PLEASE In the name of Trayvon Martin & his family sign this petition to keep this from happening

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Parallel;6739077 said:
I'm not signing until the spelling errors are fixed.

Done. I thought the site would allow me to edit it before I posted it, but I went back and corrected the mistakes.
 
Can you edit it? You should take out the "especially a young black teenager" part and take out the "the" before "Zimmerman" in the 2nd paragraph.

With the "especially" part, it makes it seem like you're implying black children are more important than children of other races which is not good for PR.

Exhibit A (from the petition):

When a man can kill a child and walk away from it legally (especially a young black teenager) there is no reason from him to be acknowledged as a 'celebrity', nor should he be allowed to benefit from it. As much as we all would like to see George Zimmerman get his head knocked clean off, allowing this "celebrity boxing match" to go on does nothing more than make a mockery of American justice even further.

Join us as we continue the fight for justice of Trayvon Martin and his family. By signing this petition, we will tell the Zimmerman, his promoter, and any of his supporters around the country and the world that killing kids should never get you any recognition anywhere other than being the selfish and cowardly human being you are.

Justice was never done for this young man, Trayvon Martin. It's time that the people issued some of their own.


Exhibit B (suggestions):

When a man can kill a child and walk away from it legally, there is no reason from him to be acknowledged as a 'celebrity', nor should he be allowed to benefit from it. As much as we all would like to see George Zimmerman get his head knocked clean off, allowing this "celebrity boxing match" to go on does nothing more than make a mockery of American justice even further.

Join us as we continue the fight for justice of Trayvon Martin and his family. By signing this petition, we will tell Zimmerman, his promoter, and any of his supporters around the country and the world that killing kids should never get you any recognition anywhere other than being the selfish and cowardly human being you are.

Justice was never done for this young man, Trayvon Martin. It's time that the people issued some of their own.


In other words, I would remove the bolded parts.
 
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NothingButTheTruth;6739351 said:
Can you edit it? You should take out the "especially a young black teenager" part and take out the "the" before "Zimmerman" in the 2nd paragraph.

With the "especially" part, it makes it seem like you're implying black children are more important than children of other races which is not good for PR.

Exhibit A (from the petition):

When a man can kill a child and walk away from it legally (especially a young black teenager) there is no reason from him to be acknowledged as a 'celebrity', nor should he be allowed to benefit from it. As much as we all would like to see George Zimmerman get his head knocked clean off, allowing this "celebrity boxing match" to go on does nothing more than make a mockery of American justice even further.

Join us as we continue the fight for justice of Trayvon Martin and his family. By signing this petition, we will tell the Zimmerman, his promoter, and any of his supporters around the country and the world that killing kids should never get you any recognition anywhere other than being the selfish and cowardly human being you are.

Justice was never done for this young man, Trayvon Martin. It's time that the people issued some of their own.


In other words, I would remove the bolded parts.

i think he means that the " young black teenager" part shows that they are at higher risk of being targeted/ discriminated against..
 
damobb2deep;6739365 said:
i think he means that the " young black teenager" part shows that they are at higher risk of being targeted/ discriminated against..

I'm sure he did, but if that's the case, he should have explained it that way. The way it's written now can easily come off as black children are more important than children of other races.
 
7figz;6736705 said:
Wheres the civil suit against this nigga ?

OJ was found not guilty and still civilly-liable which stopped him from being able to make money from books or shit like this without the family getting a cut.

OJ actually had money. Zimmerman ain't got shit. Nigga couldn't even pay his lawyer without donations
 
We have 40+ votes saying they would sign the petition, but only a handful of people signed it so far.

Here's the link to the petition that Mister B. set up:
http://www.change.org/petitions/george-zimmerman-stop-this-celebrity-boxing-match-from-happening

Are you guys okay with what it says? Do you want to edit it at all? WEIGH IN.

Personally, I think the "(especially a young black teenager)" should be edited out because to me it reads like we're saying black teenagers are more important than teenagers of other races which could rub a lot of potential signers the wrong way.

I also think the "the" before "Zimmerman" in the 2nd paragraph should be edited out for grammar purposes. Other than that I'm fine with it.

What do y'all think?
 
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Yes, because me trying to prevent HIM getting money fighting another black man makes me a sell out?... are yall out your FUCKIN' minds

Since when does killing a unarmed black teenager make anybody a celebrity...? ill wait
 
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I understand... im just tryna save us from falling right into the white mans hands yet again..

but, I understand..
 
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goldenja;6750144 said:
Yes, because me trying to prevent HIM getting money fighting another black man makes me a sell out?... are yall out your FUCKIN' minds

Since when does killing a unarmed black teenager make anybody a celebrity...? ill wait

This is the ic everybody is outta they mind ....btw i aint signin shit i wanna see him get knocked out and hope he slips into a coma and doesnt recover
 
The only good that could come out of this zimmerman gettin' killed and the proceeds going to Trayvon's family.
 
Why stop it?

His people nem should be campaigning for this shit to go dine so they can kill him

Iono how they get thu the day knowin this nigga is free doin what he want

His pappy need to kill that nigga

Pray for em
 
Vader;6750157 said:
goldenja;6750144 said:
Yes, because me trying to prevent HIM getting money fighting another black man makes me a sell out?... are yall out your FUCKIN' minds

Since when does killing a unarmed black teenager make anybody a celebrity...? ill wait

This is the ic everybody is outta they mind ....btw i aint signin shit i wanna see him get knocked out and hope he slips into a coma and doesnt recover

its gonna be on tv... do you really think they would let something go that far?... if so, DMX is going right back to jail for attempted MURDER while ZIMMERMAN GOT AWAY WITH MURDER
 

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