LE Tournament #1 SEMI-FINALS - Legend24 versus esco soprano

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Esco, you 0 for 2, a weak match and a technicality

Battle me, I'ma go through you like a fat bitch devours calories/ 2

This match is only a formality, you're just another casualty

Your whole flow is pathetic, your composition is a fallacy/ 4

I got steel that'll put you in the ER when I pull it

Like sending you to hell with a winter coat, you'll be sweatin bullets/ 6

You shoot blanks when you battle rap, you remind me of a McDonald's wrap

Cause when I devour you, I get a sick feeling... gimme my fuckin dollar back/ 8

Raw said you used to be hot, so what happened to your rappin?

Cause you couldn't find a smooth flow if I stuffed your mouth with a silk napkin/ 10

You're hip-hop's premature ejaculator, you can barely last a bout

You come soft like an erectile dysfunction patient, with an empty spout/ 12

Esco on that mafioso shit, you livin back in 96... that chapter been Written

Check The Score, I'm Killing you Softly with what my pen spittin/ 14

You're Jersey bred, Jersey fed, next thing, Jersey dead

You're living in a state of despair, even the Nets prefer New York instead/ 16
 
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Legend? Nigga please you ain’t even Aubrey Graham hardly fam

So quit claimin you hard cuz your city got more ‘soft spots’ than +newborns+

Cease and desist with your weak lines no ‘development’ your speech got me resisting ‘arrest’

And I’m so sick I pick up a ‘number 2’ at +school+ and get a disease on a ‘test’

I’ll rip you then come back around like I caught my 2nd wind fuck that this my tourney this my second win

Broach the topic of you with my wicked wit; run ‘rabbit’ run +lickety split+

Givin’ you ‘fits like u on shoppin’ sprees more white lines than an Eminem concert you coppin’ pleas

Such alleged talent wasted basic legend style is ‘pulp fiction’ cuz he stay gettin +caught in the basement+

“Now say ESCO one more muthafuckin’ time”

Go ‘head take these bars to heart like diabetics with snickers; no ‘film’ +did you get the picture?+

Four quarters in a game and the final "period" is where your namesake is made

But not you 'pussy' you’re full of shit like that "tampon" between your legs

Don’t go there with me cuz I’ma beast on text let’s not speak on sex

With that soft ass quote in your sig hope you didn’t tongue kiss her kid cuz all of LE know just how deep her throat is

Sometimes I feel like WILLARD SMITH cuz when I spit I feel no one else’s presence

And before I leave this bitch there’s no doubt about it – I AM LEGEND

(Link) Didn't think we need this for the tourney but anyway - http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?101376-Raw-Material-versus-thedesolateone
 
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Legend24

Esco, you 0 for 2, a weak match and a technicality

Battle me, I'ma go through you like a fat bitch devours calories/ 2

This match is only a formality, you're just another casualty

Your whole flow is pathetic, your composition is a fallacy/ 4

Decent opener.

I got steel that'll put you in the ER when I pull it

Like sending you to hell with a winter coat, you'll be sweatin bullets/ 6

You shoot blanks when you battle rap, you remind me of a McDonald's wrap

Cause when I devour you, I get a sick feeling... gimme my fuckin dollar back/ 8

I really dig the punch from lines 5 and 6. That went hard. And you followed it up with another decent punch that wasn't as hard but good.

Raw said you used to be hot, so what happened to your rappin?

Cause you couldn't find a smooth flow if I stuffed your mouth with a silk napkin/ 10

You're hip-hop's premature ejaculator, you can barely last a bout

You come soft like an erectile dysfunction patient, with an empty spout/ 12

LOL. Sick first punch. The following 2 lines were alright.

