea making you believe you can defeat me
You ain't dreaming no more, in this world, you can't beat me
You're still playin my game even if I infiltrate your city there
Shut down the lights in your head so have a good night-mayor (nightmare).

 

[C.Melendez]

1 round??? well my vote goes to legend 24....do I really have to say why? this was a landslide

 

[Legend24]

1 round??? well my vote goes to legend 24....do I really have to say why? this was a landslide

1 round. Gotta follow the voting rules in the original post for them to count. So yea, you have to give an explanation.

 

[C.Melendez]

hmmmm..honestly the only puncline I liked in there was the porn rubber shit...wasn't all that great but hey

2 the only other real punchline after that was the kobe heat joint...and since we don't know who'll win i can't agree with it (fan of neither team but at least let them play 1st)

with that being said legend verse way better structure...was forced and also had punchlines that was pretty good

 

[Nightmares]

Yeah. Please explain votes. I don't care if you vote against me. Just would like to know why I lost in your opinion so I can be better next time or whatever. Thanks for voting though. Cool verse L24 btw.

 

[Nightmares]

Cool. 0-1 Legend24 up for more votes!

 

[major pain]

Well Nightmares made the rules with 20 lines max. So I take that as you can use as little or as many as you like? Anyways Legend has my vote. I've never judged these before, but his made me go "ok that was nice" more than NIghtmares.

 

[Legend24]

Redo. You can't judge a 10 bar in comparison to a 16 bar...
you both should have written 16.

Rules were 20 bars max... outlined in the first post. Can't bring up issues after the fact. Granted, it probably would be easier to judge with equal bars, but live and learn.

By the way, good match Nightmares... now let's get some feedback on these bars.

 

[Nightmares]

Yeah its cool. If you don't want to judge me on 10 respect i can respect that. I probably should have wrote at least 14..anyway, thanks for voting! Up.

 

[Nightmares]

Okay. Legend24, do you want to pause voting at 2-0 your way so I can write 10 more lines, I'll just edit my verse post and add 10 more at the end then we can resume voting to make this easier on the voters? I didn't realize there'd be controversy lol. If you don't want you, it's all good with me. I don't care. We can leave it how it is and battle another day and agree on a rule that says both battlers must have 16 lines. It's your call.

 

[Legend24]

Okay. Legend24, do you want to pause voting at 2-0 your way so I can write 10 more lines, I'll just edit my verse post and add 10 more at the end then we can resume voting to make this easier on the voters? I didn't realize there'd be controversy lol. If you don't want you, it's all good with me. I don't care. We can leave it how it is and battle another day and agree on a rule that says both battlers must have 16 lines. It's your call.

Go for it man... as long as Tha Killer doesn't have any objections. Don't want to set a bad precedent on his forums, but I don't have a problem with it this time. We'll know for next time to outline a specific number of bars.

 

[Nightmares]

Done. 0-2 you are up. Good luck.

 

[major pain]

Can I revote?

 

[Legend24]

Can I revote?

If Nightmares is cool with that, then go ahead.

If you decide to change your vote, edit out your last one and post again with a new explanation.