LE Tournament #2 ROUND ONE - C.Melendez -VS- ItzGravitation

[ItzGravitation]

Checking in now

 

[C.Melendez]

im here turn my mic up...turn me down

 

[C.Melendez]

just saw this thread haven't been on but if im dqed im good if not i'll whip up a verse real quick for sun

 

[ItzGravitation]

so i can drop my verse whenever aye?

 

[ItzGravitation]

i guess i'll wait to see if its still going

 

[raw-material_ahh]

You both are checked in. Verses can drop anytime. Good luck.

 

[ItzGravitation]

ok i'll have my verse in by tonight

 

[ItzGravitation]

C.Melendez, square like Sodoku,
, I’m just saying like Goku
Or Gohan, I run it like a Shogun
You tongue kiss the hoe and I just busted on yo hoe tongue.
Who you think you fucking with? We aint gangbanging on Beyonce.
I'm lava you picante, i'll eat you an entree
Ill with the pen, murder Inc, no Ashanti.
I kick it all day like soccer you just a punt play
The winner takes it all like that song by ABBA.
I hulk smashed this shit Bruce Banner full of Gamma
My radiance it radiates, shining like a constellation.
Melendez, i'm unimpressed, like constipation.
I dont give a shit, like a window pane, you see through.
I'm down right fierce like Hadoukens from Ryu.
By the way i'm jewish, this shit Hebrews.
I am number four, fireman, C2

 

[C.Melendez]

C.Melendez, square like Sodoku,

, I’m just saying like Goku

Or Gohan, I run it like a Shogun

You tongue kiss the hoe and I just busted on yo hoe tongue.

I go dumb; I go nuts, you sweeter than a donut.

I’m bout to act a donkey you a white girl with no butt.

The first verse was the worst the ppl said it wasn’t sick enough.

You know that shit is, fucking ridiculous.

I hope that’s not biting, if it is may the lightning.

Start striking, me times ten before the night end.

The winner takes it all like that song by ABBA.

I hulk smashed this shit Bruce Banner full of Gamma

My radiance it radiates, shining like a constellation.

Melendez, i'm unimpressed, like constipation.

I dont give a shit, like a window pane, you see through.

I'm down right fierce like Hadoukens from Ryu.

aight fam decent shit

 

[C.Melendez]

last battle I lost, 1st round with bad explanations/

he or she not feeling tis...obviously bastards hating/

got yall *snooping* around to peep the flow....slowly *catching vapors*/

Only 1 thing better than beating this pussy....Its stacking papers/

A nigga bound to *fall* tonight by my *theory* *Its Gravitation*

Grav got *wicked* rhymes but Melendez here....His matches *Satan*/

Imma grab his face and, beat him to a pulp

Taste from the cup of defeat?....Nah Grav's taking a gulp

Heard the kids nice but not when compared to I the adult

*Lyrical Execution* taking place...Im compared to *Adolph*

Machete bleeding him here,walk away smoothly but leaving him here

Fuck his funny lines ain't no comedians here (liking men line extra "funny")

But Keep *snicker*ing I got a gun *Kit* for *kat*

*Good bars* out of the rapper I stay kicking that

He's *butterfingers* with the Mic...he ain't firmly gripping it

Milky smooth flow like Nestle during Crunchtime...check me spitting it

 

[ItzGravitation]

nice verse.you can change that line about me liking men tho since i changed it

 

[Tupacfan]

I'll be back to vote on this tomorrow!

 

[raw-material_ahh]

ItzGravitation had some clever lines spread throughout his verse form the window pane/haduken line to the opener. There were also pretty basic lines too like the murder inc/punt play line and the shogun/hot tongue line. C.Melendez only basic line to me was his opener set but after that, he went hard. Gotta say, C.Melendez verse kind of impressed me from the vapors/papers line to the Gravitation/satan line to the kat/that line and the closer. It was sick. Wack thing is, ItzGravitation's verse wasn't wack at all. Better than average IMO but C.Melendez caught fire. Best verse I've seen from him in awhile. Plus, most of C.Melendez's lines were battle oriented, meaning directed at ItzGravitation. Vote - C.Melendez

 

[thedesolateone]

last battle I lost, 1st round with bad explanations/

he or she not feeling tis...obviously bastards hating/-talk of past battles

got yall *snooping* around to peep the flow....slowly *catching vapors*/i dont get the asterisks

Only 1 thing better than beating this pussy....Its stacking papers/-called opponent a pussy

A nigga bound to *fall* tonight by my *theory* *Its Gravitation*-good wordplay

Grav got *wicked* rhymes but Melendez here....His matches *Satan*/nice line

Imma grab his face and, beat him to a pulp-good set up set up

Taste from the cup of defeat?....Nah Grav's taking a gulp- nice punchline

Heard the kids nice but not when compared to I the adult-nice-filler

*Lyrical Execution* taking place...Im compared to *Adolph*-filler but nice lines not attacking opponent though

Machete bleeding him here,walk away smoothly but leaving him here

Fuck his funny lines ain't no comedians here (liking men line extra "funny")

But Keep *snicker*ing I got a gun *Kit* for *kat*-nice set up and wordplay

*Good bars* out of the rapper I stay kicking that -more braggin about your bars but not really attackin opponent

He's *butterfingers* with the Mic...he ain't firmly gripping it-

Milky smooth flow like Nestle during Crunchtime...check me spitting it

mostly braggadocious material but really good wordplay my vote goes to itz gravitation because his verse was aimed more at the opponent even though it was simple

 

[sniperk]

I know I'm allowed to place a vote here but since I'm battling the winner of this match, I'm going to sit this one out.

Nice verses from the both of you.

See you next round.

 

[love yal]

The match between C. Melendez and ItzGravitation was very interesting battle...they both different styles

Favorite lines from ItzGravitation- I kick it all day like soccer you just a punt play, the winner takes it all like that song by Abba

Farorite lines form C. Melendez- Lyrival Execution talking place I'm compared to Adolph Machete bleeding him here, walk away smoothly but leaving him here.

But my vote goes to C.Melendez because came with a stronger verse...but good luck to both battlers keep the good work.

 

[C.Melendez]

mostly braggadocious material but really good wordplay my vote goes to itz gravitation because his verse was aimed more at the opponent even though it was simple

playing on the fact i lost last battle and yall would catch on to this battle.....Snoop Dogg song The Vapors

 

[deadpoolRKO]

, I’m just saying like Goku

Am i the only one who caught this ?

i'm just Saying like Goku = I'm just SAYAIN like Goku

that was a nice line.

Melendez was nice with the wordplay , but My votes for ItzGravitation.

Overall i liked his verse better and it had more nice diss lines imo

 

[Plop Star]

gravitation started off slow but picked it up after a while............i liked the muder inc, no ashanti shit and the i kick it all day like soccer you just a punt play.....the rest of it was okay

melendez had some nice wordplay, and a flow wit his but i gotta give it to...........

Gravitation

 

[Plop Star]

Am i the only one who caught this ?

i'm just Saying like Goku = I'm just SAYAIN like Goku

that was a nice line.

Melendez was nice with the wordplay , but My votes for ItzGravitation.

Overall i liked his verse better and it had more nice diss lines imo

that sayin shit went right over my head