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Tha Killer;1955697 said:I'll be back to give my vote but I was very disappointed with this battle. Esco lookin' like Larry Holmes out chea....lyrically.
I'm also disappointed that Desolate based his entire verse on someone that isn't Esco Soprano, so it took away from what could have been a good battle verse. You also went waaaay over the 16 line limit even after the edit. Just 'cause you only have 16 line breaks don't mean it's only 16 bars, but I guess if Raw is willing to let you slide, I will too.
raw-material_ahh;1956138 said:I don't like moderating verses that are difficult to determine how many lines it has. It's obvious he has a unique flow, therefore it makes it hard to determine what is a line and BC some people rap fast, it's harder. And I didn't hear any complaints from esco after he saw his verse when I was talking to him out of this thread so I let it slide. My vote:
I really expected A LOT more from both of you. thedesolateone did well against The_Hamburger but he didn't bring the heat this time around for me. I saw one good line, unfortunately, I've heard this line many times (dead man bloodied in muddy waters say it with me... redman) so for me, it didn't hit hard. Other than that, I didn't see much creativity. For example:
be humble or i will be buttplugging your moms then nut in her face while she expecting me to nut in her palms/
Maybe tell me what you are buttplugging her like? Lol. Or you put nut in her face like what??? Maybe "I'm crazy for that crazy girl so I put NUT in her face" or "disrespect your moms and put "nut in her face" with the balls on her." ......but instead thedesolateone gave me "nut in her face while she expecting me to nut in her palms"
Both battlers had metaphors but maybe 1 or 2 punched for me from both their verses. For example:
Rhymes is like slugs desolate can't kill me with salt
Not even Angelina it's not my fault
This set had potential. I see the relation to slugs and salt but when you say your RHYMES are like SLUGS and you say desolate can't kill you with SALT, I don't see what salt does to humans or how it relates to music or guns since SLUGS also means bullets. It was like a hard punch that swung and missed. If you were battling a rapper named Angelina, it would've hit. Another weak line for example that didn't hit for obvious reasons was: myspace not one pic of a girl/ closeted fag, reality shows your not on jersy shore growin up gotti/ but you sing and your fat youll hit a soprano high note though like luciano pavorotti /2 because for some reason, he thought that myspace page was esco but regardless the punch didn't hit BC he's talking about esco hitting soprano high notes like pavorotti so I don't see how that's a diss.
Anyway, this was one of the few highlights that came from esco: Esco in ur nightmares Dezzy a bitch let everyone hear u scream because I see Esco as "Ghostface" and desolateone having a nightmare and "Scream"ing like a bitch. It was a good line. But I give thedesolateone's verse a 5 and esco soprano's a 5.5. You guys didn't give it your best shot for me this time around. I know you guys are capable of more.
Vote - Esco Soprano
thedesolateone;1959874 said:im butt pluggin her like like lil jack horner
anyway ill join the next tourney and have a load of punchlines and lyrical display.thanks now i know whats expected.i really wasnt ready to post because the verse looks different after you press reply and i was seeing how it looked but after i posted i noticed esco posted right after and i couldnt change it.i was still figuring out how to make it into sixteen and saying all the shit i wanted.
i axed a few lines and missed out on adding what i wanted in there.i was confused about what you meant by lines i wish you would of said bars in the description.and the soprano high noted line
was suppose to go with dicks in his ass but i didnt get a chance to flip it and make the 16 line mark i also though people would get it cause i say that line right after.still i think i had the stronger verse anyway you slice it and was surprised myself how weak escos verse was after hearing how you been building him up.
C.Melendez;1956307 said:neither verse wasn't hard hitting...........
Tha Killer;1955697 said:I'll be back to give my vote but I was very disappointed with this battle. Esco lookin' like Larry Holmes out chea....lyrically.
I'm also disappointed that Desolate based his entire verse on someone that isn't Esco Soprano, so it took away from what could have been a good battle verse. You also went waaaay over the 16 line limit even after the edit. Just 'cause you only have 16 line breaks don't mean it's only 16 bars, but I guess if Raw is willing to let you slide, I will too.
esco soprano;1960781 said:The Angelina line was related to her movie salt. It's all good and to be expected after such a long layoff.
thedesolateone;1968159 said:the hamburger was too afraid to spit a verse against me