Esco on that mafioso shit, you livin back in 96... that chapter been Written

Check The Score, I'm Killing you Softly with what my pen spittin/ 1

You're Jersey bred, Jersey fed, next thing, Jersey dead

You're living in a state of despair, even the Nets prefer New York instead/ 16

Dig the personals, alright punch. IDK why the last two lines made me laugh.

esco soprano

Legend? Nigga please you ain’t even Aubrey Graham hardly fam

So quit claimin you hard cuz your city got more ‘soft spots’ than +newborns+

Cease and desist with your weak lines no ‘development’ your speech got me resisting ‘arrest’

And I’m so sick I pick up a ‘number 2’ at +school+ and get a disease on a ‘test’

You had so much metas packed in here, I had to read them a few times. Good job.

I’ll rip you then come back around like I caught my 2nd wind fuck that this my tourney this my second win

Broach the topic of you with my wicked wit; run ‘rabbit’ run +lickety split+

Givin’ you ‘fits like u on shoppin’ sprees more white lines than an Eminem concert you coppin’ pleas

Such alleged talent wasted basic legend style is ‘pulp fiction’ cuz he stay gettin +caught in the basement+

IDK why I really liked that first line. Good meta, great wording for the 3rd line. It was sick.

“Now say ESCO one more muthafuckin’ time”

Go ‘head take these bars to heart like diabetics with snickers; no ‘film’ +did you get the picture?+

Four quarters in a game and the final "period" is where your namesake is made

But not you 'pussy' you’re full of shit like that "tampon" between your legs

Okay first two lines but I liked the bars to heart part. Last two lines made me laugh. Good job.

Don’t go there with me cuz I’ma beast on text let’s not speak on sex

With that soft ass quote in your sig hope you didn’t tongue kiss her kid cuz all of LE know just how deep her throat is

Sometimes I feel like WILLARD SMITH cuz when I spit I feel no one else’s presence

And before I leave this bitch there’s no doubt about it – I AM LEGEND

First two lines were alright. 2nd was forced. I liked the closer. Nice personal.

I realize the winner of this battle goes to the finals and after reading it once, I read several lines over so that I really understood each of your lines, I couldn't pick a winner. So I had to read everything over again. This is one of the closet battles I've ever voted on. I'm not going to say who won on metas, punches, etc BC I provided enough comments on some of your lines every 4th bar to let you know what I liked. Legend had crazy lines like:

I got steel that'll put you in the ER when I pull it

Like sending you to hell with a winter coat, you'll be sweatin bullets/ 6

Raw said you used to be hot, so what happened to your rappin?

Cause you couldn't find a smooth flow if I stuffed your mouth with a silk napkin/ 10

You're Jersey bred, Jersey fed, next thing, Jersey dead

You're living in a state of despair, even the Nets prefer New York instead/ 16

But weak ones like:

This match is only a formality, you're just another casualty

Your whole flow is pathetic, your composition is a fallacy/ 4

You're hip-hop's premature ejaculator, you can barely last a bout

You come soft like an erectile dysfunction patient, with an empty spout/ 12

And esco had crazy ones too like:

I’ll rip you then come back around like I caught my 2nd wind fuck that this my tourney this my second win

Broach the topic of you with my wicked wit; run ‘rabbit’ run +lickety split+

Givin’ you ‘fits like u on shoppin’ sprees more white lines than an Eminem concert you coppin’ pleas

Such alleged talent wasted basic legend style is ‘pulp fiction’ cuz he stay gettin +caught in the basement+

Four quarters in a game and the final "period" is where your namesake is made

But not you 'pussy' you’re full of shit like that "tampon" between your legs

And his weak ones were:

Legend? Nigga please you ain’t even Aubrey Graham hardly fam

So quit claimin you hard cuz your city got more ‘soft spots’ than +newborns+

Cease and desist with your weak lines no ‘development’ your speech got me resisting ‘arrest’

And I’m so sick I pick up a ‘number 2’ at +school+ and get a disease on a ‘test’

Don’t go there with me cuz I’ma beast on text let’s not speak on sex

With that soft ass quote in your sig hope you didn’t tongue kiss her kid cuz all of LE know just how deep her throat is

With that said, my vote goes to Esco Soprano. I wish I could vote a tie and even though I could, I hate taking the easy way out and try to analyze enough to pick a winner. I will give Legend's verse a 7.50 and Esco's a 7.55. It was that close. IMO, Esco had the best line but Legend had the next two best lines BUT Esco had the next two after that. I won't be surprised if either of you win. It may even end up 5-4 for either of your ways.
 
