KILL.I.AM. by VSOP *written to Dead Prez-this is life*

[Legend24]

This is deep. Never thought about it from this perspective before... good job shedding some light on a different point of view. Usually people just think about what the mother had to go through or how horrible the guy is, but rarely do people mention how the kid feels being the "result" of the abuse.

I am my mothers' mental escaped moments keepsake

I am past mistakes

and I cannot get past this fate

I have his face

Those last four bars hit it perfect. Keep up the work bro.

 

[VSOP]

This is deep. Never thought about it from this perspective before... good job shedding some light on a different point of view. Usually people just think about what the mother had to go through or how horrible the guy is, but rarely do people mention how the kid feels being the "result" of the abuse.

Those last four bars hit it perfect. Keep up the work bro.

appreciate it fam-wasn't really headin in this direction but thats where I was lead for some reason

I was tryin to write about myself and growin up and when I reread the first 10 or so lines-it jus sounded like a child of rape so I jus went with it

thanks for the feedback though, always good to see people read and reply in here. I know I need to do more of that myself

bless

 

[Tupacfan]

Vsop,
This was pretty deep like how legend said.. Very descriptive in ways I couldnt even imagine and I commend you for sharing with us, I appreciate that..

And like legend said, the last 4 bars hit hard..

Thanks again for sharing..

Peace and blessings fellow poet!

 

[REAL_POETICAL]

pure uncut excellence flowing through this piece man...you literally created a classic the moment i read the lines:

I am a king

aching in an iron mask

I am inside my laugh

I am turned inside out

uncomfortable in my own soul

fuck it every line was crazy...you went deep with this piece....bottom line excellent work

keep droppin those lines of scriptures that make dreams exist called poetry my fellow poet

peace

 

[raw-material_ahh]

9 months later and I am that little kid
turning from a baby to a little shit

that was hilarious!

 

[VSOP]

pure uncut excellence flowing through this piece man...you literally created a classic the moment i read the lines:

I am a king

aching in an iron mask

I am inside my laugh

I am turned inside out

uncomfortable in my own soul

fuck it every line was crazy...you went deep with this piece....bottom line excellent work

keep droppin those lines of scriptures that make dreams exist called poetry my fellow poet

peace

appreciate it homie

tryin to keep up with YOU RP! collab time? I got today and tomorrow off-down to ride to a beat and tell a story?

 

[REAL_POETICAL]

appreciate it homie

tryin to keep up with YOU RP! collab time? I got today and tomorrow off-down to ride to a beat and tell a story?

hell we could get that collab started now....get at me

 

[VSOP]

hell we could get that collab started now....get at me

hit you up with a pm-whutcha got in mind? we never did that war piece? or you got somethin else and do you wanna do it over a beat

jus let me know-if need be we can jus do it in body slam and we'll just tell people its me and you postin in that bitch-a RP and VSOP post only or some shit lol