Love's Rejection- By Tupacfan

[P-Dogg77]

Beautiful poem . You must have gone through some real tough shit to write that poem but it was beautiful nevertheless

 

[Rocket Kidd]

i absolutely love this joint.

 

[Tupacfan]

thanks for reading fellas,

And for commenting and giving props.

Its much appreciated!
LOL at the giff Kidd posted..

Peace!

 

[MeTaL]

Good stuff, this poem reminds me of somebody that I know.

 

[VSOP]

wow amazing wordplay

great read-it sucks that bullshit makes you write so good right? if youre happy, you don't write anything at all

take it for what it is

his bs equals his loss and a treat for us to read

life goes on!

btw loved these lines

Drinking in my emotions

At the moment

drunk

my body septic

due to your loves injections...

infections

letting loose

allowing all inhabititions

To cease to exist

allowing love to caress my inside

Stroking me evoking

these uncontrolled emotions

leaving me on this incrediable high

Now

Dirty... like a prositute

for allowing to having your way

emotionally, mentally,

spiritually and even physically

Then slapped in the faced

and left defenseless...

Shit

 

[Tupacfan]

Good stuff, this poem reminds me of somebody that I know.

Thanks for the read!

I hope it can be some inspiration to draw a vivid image LOL.

 

[Tupacfan]

wow amazing wordplay

great read-it sucks that bullshit makes you write so good right? if youre happy, you don't write anything at all

take it for what it is

his bs equals his loss and a treat for us to read

life goes on!

btw loved these lines

Thanks for reading bruh!

yup yup, I hate that.. That bs makes us write so good, that because emotions are being spit and it makes the poem stronger as well.. But your right, when I'm happy I ain't got shit to write about but the birds chirping LOL. I guess when we go on our hiatus, we know we happy LOL.. And when we write a post something, were likely going thru some thangs hahahahaha... Ahhhhh, its funny!

I'm glad you enjoyed reading this though.

Peace!

 

[MeTaL]

Thanks for the read!

I hope it can be some inspiration to draw a vivid image LOL.

hmm, Actually have a drawing similar to this poem, check it out:

 

[Tupacfan]

hmm, Actually have a drawing similar to this poem, check it out:

wow! Now this is image that fits perfect for this poem!

I really appreciate u sharing this piece

Thank u!

 

[love yal]

Nice work, very touching and deep..

 

[Tupacfan]

Nice work, very touching and deep..

Thanks for stopping by to read..and posting a comment..

Preciate that...

 

[DarcSkies]

Well...I'm officially depressed.

*takes up drinking*

 

[Tupacfan]

Well...I'm officially depressed.

*takes up drinking*

LOL.. Sawwy.. Me didn't mean to cause any suppressed feelings

Aye, thanks for reading tho.. I enjoy reading your jawns too, so keep em coming

Peace Darxwell..

 

[REAL_POETICAL]

*sighs* this poem is like the story of my life lol...dealing with love or lack thereoff makes you just hate the definition for bringing such lies sometimes...but yet we as people chase it like a drug and refuse to seek rehab because of the joy it brings when its there...bottom line this piece truly hit me and took me to a place of love's rejection lol

bottom line excellent work as always...keep dropping the words that express a shattered soul called poetry my fellow poetress

peace

 

[Tupacfan]

*sighs* this poem is like the story of my life lol...dealing with love or lack thereoff makes you just hate the definition for bringing such lies sometimes...but yet we as people chase it like a drug and refuse to seek rehab because of the joy it brings when its there...bottom line this piece truly hit me and took me to a place of love's rejection lol

bottom line excellent work as always...keep dropping the words that express a shattered soul called poetry my fellow poetress

peace

Man, I'm glad you felt this piece..it's one of them jawns when you just feel bottom out and everything around you seems to fail, rejections i hate..it stems from my childhood so to be still rejected today, it does hurt.. but im' good tho

lol at shattered soul... dam, that's kinda messed up because it likely true.. shattered soul..

thank for reading though, preciate that..

Peace..

 

[REAL_POETICAL]

Man, I'm glad you felt this piece..it's one of them jawns when you just feel bottom out and everything around you seems to fail, rejections i hate..it stems from my childhood so to be still rejected today, it does hurt.. but im' good tho

lol at shattered soul... dam, that's kinda messed up because it likely true.. shattered soul..

thank for reading though, preciate that..

Peace..

you and me both...rejection is like my biggest pet peeve and fear...its like acceptance becomes an addiction that you keep trying to relive...only to see that you set the bar high for something that should be very simple...don't get me started with my childhood lol...thats another chapter in real p's book that will end up being long to express

overall its all apart of life's devious but insightful ways to show you the brighter side of the fence...when true love comes along to turn rejection to acceptance

lol i'm sorry i went into deep on the subject manner

 

[Tupacfan]

you and me both...rejection is like my biggest pet peeve and fear...its like acceptance becomes an addiction that you keep trying to relive...only to see that you set the bar high for something that should be very simple...don't get me started with my childhood lol...thats another chapter in real p's book that will end up being long to express

overall its all apart of life's devious but insightful ways to show you the brighter side of the fence...when true love comes along to turn rejection to acceptance

lol i'm sorry i went into deep on the subject manner

hahaha.. I feel you on childhood, I'm with you, that's a long story.. sad one too smh. makes me wanna shed a tear as I quickly reflect back on that. I'mma let the mind race fast forward..

That's exactaly what I been doing real p, reinforcing the positives and be more receptive to acceptance..

na, it's okay.. these discussions are needed to aleviate some of the pain.. ya knoow...its all good lol..

 

[REAL_POETICAL]

hahaha.. I feel you on childhood, I'm with you, that's a long story.. sad one too smh. makes me wanna shed a tear as I quickly reflect back on that. I'mma let the mind race fast forward..

That's exactaly what I been doing real p, reinforcing the positives and be more receptive to acceptance..

na, it's okay.. these discussions are needed to aleviate some of the pain.. ya knoow...its all good lol..

most def...thats the blessing of wte...its not just a place of "check out my pieces"...its ventilation, a modern day coffee house *without the lames*, a gathering of misunderstood and lost prophecies, and most of all...a place i call home lol

*speaking of which, i feel inspiration coming on* lol

 

[Tupacfan]

most def...thats the blessing of wte...its not just a place of "check out my pieces"...its ventilation, a modern day coffee house *without the lames*, a gathering of misunderstood and lost prophecies, and most of all...a place i call home lol

*speaking of which, i feel inspiration coming on* lol

LOL, man thats why I keep coming back here.. Its like my 2nd home.. You and vsop my folks on this jawn..can't sleep on both of ya'll.. If its not me coming with the pieces, its either u or vsop.. Somebody is always taking care of the house LOL.. Folks come and go from here, but us 3, we hold it down.. That's whassup..

Lmao at inspiration coming on, I feel that..let the words flow and imma check for that right now..

 

[deaththreats]

Deeeeeeep....you're versatile...you battle rap and do deep poetry..good post