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This was a really close one...ledgend24 had me laughing, esco had me reading a few lines twice.
Punches: esco
flow: ledgend
metas: esco
personal: esco
wordplay: ledgend
I'm going with esco for the win....it was really close. Ledgend had and easy read, it had the Oooo factor.
I just feel esco dug a bit deeper and hit just a little harder.
 
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DAMN GOOD BATTLE OFF TOP...

LEGEND:

Esco, you 0 for 2, a weak match and a technicality

Battle me, I'ma go through you like a fat bitch devours calories/ 2

This match is only a formality, you're just another casualty

Your whole flow is pathetic, your composition is a fallacy/ 4

{Nice multi's,wordplay, decent punch and metaphors}

I got steel that'll put you in the ER when I pull it

Like sending you to hell with a winter coat, you'll be sweatin bullets/ 6

You shoot blanks when you battle rap, you remind me of a McDonald's wrap

Cause when I devour you, I get a sick feeling... gimme my fuckin dollar back/ 8

{Hard metaphors, and punchlines}

Raw said you used to be hot, so what happened to your rappin?

Cause you couldn't find a smooth flow if I stuffed your mouth with a silk napkin/ 10

You're hip-hop's premature ejaculator, you can barely last a bout

You come soft like an erectile dysfunction patient, with an empty spout/

{Better than nice metaphors and punches}

Esco on that mafioso shit, you livin back in 96... that chapter been Written

Check The Score, I'm Killing you Softly with what my pen spittin/ 14

You're Jersey bred, Jersey fed, next thing, Jersey dead

You're living in a state of despair, even the Nets prefer New York instead/ 16

{Better than nice wordplay, hard punches, nice metaphors}

ESCO:

Legend? Nigga please you ain’t even Aubrey Graham hardly fam

So quit claimin you hard cuz your city got more ‘soft spots’ than +newborns+

Cease and desist with your weak lines no ‘development’ your speech got me resisting ‘arrest’

And I’m so sick I pick up a ‘number 2’ at +school+ and get a disease on a ‘test’

{{Hard punches,metaphors, and wordplay, nice multi's}

I’ll rip you then come back around like I caught my 2nd wind fuck that this my tourney this my second win

Broach the topic of you with my wicked wit; run ‘rabbit’ run +lickety split+

Givin’ you ‘fits like u on shoppin’ sprees more white lines than an Eminem concert you coppin’ pleas

Such alleged talent wasted basic legend style is ‘pulp fiction’ cuz he stay gettin +caught in the basement+

{Hard metaphors, wordplay, punches, and that pulp fiction line had me LMFAO}

“Now say ESCO one more muthafuckin’ time”

Go ‘head take these bars to heart like diabetics with snickers; no ‘film’ +did you get the picture?+

Four quarters in a game and the final "period" is where your namesake is made

But not you 'pussy' you’re full of shit like that "tampon" between your legs

Don’t go there with me cuz I’ma beast on text let’s not speak on sex

{Hard metaphors, nice punches}

With that soft ass quote in your sig hope you didn’t tongue kiss her kid cuz all of LE know just how deep her throat is

Sometimes I feel like WILLARD SMITH cuz when I spit I feel no one else’s presence

And before I leave this bitch there’s no doubt about it – I AM LEGEND

{Nice metaphor, last line hit good}

Punches: Tie (both had hard punches)

Metaphors: Esco (both had nice metaphors, but Esco edged him)

Wordplay: Tie

Multi: Legend (edged it out)

Structure:Tie (both had a nice readable post)

Overall Post: Esco (Once I went back and matched both verses bar for bar...Esco edged it out)

