LE Tournament #1 ROUND TWO - thedesolateone versus esco soprano

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myspace not one pic of a girl/ closeted fag, reality shows your not on jersy shore growin up gotti/ 1

but you sing and your fat youll hit a soprano high note though like luciano pavorotti /2

letting italians stick dicks in your ass taking their last name and thats lame/ 3

gluttonous faggot belongs in a room thats padded/ thoughts of movin up the bracket nigga i run it/ 4

know you like mans on you but dont make me put hanz on you ...raekwon joe budden/ 5

you love to eat so ill give you two to your stomach /im not talking bout punches / 6

wanna see what you had at the luncheon /practically guarentee it aint hummus / 7

fuck plata you get plomo esco you know lead man/ 8

leave you in dirty ass jersey dead man bloodied in muddy waters say it with me... redman / 9

dont spit sick homo you just got mono/ 10

quit the ganstalicious shit esco fore i belt you till you cry uncle/ 11

make you tell them you dont come from that shit!then upload to youtube tommorrow. facebook that shit!/ 12

gansta is a facade but this ass whopping aint gonna be fake/ 13

peeped you hugging your moms on your myspace page/ 14

be humble or i will be buttplugging your moms then nut in her face while she expecting me to nut in her palms/ 15

lil colombo workis all it took and your gone/ oh and one more thing :get a bitch to braid your hair/ stay out the fuckin salon/ 16

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Big dreams in this tourney but rookies pray for my down fall

Trumpets should announce my arrival Newbies need to sound off

Rhymes is like slugs desolate can't kill me with salt

Not even Angelina it's not my fault

I been gone all this time and I’m still the nigga to beat

Esco in ur nightmares Dezzy a bitch let everyone hear u scream

No stopping this rampage bitch I am a "one" man A team

Desolate huh? if u so alone let these 16 keep u company

U have no style so x files u disappear with David Duchovny

U "cold" don’t worry I'm just warming up

true punchline king u don’t wanna start it up

I never really fucked with young niggaz that want attention

Masterful flow I can afford to waste barz on these kittens

I mean pussies as I stay on my p's

The "q"uestion is how can this skillful nigga get at "one" for the price of two

cheers this round is on me so all u young sergeants just fall in..... salute
 
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I'll be back to give my vote but I was very disappointed with this battle. Esco lookin' like Larry Holmes out chea....lyrically.

I'm also disappointed that Desolate based his entire verse on someone that isn't Esco Soprano, so it took away from what could have been a good battle verse. You also went waaaay over the 16 line limit even after the edit. Just 'cause you only have 16 line breaks don't mean it's only 16 bars, but I guess if Raw is willing to let you slide, I will too.
 
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Tha Killer;1955697 said:
I'll be back to give my vote but I was very disappointed with this battle. Esco lookin' like Larry Holmes out chea....lyrically.

I'm also disappointed that Desolate based his entire verse on someone that isn't Esco Soprano, so it took away from what could have been a good battle verse. You also went waaaay over the 16 line limit even after the edit. Just 'cause you only have 16 line breaks don't mean it's only 16 bars, but I guess if Raw is willing to let you slide, I will too.

I don't like moderating verses that are difficult to determine how many lines it has. It's obvious he has a unique flow, therefore it makes it hard to determine what is a line and BC some people rap fast, it's harder. And I didn't hear any complaints from esco after he saw his verse when I was talking to him out of this thread so I let it slide. My vote:

I really expected A LOT more from both of you. thedesolateone did well against The_Hamburger but he didn't bring the heat this time around for me. I saw one good line, unfortunately, I've heard this line many times (dead man bloodied in muddy waters say it with me... redman) so for me, it didn't hit hard. Other than that, I didn't see much creativity. For example:

be humble or i will be buttplugging your moms then nut in her face while she expecting me to nut in her palms/

Maybe tell me what you are buttplugging her like? Lol. Or you put nut in her face like what??? Maybe "I'm crazy for that crazy girl so I put NUT in her face" or "disrespect your moms and put "nut in her face" with the balls on her." ......but instead thedesolateone gave me "nut in her face while she expecting me to nut in her palms"

Both battlers had metaphors but maybe 1 or 2 punched for me from both their verses. For example:

Rhymes is like slugs desolate can't kill me with salt

Not even Angelina it's not my fault

This set had potential. I see the relation to slugs and salt but when you say your RHYMES are like SLUGS and you say desolate can't kill you with SALT, I don't see what salt does to humans or how it relates to music or guns since SLUGS also means bullets. It was like a hard punch that swung and missed. If you were battling a rapper named Angelina, it would've hit. Another weak line for example that didn't hit for obvious reasons was: myspace not one pic of a girl/ closeted fag, reality shows your not on jersy shore growin up gotti/ but you sing and your fat youll hit a soprano high note though like luciano pavorotti /2 because for some reason, he thought that myspace page was esco but regardless the punch didn't hit BC he's talking about esco hitting soprano high notes like pavorotti so I don't see how that's a diss.

Anyway, this was one of the few highlights that came from esco: Esco in ur nightmares Dezzy a bitch let everyone hear u scream because I see Esco as "Ghostface" and desolateone having a nightmare and "Scream"ing like a bitch. It was a good line. But I give thedesolateone's verse a 5 and esco soprano's a 5.5. You guys didn't give it your best shot for me this time around. I know you guys are capable of more.

Vote - Esco Soprano
 
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neither verse wasn't hard hitting but both had a few lines that caught my attention ...lyrically I would vote desolate 1.....but lets see how i can say this......a guy with a bomb in his hand but it goes off on himself.....since thats not "really" esco he's dissing then that makes Esco the winner in my eyes...damn desolate
 
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raw-material_ahh;1956138 said:
I don't like moderating verses that are difficult to determine how many lines it has. It's obvious he has a unique flow, therefore it makes it hard to determine what is a line and BC some people rap fast, it's harder. And I didn't hear any complaints from esco after he saw his verse when I was talking to him out of this thread so I let it slide. My vote:

I really expected A LOT more from both of you. thedesolateone did well against The_Hamburger but he didn't bring the heat this time around for me. I saw one good line, unfortunately, I've heard this line many times (dead man bloodied in muddy waters say it with me... redman) so for me, it didn't hit hard. Other than that, I didn't see much creativity. For example:
be humble or i will be buttplugging your moms then nut in her face while she expecting me to nut in her palms/
Maybe tell me what you are buttplugging her like? Lol. Or you put nut in her face like what??? Maybe "I'm crazy for that crazy girl so I put NUT in her face" or "disrespect your moms and put "nut in her face" with the balls on her." ......but instead thedesolateone gave me "nut in her face while she expecting me to nut in her palms"
Both battlers had metaphors but maybe 1 or 2 punched for me from both their verses. For example:
Rhymes is like slugs desolate can't kill me with salt
Not even Angelina it's not my fault
This set had potential. I see the relation to slugs and salt but when you say your RHYMES are like SLUGS and you say desolate can't kill you with SALT, I don't see what salt does to humans or how it relates to music or guns since SLUGS also means bullets. It was like a hard punch that swung and missed. If you were battling a rapper named Angelina, it would've hit. Another weak line for example that didn't hit for obvious reasons was: myspace not one pic of a girl/ closeted fag, reality shows your not on jersy shore growin up gotti/ but you sing and your fat youll hit a soprano high note though like luciano pavorotti /2 because for some reason, he thought that myspace page was esco but regardless the punch didn't hit BC he's talking about esco hitting soprano high notes like pavorotti so I don't see how that's a diss.
Anyway, this was one of the few highlights that came from esco: Esco in ur nightmares Dezzy a bitch let everyone hear u scream because I see Esco as "Ghostface" and desolateone having a nightmare and "Scream"ing like a bitch. It was a good line. But I give thedesolateone's verse a 5 and esco soprano's a 5.5. You guys didn't give it your best shot for me this time around. I know you guys are capable of more.

Vote - Esco Soprano

im butt pluggin her like like lil jack horner

anyway ill join the next tourney and have a load of punchlines and lyrical display.thanks now i know whats expected.i really wasnt ready to post because the verse looks different after you press reply and i was seeing how it looked but after i posted i noticed esco posted right after and i couldnt change it.i was still figuring out how to make it into sixteen and saying all the shit i wanted.
i axed a few lines and missed out on adding what i wanted in there.i was confused about what you meant by lines i wish you would of said bars in the description.and the soprano high noted line
was suppose to go with dicks in his ass but i didnt get a chance to flip it and make the 16 line mark i also though people would get it cause i say that line right after.still i think i had the stronger verse anyway you slice it and was surprised myself how weak escos verse was after hearing how you been building him up.
 
