I Want You by Lex!

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The last 8 stanzas I like! Reasonates well with me..

Over all, this was a nice drop, but I kinda wish you went further in expressing the emotions there.. It was getting there then you kinda held back it seems like..

But as long as you have expressed what needed to be express!

Thanks for sharing and keep dropping em'

Peace.
 
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tupacfan;1627714 said:
The last 8 stanzas I like! Reasonates well with me..

Over all, this was a nice drop, but I kinda wish you went further in expressing the emotions there.. It was getting there then you kinda held back it seems like..

But as long as you have expressed what needed to be express!

Thanks for sharing and keep dropping em'

Peace.

thanks for the feedback and i will
 
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