Damn man. This shit was hot as fuck man. For 8 bars, I think you said more in 8 lines than most rappers say on their whole album. The opening line was fire. That Street Fighter reference was hot and hard to follow but you kept it pretty damn consistent. This nigga said "I be bench pressin' elephants and drop kickin' wolves/ I be ready for that half ass - the glock spit in full".
I'm impressed, sir, I'd like to see how versatile of a writer you are before I try to critique this piece too much.
I gotta say that your link is no good anymore though. You might wanna drop a new one or delete it altogether.
I'm impressed, sir, I'd like to see how versatile of a writer you are before I try to critique this piece too much.
I gotta say that your link is no good anymore though. You might wanna drop a new one or delete it altogether.
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