wow it's a freestyle

[love yal]

Forget these zodiac games
Open up the bible, the best way to
Focus and maintaine
They too much poetry for poet
They become to insane
I say be wiser, tell it like
Teacher, and become artist
And listen to the lord you be
Much higher, where's the lighter
No one smokeing, its sound dorky
But hey on mic you won't be choking
Sorry I'm not a doctor, but I enjoy
To help people in any commucation
Skills, not trying to be ill from each other
We can communcate skill, and be chills in our
Thrills, freestyling can be self evaluation
Maybe use rapping a successful career talking
Rising status poet writing opportunities or like church advancing!

 

[love yal]

Cordial with core
Of coral reef, like a shore
The freestyle became a typewriter
Heaven always typing a ghost writer
Coolheaded learning palms
Like installing coolant become
A great artistic fighter
Coordinating conjunction
We learning the coordinator
Decipher they before
They got better when
They flowed about church
On tour!

 

[love yal]

These lines aren't important

Before we cheered, its great

To freestyle, its only to improve

Like good grades, become

Excellent no need to be

Disconnected but continue

To freestyle to discontent

Those disconsolate memories

Sensitive to strength, sentence

Will neva lose, tell more

Fixed-Sensibility stories

You with God, will always improve!

 

[Tupacfan]

hahaha, I see you love yal..

you verses are coming off nice..

your growing and I love that, You haven't give up yet.. that's whats up..

keep on keeping.

 

[love yal]

hahaha, I see you love yal..

you verses are coming off nice..

your growing and I love that, You haven't give up yet.. that's whats up..

keep on keeping.

Thanks Tupacfan for the feedback..lol...I been trying to do better, and getting help from others. My goal is make more sense, use up world play and have strong punchlines.
So Tupacfan, have you been working on any new poems lately?

 

[Manik Sona]

Your poems are sick. Sweet read.

 

[Tupacfan]

Thanks Tupacfan for the feedback..lol...I been trying to do better, and getting help from others. My goal is make more sense, use up world play and have strong punchlines.

So Tupacfan, have you been working on any new poems lately?

that's good, im glad your implementing the feedback, that's what i love about this section, talent folks helping other artists to thrive to perfection.. and just by reading the new stuff you have been posting here, I can def read and see that you have better structure.. so yea, keep up the good work and keep battling kats, go in for the gusto lol..

yea, i have been working on a lot of personal poems, I have written a whole bunch, but im saving that to get them publish and get a book full of my poems going.. hopefully really soon, it's a lot of obstacles I'm going thru right now, it's only temeporary though.. so im good. but thanks for asking btw... appreciate that, cause i'm passionate about my poetry.. let alone poetry itself.

 

[love yal]

that's good, im glad your implementing the feedback, that's what i love about this section, talent folks helping other artists to thrive to perfection.. and just by reading the new stuff you have been posting here, I can def read and see that you have better structure.. so yea, keep up the good work and keep battling kats, go in for the gusto lol..

yea, i have been working on a lot of personal poems, I have written a whole bunch, but im saving that to get them publish and get a book full of my poems going.. hopefully really soon, it's a lot of obstacles I'm going thru right now, it's only temeporary though.. so im good. but thanks for asking btw... appreciate that, cause i'm passionate about my poetry.. let alone poetry itself.

Thanks, I been doing my best. I'm glad you are doing a great job, that great a idea have all your poems published like book when do you think it would be finish?.have you ever did any poetry shows like
Apollo, or def jam poetry shows? And made any audio album cd's?

 

[love yal]

Like a perceptual categorization

I'm back with more freestyles

Like process of grouping

Saying the hottest things like managing

Huge quanties, showing perceptions

Comfronting stimuli consumers like a hot album

Skills giving needs, showing the point like bic pen!

 

[love yal]

Avioding negative evaluation

Helping to influences customers

In many action like a consumer

Complaints, cognitive dissonance

Succeeding an positive evaluation

Working on cool psychological perceptions

Living the dreams, on great godly communications!

 

[love yal]

Freestyle like sperm whale and
Change thin like shape muscles
Rap well, good as word play
Spider web, I put the punchlines
Pretty well, spigot, spiffy, the sky freestyle
Is good like loving heaven, with lovely lord
Style like taoism phone dial!

 

[love yal]

Touchstone like touchline
Touche riding out like Ghost-rider
From Marvel, freestyling on korn
Instrumentals, owning hotlines like touchdowns
Tour de force, teaching middle eastern education
Flow about something that's worth discussing, Gods
Passes the conversation in languages makes positive mind controlling!

 

[love yal]

Clients like cliffhanger
Climactic, aware of climates
Clearance, makes example
Of fragment, people want to
Hear that's new exclusive
So we them the freestyle of anger
Foyer, we change minds like lawyer
Gets stronger as advance like stranger
Fire in sky, X-files, see what's happens
Battery Durcel backpack with God we last longer!