Vote: Esco
 
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I'm not gonna break down each line of each verse. Both were hot though. Both had nice ass metas too. I'm a punchline rapper myself so I appreciate good word play and meta flips. But if I gotta choose one I'm gonna go with Legend24. His verse flowed better to me and the punches came off more natural sounding. Some of Esco's seemed just a little reaching to me. Not over my head or anything but for some reason some of them just didn't come off as sharp as I felt they could have. Most battle rappers don't say this too often, but on the real, Legend's style seemed similar to my own. I could actually imagine myself spitting some of those lines he dropped. I don't know either of these dudes or followed their IC postings at all so I have now history on either to be biased about. But when somebody's flow and style reminds you of your own, it's hard not to recognize it and not give them the nod. Both got down for real but my vote is going to Legend.
 
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Man, I just type up my entire vote and this shit went to crap.. smh illcommunity.

Anways, I was saying this was like thee hotest battle in this round 1 tournament. I really enjoyed reading both opponents verses, both of them hit hard. I was impressed. Also reminded me how talent like this is slept on and lacks support..

I thought Esco had a nice verse, he incorporate multi's, meta's, and nice metahphors. However, when I was reading his verse, I had to re-read that like 3 times to be able to really understand what his battle rap was conveying.. I also think that Esco done a good job in this battle, previous from the other battles I thought it was lightweight.. but his jawn hit hard though.

On to Legend, I thought his verse was superb, nice punchlines, had multi's, metaphors that gave me an image, and also I feel his flow he wasn't trying to hard but his verse still hit hard..I diggs that.

This vote is actually hard so Im gonna hve to say a Tie.. Sorry folks.. It's a tie for me.. Good luck to both oppenents.. peace.
 
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So there was 3-0 vote, then Old Fart for Legend, then an additional tie vote. Well we'll have to wait on the official determination.
 
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Technically Esco won. Last night Deaththreats posted before I could post my vote, which would have went to Legend. But unless Raw wants to keep the voting open a lil longer, Esco wins.
 
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so do you need me to vote?i am reading the verses for like the tenth time and i was just about to vote but if there is already a winner i wont
 
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thedesolateone;2055234 said:
so do you need me to vote?i am reading the verses for like the tenth time and i was just about to vote but if there is already a winner i wont

It's over... but still drop your vote so we can see, just don't waste your time going into too much depth about it.
 
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i vote for legend because esco punchlines i really wasnt feeling like arrested devolpment and soft spot and newbornsthe lines werent that hard to me literally or figuratively

legend had a few strong lines and better flow and structure his verse seemed more personal imo the lines actually hit while esco would put arrested and development in a sentence and quotes to seem like it was a punchline.even if canada has more soft spots i dont see how it cant have thorough people there so wasnt a good line to me even though i appeciate the connection of soft spots and newborns.legends lines were solid .i put content before multis anyday.i dont want people to think this is a hate vote because esco won against me .thats why i wasnt gonna vote on this one

but i was asked to and i just gave my honest opinion
 
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Shit was a nice battle.... i thought Legend was going to win......but ESCO pulled a buzzer beater......

Esco patterns and wording, just fit with me......but it was clever no doubt.....Legend had the hands up with the smooth flow...

Legend if u would have kept diggin into this nigga chest........aint no way he seeing.......most people like myself had to read

the bars 2 times to try to figure out what he meant.........to me i dont care how lyrical u are trying to be.....its always a minus

when your words dont rhyme and when your metaphors dont apply to the reader........Esco had some nice metaphors....

but when i forced i mean got damn.....Esco.....u almost lost vote, due to the metaphors......i got them, but it just didnt sit well me

Legend....the flow and pattern was ill, just u slipped on the context........if the context was there u had this hands down.....

Esco good win, but your rhymes sound to forced.......in a face 2 face battle, i couldnt imagine that verse winning...but online thats the advantage of going back and reading it again......but even reading it again, i was still like damn.....if Legend just went in, and killed u, he had this hands down
 
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Sorry I'm late. Been a little busy but good job to both of y'all. This battle was CRAZY. Good luck in the finals esco and I hope to see you battling more Legend24 BC your verse was crazy. You have skills.
 
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