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[Tupacfan]

Waaaw, this jawn is friggin AWESOME!! I enjoyed reading this piece top to bottom, the mutli rhymes in it was off the hook, and also cause, every line hit, like i tried to see if i quote a favorite line, and this what i came up with lol...

"In attempts to breathe faster, my breath remastered

the style of delivery; me, thinking through it's imageries

Sounding off in it's symponies, a humble mic's infamy

Enter, see; I'm moving forward, never stepping to the past

Move against the grain when I meet them as the last

Even if they winning, I'm the one they have to pass

They strapping for the cash while I react to it with laughs

Somethings are prewritten, money and women? this life that we livin'?

Take whatever's given; I choose to build on it's ceiling

Boulders I'm heaving; and through the mouth I am breathing

Whilst these other artists wheezing, Amazing is the feeling

No more use in trying to highlight whatever that I used to show

A killer flow like Katrina, but meaner;

Like Tommie Smith when he raised his fist, everyone had caught the jist

Lost inside the shadow's mist, I plead the fifth till the night is lit"

keep dropping gems here, thank you for sharing