 

[Zander]

Hello. Hi there, the Double O is checking in

Mid west kid, rims high, dark tints, blunt lit

not givin a single fuck, never game 2 shits

a whole bag full of care, that i just don't gift

stupid dumb swagger, on point like the fish

trapping selling steeze, freshness, 2 legit

and i always keep a full tank, maxed out, real shit

always keep some bump in the trunk for a bad freak bitch

and i only bang cudi, bone thugz, and chip the rip.

thats who i is , slabed up, we good

ray-bans, snap back, candy colors, like i should

grind set on ace hood, steady sniffin out the green

i cant get enough of Franklin, a fucking greenback fiend.

fresh and off the dome,you can call me mr clean

a sweet young kid with a bad streak of mean

a clean cut gentleman who is loved by all the birds

but a head busting goon a menace to the nerds

.

haters all talk shit, but i am deaf as grandpa to there words

i never took advice, never fell for any girl

and never rocked a mic, but i know ya boys a hidden pearl

swag on some differentness, fucking making up these words

im AIDS to you weak rappers, you will never find a cure

before i end this mayne listen close, your full attention

give it to zander hes words might be a blessin

there are three rules to be noted written and believed in

if you come thru my hood, the east side of Cleveland

first of we the coldest since the homie K.I.D,

second no one colder so dont you ever try and be

and lastly zander killed this, leave em hangin, no apologies.​

 

[love yal]

Hello. Hi there, the Double O is checking in

Mid west kid, rims high, dark tints, blunt lit

not givin a single fuck, never game 2 shits

a whole bag full of care, that i just don't gift

stupid dumb swagger, on point like the fish

trapping selling steeze, freshness, 2 legit

and i always keep a full tank, maxed out, real shit

always keep some bump in the trunk for a bad freak bitch

and i only bang cudi, bone thugz, and chip the rip.

thats who i is , slabed up, we good

ray-bans, snap back, candy colors, like i should

grind set on ace hood, steady sniffin out the green

i cant get enough of Franklin, a fucking greenback fiend.

fresh and off the dome,you can call me mr clean

a sweet young kid with a bad streak of mean

a clean cut gentleman who is loved by all the birds

but a head busting goon a menace to the nerds

.

haters all talk shit, but i am deaf as grandpa to there words

i never took advice, never fell for any girl

and never rocked a mic, but i know ya boys a hidden pearl

swag on some differentness, fucking making up these words

im AIDS to you weak rappers, you will never find a cure

before i end this mayne listen close, your full attention

give it to zander hes words might be a blessin

there are three rules to be noted written and believed in

if you come thru my hood, the east side of Cleveland

first of we the coldest since the homie K.I.D,

second no one colder so dont you ever try and be

and lastly zander killed this, leave em hangin, no apologies.​

Nice flow with rhymes keep yo talent going great job!

 

[love yal]

Team or tag team like whoop there it is!

Helix like when all hell breaks lose

Then God snatches world makes it good again

Imagin bunch freestyles at da booth

Talking wreckless, helmet with da tooth

You try to sound like ja rule, we trying

To see if let's us freestyle at da cruise

Helmsman shipping the cruise

Neva losing a clue unless we get rich

With flow, a nice show, will excite the crowds

And watches we won't lose, becuz anything

We freestyle talks about love God you will

Neva lose, let the bible be your favorite cruise to read

And everyone thinks ya very coool!

 

[love yal]

Don't even sweat ya be
Back on ya feet like
Yesterday forget it
Keep flowing more
You too will sound
Like professional some day
Neva quit on talent you use
It as game for school
A cool way talk but in
Freestyle conversation
What eva I said in past
Is just practice, nothing
Serious, just having fun
Cheer up, tha only beef
Is steak, or hamburgers
If ya didn't like my lines
Or my rhymes, forgive me
My poems are going to shine
I know it can sound corny
But practice makes perfect
Can be soft once then hard
On the next, dispenser
We neva know who's testing
So why sleep? I just ha ha
No offense, I flow to see
How far are we going to go
Disparate to disparity
Just have fun, follow God
One day you'll be pro!

 

[love yal]

Yo yo yo
Check us out
Yo yo yo
Must quit being lazy
Cuz anyone can do dis
I'll use this excuse
For a homework purpose
Beforehand, dna
Explaining everything goes
On class, how to get better grades
Focus is to pray
Work great, look smart
Get their back like some diversion
Diversity, besides hiding secrets
This is smart version call it stupid or dum
The flow, whateva ya divide, we can still run
A great stye lord for fun, I just quit hating
Is wack if we mad all the time, alway solving nothing
Love the lord, polo sport smell, garden floweres
Angles heaven great love no fronting!

 

[love yal]

Rock on or rock flow

This isn't woodstock

But gathering together

Forget wasting time

Don't be to cold

Like winter weather

To greedy, forget being spoil

Riding whips, fly like feathers

Rock on or flow on, share on

That's why we flow for!

Dumpling no dunce, dune

Forget being in dungeon

Heaven on earth loves you

Like a flow on!

 

[love yal]

Stimulating while others hating

Lusting for the wrong things

God forgive us, no way we drowning

That's problem that are important

But who's care I'm try this clean

Version again, ha ha I'm back again

With a freestyle, while others stifle

The world is beatiful, slaugherhouse

Slaughter flow, my style is charm

Like a go light, don't mess me up

Its a freestyle, back to school

Where's the scan test, let's get this A+

Starting, scandalous scandalizeing

While back on our holy spirite

While others freestyling, keep it flowing!