the Story of my Birth Parents by VSOP *written to joe budden-sober up*

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Dam!

This is just sooooo friggin deep! Like fa real..

You took us into detail, the rhyme scheme was sadly nice... Was well written.. I'm speechless over all.. And def felt.. Glad you shared this with us and I hope all is well and at peace with you bruh! We all been going thru some stuff and I think that's why its kinda empty in here.. You know it was cracckin with us 3.. Shit is stall..

Neways, I enjoyed this poetic piece.. Very heart felt and be thankful your still here. I'd love to share my personal stor one of these days about birth moms and pops..

Peace!
 
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tupacfan;1447600 said:
Dam!

This is just sooooo friggin deep! Like fa real..

You took us into detail, the rhyme scheme was sadly nice... Was well written.. I'm speechless over all.. And def felt.. Glad you shared this with us and I hope all is well and at peace with you bruh! We all been going thru some stuff and I think that's why its kinda empty in here.. You know it was cracckin with us 3.. Shit is stall..

Neways, I enjoyed this poetic piece.. Very heart felt and be thankful your still here. I'd love to share my personal stor one of these days about birth moms and pops..

Peace!

thanks mama

I dont know shit about my birth parents but what the papers tell me and the part about my birthmom dyin in a car accident a few weeks after I got adopted

other than that..this was more of "I wonder what they went through" type shit ya feel me?

appreciate the feedback-ill get back to your pieces when I get a minute

been mad busy since I jus moved back home after 2 years
 
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VSOP;1489594 said:
thanks mama

I dont know shit about my birth parents but what the papers tell me and the part about my birthmom dyin in a car accident a few weeks after I got adopted

other than that..this was more of "I wonder what they went through" type shit ya feel me?

appreciate the feedback-ill get back to your pieces when I get a minute

been mad busy since I jus moved back home after 2 years

I feel it.. Goad your able to express it the way you think..

that must be hard being left with no roots of your history or who you are..

I know I been busy too, but I try and make time for poetry in the mist of a lot of unwanted drama.

Keep writing and may peace be upon you bruh!
 
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tupacfan;1490347 said:
I feel it.. Goad your able to express it the way you think..

that must be hard being left with no roots of your history or who you are..

I know I been busy too, but I try and make time for poetry in the mist of a lot of unwanted drama.

Keep writing and may peace be upon you bruh!

you aint lyin

its definitely somethin I had to come to grips with as far as who am I and where did I come from ya feel me?

I jus adopted my surroundings and started my family tree with me being the roots and jus go from there

hopefully soon ill plant that SEED *pun intended* and grow this mufukin forest lol
 
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VSOP;1496632 said:
you aint lyin

its definitely somethin I had to come to grips with as far as who am I and where did I come from ya feel me?

I jus adopted my surroundings and started my family tree with me being the roots and jus go from there

hopefully soon ill plant that SEED *pun intended* and grow this mufukin forest lol

I can only imagine VSOP! Having to come to grips with just that is nothing easy.

But like you mention, starting your own family tree is part of the healing process so go on ahead and plant them seeds thru the empty forests and soon it'll spring up sons and daughters :)

LOL at pun intended..
 
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