Healing Process

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your wordplay and design of lines are impeccable....this piece is to the point and in depth at the same time...i can feel the emotion through the piece as if the pen is moving but the person thats moving the pen is going in speed while the room is at pace....bottom line good stuff as always

keep dropping those words to open the hearts of many called poetry my fellow poetress

peace
 
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Thanks for the feedback real p,

Preciate that, especially coming from a poetical standpoint!

I'm still working on this piece, as time progresses I'll be adding more to it..

Its about me recovering from almost a 3 year battle with cancer and luekemia on and off, going into several remissions and as I type I lie from my hospital bed, Its amazing how I've overcome my triumphs with the illness, not to mention having to be in a silent state at one point (coma) so yea this piece reflects all of that..

Peace!
Thanks for reading again, its very rare I share my deep personal spiritual drops so ya'll is lucky! Haha!
 
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Love the emotion and the worldplay. Cant wait until you finish it. Stay strong and keep your mind thinking positive and you can defeat anything.
 
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Aye chozenone,

Thanks for positive feedback, thus feeding me positive energy! Indeed when its completed I'll re-edit the final touchings..

Again thnx for reading!
 
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