"Fire In Me" Written by: AK.aPHillYisILL

[Tupacfan]

The rhyme schme was somewhat on point! I thought this was decent.. But man, all the b words, the f words... Why so hostile? LOL.. Over all, I enjoyed reading it..

There were a few lines that were nice, and keep writing.. Hope to read more of your material..btw, this may get moved to RTM, its like keystyle freestyle content..

Peace!

 

[Tupacfan]

O I fail to mention, the topic def fits well.. Fire in me, I def sensed that rage..

 

[AK.aPHillYisILL]

Thanks! Appreciate the feedback! Yeah, it's pretty angry. But that's how I felt when I wrote this about a month back. I have hella note pads though with nothing but lyrics i've written over the years. I'll put a couple more up.

 

[Tupacfan]

Thanks! Appreciate the feedback! Yeah, it's pretty angry. But that's how I felt when I wrote this about a month back. I have hella note pads though with nothing but lyrics i've written over the years. I'll put a couple more up.

I feel it, writing whatever is on your mind is the best way to go, expressing your emotions usually results into a great read like this one..

yea drop some ore.. im always down for reading and giving feedback..

 

[bankrupt baller]

it was just ok........no hate though

 

[AK.aPHillYisILL]

I feel it, writing whatever is on your mind is the best way to go, expressing your emotions usually results into a great read like this one..

yea drop some ore.. im always down for reading and giving feedback..

Fo sho! I appreciate it! I'll be sure to be dropping more.

 

[Sourpatch Kid]

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[bankrupt baller]

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lol thats phucked up

 

[AK.aPHillYisILL]

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Thanks dude! Laughed my ass off when I saw that!
It don't phase me. Not everyone is gonna like it.
It's not like i'm going to be a future rap star in my life so fuck it.
Love it or hate it, I respect everyone's opinion.

 

[Sourpatch Kid]

Thanks dude! Laughed my ass off when I saw that!

It don't phase me. Not everyone is gonna like it.

It's not like i'm going to be a future rap star in my life so fuck it.

Love it or hate it, I respect everyone's opinion.

Na, don't give up on your passion, shit, that flow was definitely a million times better than Soujah Boy or even 90 percent of this generations rap. Confidence can get you everywhere in life, trust me.

 

[AK.aPHillYisILL]

Na, don't give up on your passion, shit, that flow was definitely a million times better than Soujah Boy or even 90 percent of this generations rap. Confidence can get you everywhere in life, trust me.

Appreciate it man! I just like to write some shit down. Whatever comes out, it don't matter. I jot it down. But thanks!

 

[Tupacfan]

Go to the poets introduction thread and introduce yourself... it's the first thread of this forum....