LE Tournament #1 ROUND ONE - NuffRespect versus Aquaf!nafloe

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tupacfan;1916006 said:
Aqua's punchlines were solid enough to get my vote.

I thought she went straight into the paint without getting technical or mythical.. She just braught it and even pointed out her flaws that way the rebuttal has really nothing to say that we don't know.. Gotta respect that cause it sho does takes guts to out out there LOL.

Nuffrespect, had some solid lines, but not enough for a knockout.. I like how he came off at the beginning.. It was nice and then something happen towards the ending. Maybe a few more lunch lines could had further determine my vote..

So Aqua it is..

thanks gurl! im lookin forward to seein what u come with as well we gota hold it down!
 
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I liked these lines:

Aquaf!nafloe

yea boy the chick had ta eat/ cooked him real well no longer its raw meat/ and he aint

got the juice so u know the nicca is lean/

That was one of the few metaphors in the whole battle and about the only creative writing I've seen. Most of the stuff I read was what you guys were going to do to each other but I didn't see much wordplay or metaphors. Where were the punches? I don't mean there was absolutely NONE. The scale was tipped a little bit to Aquaf!nafloe's way. I liked the flow I read in NuffRespect's verse but the lines were simple. Actually, they were simple on both sides. I would have liked to see more wordplay on both sides. Maybe an attempt to rhyme double or triple syllables even. Just saying. Nonetheless, vote - Aquaf!nafloe

She gets the KO. Thanks to both of y'all for battling. Good luck in round 2 Aquaf!nafloe.
 
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For me Nuff Respect wouldve won the battle if it had any aim to it......or even seemed like a battle......it seemed more like a good set of lines....

and Aqua just came raw, the patterns where kind of hard to break down how she rhyme but after reading i got it......and nuff respect you shit was super easy on the eyes and it just flowed naturally, like a verse supposed to.....but aqua just being a female and coming raw like she did..... i have to give her my vote.....just off the rawness alone.....but Nuff Respect if u aimed some of those bars are her directly u wouldve had my vote easy.........
 
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