Eyerone- I C Dead People [the iLL Community diss] (audio inside)

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Did I fuck around and get your emotional ass sent to a psychologist? Because this is exactly what a psychologist would tell somebody in emotional distress to do before they put them on medication to ease psychological trauma.



"Eyerone, I want you to go home and write out your feelings and express yourself through art, OK? It's perfectly acceptable to be angry when you're being bullied. We're not here to judge you. We're here to make you better; both spiritually & emotionally."




"GOT THE NERVE TO SAY IM DUCKIN NIGGAS LIKE WE WONT SHOW UP!"
-Irony

...Yeah you showed up alright. TO THE STUDIO (-_-) With a Murse, a pink diary with my face on it, a soggy tear soaked itenerary, and a whole 99 bar, 8 minute Love note written in your own period blood.

So just as I said, you gone keep moving the goal post. First you gone show up to Texas to kill Jamel. Now it's, "well, maybe I'll just show up to my cousin's house to kill Jamel and Darc............LYRICALLY."

I knowwww, I knoooow, you're still going to Texas to shoot at Jamel and his family. You still coming to Cali to kill me. U just wanted to write a love poem about it first right?

FUCKIN DUCK lol
 
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Did I fuck around and get your emotional ass sent to a psychologist? Because this is exactly what a psychologist would tell somebody in emotional distress to do before they put them on medication to ease psychological trauma.



"Eyerone, I want you to go home and write out your feelings and express yourself through art, OK? It's perfectly acceptable to be angry when you're being bullied. We're not here to judge you. We're here to make you better; both spiritually & emotionally."




"GOT THE NERVE TO SAY IM DUCKIN NIGGAS LIKE WE WONT SHOW UP!"
-Irony

...Yeah you showed up alright. TO THE STUDIO (-_-) With a Murse, a pink diary with my face on it, and a whole 99 bar, 8 minute Love note written in your own period blood.

So just as I said, you gone keep moving the goal post. First you gone show up to Texas to kill Jamel. Now it's, "well, maybe I'll just show up to my cousin's house to kill Jamel and Darc............LYRICALLY."

I knowwww, I knoooow, you're still going to Texas to shoot at Jamel and his family. You still coming to Cali to kill me. U just wanted to write a love poem about it first right?

FUCKIN DUCK lol

F*** all that Darc. Get in the booth and record that response my nigga. I know you got bars.
 
@irony here's my critique

Beat - meh not a fan of the dull suicidal drake beats

Flow - u was spitting

Lyrics - mos def had bars and good metaphors

Disses - the ones u had were dope but there weren't enough at all...i wouldnt consider this a diss track, its a track with some disses in it. I expected bar for bar disses but u were showcasing your skill more than Ethering niggas for 8 minutes

Overall i give this 4/5 Kat nudes
 
Now, for some honest commentary about the song itself:



1.
Salute for responding like a true studio gangsta. SAYING you gone do a lot of shit. Then RAPPING abuot doing the shit. But never actually doing it.

2. You really spent like a week on this shit. Literally asking people what rhymed with DarcSkies and all you came up with was 8 minutes of basic A,B,C rapper lyrics that can pretty much be summed up to, "You're gay. I hate Jamel & Allergins and it hurts my feelings that you all dont take me seriously as an established thug...and here's a poem about it."



Nigga you could've just written a Haiku and called it a day.

3. I will admit you not as wack as I thought you'd be. Your flow is actually nice but your lyrics are lacking. You're an A,B,C rapper with a flow but no ability to make a club banger. Which mean's your career is DOA.

But good effort. You still getting the shit sonned outta you periodically when Im on here. But salute for doing something new.
 
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