LE Tournament #2 ROUND ONE - C.Melendez -VS- ItzGravitation

[Tupacfan]

i enjoyed this battle, it was versatile with lot's of word play from both sides..

any more votes on this??

if so, I'm gonna have to vote for C.melendez because his word play was just sick, altho It'sgrav's verse was up to par too, but i felt like he was light weight on the punch lines, honestly i was expecting an all out battle lol. Idk why i had those expectations but eventually it came to surface.

 

[ItzGravitation]

i'm done with these txt battles cuz you guys must judge by a different standard than the real world.
i dont even see this sick wordplay you guys speak of or these weak lines.
Who are you guys comparing me to, Lupe?

 

[ItzGravitation]

it's text tho
not audio

so u have to visually show wordplay, which is much easier than verbally doing so

you mean much harder
Cuz i never lost a real rap battle.
I try and make it so that anyone reading my verse can find the rhythm.
but fuck it. I know now

 

[thedesolateone]

both battlers did well

just saying like goku

 

[ItzGravitation]

i think i went o hard for these dudes.
How you lost by line two

 

[thedesolateone]

i think i went o hard for these dudes.

How you lost by line two

yeah you went over everyones head(no pun intended)

you should really enter the next battle

 

[ItzGravitation]

i'm good.
Thats shit i can spit in the booth.
plus its biased against me here

 

[thedesolateone]

i'm good.

Thats shit i can spit in the booth.

plus its biased against me here

no one is biased you just gotta keep attackin

you aint fuckin with me we aint gangbanging on beyonce is dope but not attackin him

you could of said:you aint fuckin with me we aint gangbangin on beyonce

ill beat you with a nine iron though and you can call that foreplay

or you aint fuckin with me we aint gangbangin on beyonce

but the nine iron hits you call that foreplay

im lava your picante i sprinkle you on entrees

you got any thing recorded?

 

[ItzGravitation]

no one is biased you just gotta keep attackin
you got any thing recorded?

Yes and no.
Stuff thats fairly old
that was me in my early stages

 

[frozenheartwjlb]

ItzGravitation gets my vote. Overall I think Melendez had the better verse but it did not feel like a battle verse. I know he said that it was referencing how he felt his verse was slept on last time, but I was not around for it. And I don't feel I should have researched to understand a battle verse, you won't be doing that at any freestyle competition ya know? ItzGravitation threw more jabs, with some equally cleaver wordplay. Props to both though.

 

[raw-material_ahh]

This battle is still tied. 4-4. Next vote wins. Please EXPLAIN WELL.

 

[ItzGravitation]

If i may i'd like to cast a vote for myself.
The reason, hell its me.
Plus i better understand my work than Melendezes even tho i liked the candy bar shit he did.
I like witty lines more than a series of words with witty shit every now and then
Dont see anywhere in the rules where i cant vote

 

[C.Melendez]

If i may i'd like to cast a vote for myself.

The reason, hell its me.

Plus i better understand my work than Melendezes even tho i liked the candy bar shit he did.

I like witty lines more than a series of words with witty shit every now and then

Dont see anywhere in the rules where i cant vote

everybody understand there own work fam....because i still see where people missing some of my punches going straight at u with the hitler reference since i knew u was jew lol ...plus i woulda re edited my shit like u did if i woulda saw u re editing yours.....I didn't see where u re edited until the voting started taking place....that there gave u an advantage but the hell with it

when i first started battling on here i was going wrecklessy hard with the kill kill and go straight at a nigga but after so many battles that was 3 rounds sometime 5 rounds per battle....that shit gets old sooo now i put in work to think and be creative with original wordplay and punches

but honestly all the wordplay not my style in the booth i spit more on street topics similar to sigel styles etc but for these battles on text i know people can't hear the flow so i give them sick punches

 

[C.Melendez]

oh win or lose we'll have another rematch when this is over b....every good battle deserves another yeah?

 

[ItzGravitation]

I'm good with a rematch anytime.
and i'm not a Jew by the way, just a punch

 

[raw-material_ahh]

I'm going to find some people to vote on this battle tonight BC this needs to get resolved and it's too close so whoever has the most votes by midnight eastern time will move on and I hope who doesn't win sticks around and votes on other battles and enters the next tournament.

 

[bankrupt baller]

Who wants some?????!?????????!!!

 

[5th Letter]

after reading this battle i felt cejota came more correct because his rhymes were better and it flowed more naturally. cejota had nice wordplay.

 

[Stew]

ItzGravitation vs C Melendez

Decent battle, My vote goes to ItzGravitation cause I felt like his rap was better suited for a battle where C Melendez joint kinda sounded like it could be a filler track on a street album. I think ItzGravitation's flow was a little better as well. Good shit.

 

[Mastery]

Both were nice. Because of the word play though, my vote goes to C.Melendez