LE Tournament #2 SEMI-FINALS - Disciplined InSight -VS- thedesolateone

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This one should be good. I am pullin for D.I. though, only cause I want a shot at him as the champ again next time haha. Good luck guys
 
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R.I.P Desolateone...

No explanations needed, this loser's a dead duck on sight.
Your name makes sense now...what a waste you seriously suck at life.
You're a fucking lightweight. No time for stressing with chumps.
But you're caught in the mix of a batter..and left with definite lumps.
You're not on my level faggot. I'll break you with more hell open.
Your opportunity knocks without the ring..considering your doorbell's broken.
I'm militant with a pen. You'll get compound skull fractures all over.
The best part of waking up..you won't experience again so forget the Folgers.
Maintain composure, bitch. Matching wits against me, I dare you try it.
You never step out of line again..'cause your corpse is surrounded by it.
Look, it's a fact I'm brutal and your bars lacked aggravation.
His battles don't hold ANY weight..especially the ones with Gravitation.
Stray flights of iron projectiles black out your daylights.
You're the type..
..that's GLAAD to get physical, but there's no reason to exercise your gay rights.
You never was built for duels. I'm L.T..this bitch will get raped in this.
This beating was God given but you STILL remain in denial..a typical atheist.
 
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slaughter the lot of ya the tide will be crimson then * rick james voice:fuck your location*

all of your followers are swallowers they know discipline *fuck you trainin for?*

im a ryder , this is vehicular homicide to settle the score

on another plane when i train and when i bus i blow up your car *whoa*

damage your brains right hemispere im so nice *you need help with that?*

paralyze your whole leftside so you can be all right *you ok now?*

your avatar is for certain types you dont know what to do with that mic

no! its not a dildo and you aint tight !*ouch*

heres why this faggots cabbage in a basket like french revolution: *you still a fruit though*

my bars go over the champs head like a guillotine,comes down for lyrical execution *only hurt a bit*

i got insight a noose wrapped type breaks neck cartilage didnt even have to google it

cause i fill letters in and hang man from his branch of knowledge*a fool can never play a wiseman*

rakim is NOT the father ,insight of my balls*hello son*

use to dip my nuts in ginseng an tea bag your moms *she was askin for it*

when my metafives subract your metafours it leaves me the one remainder * a beautiful mind*

my shots bust through doors like kramer ,d.i.'s crown is in danger *most kings*
 
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God damn! This is an epic battle...

Looks like I will be battling the winner in the Finals as Tupacfan DQ'ed (wanted to see her spit, too).

I'm not going to vote but I will say my favourite part of each 16:

D.I.: All sorts of nice punches but my favourite was:

"The best part of waking up..you won't experience again so forget the Folgers"

That line had me laughing and at the same time was as slick as fuck.

thedesolateone: This might have been the strongest battle verse I have read from you so far.

Again, lots of ill lines but I killed myself laughing right away with that "* rick james voice:fuck your location*" adlib, that shit had me spitting my drink out of my nostrils and shit (reminding me of that hamburger guy who was throwing out the Jeezy adlibs during the last tournament)

Entertaining battle...peace
 
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Discipline InSight vs. Thedesolateone
This was a very good battle very creative and powerful!

Punchline: tie
Metphor: tie
Rhymes: tie
Multie: Discipline InSight
Verse: tie
Vocab: thedesolateone
Creative: tie
Structure: tie

Favorite line from Discipline InSight: you never was built for duels, I'm L.T will get raped in this/ This beating was God giving but you still remain in dinal a typical atheist.

Favorite line from thedesolateone: when my metafives subract your metafours it leave the one remainder * a beauitful mind*
Bust through doors like kramer, d.i's crown is in danger * most king*

This vote was very hard to choose, both came with strong lines, and strong images....I try to say tie...but my vote is thedesolateone.....and good luck to Discipline InSight your verse was very creative keep up the good work. And good luck to
both. Thanks for letting me vote.

Vote: thedesolateone
 
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Solid battle. I gotta go with Disciplined InSight on this one. I found his verse flowed a lot better, which just adds to the effectiveness of the punchline when it arrives. That folgers line was gold. He went in on his last four bars, pretty hard to top that. Desolate had a solid verse as well and although he had funnier punches, they weren't as precise as InSight's. Was hard to follow Desolate's flow at times, had to re-read it once or twice to get it, which shouldn't be the case in a battle.
 
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Im going with desolateone on this one.

I liked Insights folger line but after the plane, car, bus line i had made my decision.

Teabagging dides mom closed the casket
 
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Sorry I didn't vote on this battle. It's the first time I didn't vote and I should have. Looks like we will have a new champ soon! thedesolateone wins 2-1 and moves on to battle sniperk.
 
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