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thedesolateone;1959874 said:
im butt pluggin her like like lil jack horner

anyway ill join the next tourney and have a load of punchlines and lyrical display.thanks now i know whats expected.i really wasnt ready to post because the verse looks different after you press reply and i was seeing how it looked but after i posted i noticed esco posted right after and i couldnt change it.i was still figuring out how to make it into sixteen and saying all the shit i wanted.

i axed a few lines and missed out on adding what i wanted in there.i was confused about what you meant by lines i wish you would of said bars in the description.and the soprano high noted line

was suppose to go with dicks in his ass but i didnt get a chance to flip it and make the 16 line mark i also though people would get it cause i say that line right after.still i think i had the stronger verse anyway you slice it and was surprised myself how weak escos verse was after hearing how you been building him up.

It wasn't a matter of which verse made more sense to me, it was a matter of which verse hit harder for me. You haven't lost yet. You are down 0-2 and I hate to lose too but I didn't like either of your verses and I'm not the only one....

C.Melendez;1956307 said:
neither verse wasn't hard hitting...........

Tha Killer;1955697 said:
I'll be back to give my vote but I was very disappointed with this battle. Esco lookin' like Larry Holmes out chea....lyrically.

I'm also disappointed that Desolate based his entire verse on someone that isn't Esco Soprano, so it took away from what could have been a good battle verse. You also went waaaay over the 16 line limit even after the edit. Just 'cause you only have 16 line breaks don't mean it's only 16 bars, but I guess if Raw is willing to let you slide, I will too.

One guy didn't find your verses hard hitting and the other guy says Esco is rusty and comments on your misdirected lines. Even though you were dissing someone besides Esco, you still had personals on his name at least but it didn't hurt you at least in my voting that you were dissing some other guy. This was a hard battle to vote on BC I felt neither of you have any real good lines so it's hard to pick a clear winner. I just felt Esco BARELY BARELY BARELY got it. My bad man. Peace.
 
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The Angelina line was related to her movie salt. It's all good and to be expected after such a long layoff.
 
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Vote - Esco Soprano

I saw one good line from desolateonre, unfortunately, I've heard this line many times (dead man bloodied in muddy waters say it with me... redman) so for me, it didn't hit hard. Other than that, I didn't see much creativity. For example:
be humble or i will be buttplugging your moms then nut in her face while she expecting me to nut in her palms/
Maybe tell me what you are buttplugging her like? Lol. Or you put nut in her face like what??? Maybe "I'm crazy for that crazy girl so I put NUT in her face" or "disrespect your moms and put "nut in her face" with the balls on her." ......but instead thedesolateone gave me "nut in her face while she expecting me to nut in her palms"
Both battlers had metaphors but maybe 1 or 2 punched for me from both their verses. For example:
Rhymes is like slugs desolate can't kill me with salt
Not even Angelina it's not my fault
This set had potential. I see the relation to slugs and salt but when you say your RHYMES are like SLUGS and you say desolate can't kill you with SALT, I don't see what salt does to humans or how it relates to music or guns since SLUGS also means bullets. It was like a hard punch that swung and missed. If you were battling a rapper named Angelina, it would've hit. Another weak line for example that didn't hit for obvious reasons was: myspace not one pic of a girl/ closeted fag, reality shows your not on jersy shore growin up gotti/ but you sing and your fat youll hit a soprano high note though like luciano pavorotti /2 because for some reason, he thought that myspace page was esco but regardless the punch didn't hit BC he's talking about esco hitting soprano high notes like pavorotti so I don't see how that's a diss.
Anyway, this was one of the few highlights that came from esco: Esco in ur nightmares Dezzy a bitch let everyone hear u scream because I see Esco as "Ghostface" and desolateone having a nightmare and "Scream"ing like a bitch. It was a good line.

get out desolate
 
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thedesolateone;1968159 said:
the hamburger was too afraid to spit a verse against me

nigga im calling a rematch right now, u fucking faggot boy. shoulda subbed me in, i woulda beat esco easy. my 2 lines at esco >>>> anything you spit in ya whole verse

btw raw material, thats 3 - 0 votes, take this trash nigga outta here
 
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