Hey ya'll!
this is fiyah! I'm diggin this jawn very much, the collab and the vibe cheaaa..
My favorite:
all these men here..whats a girl to do? its boring and flooring, the lengths they go to...but then i meet eyes with who..he's so smooth and his looks so classicly new...i cant resist, but i hold back because his eyes have a familiar mist..that grin has a familiar twist..and it seems like a familiar risk...but i wink at him and switch the hips at em..in such a way that has to be witnessed as nothing else except "come and get it"
and this one:
snap out of it/ ego trip back to square one/ she approached me and quiet moments have begun/ break the ice break the ice/ you look like a past when i was leaning/ back when you were schemish/ love interest temporary/ why though its not scary to fall in love/ just hold my hand and pray above/ enough about the rambling/ one question to ask you?.....are you familiar a committee called M.I.C...if so do you remember a fellow named real to the p....if then when can you and he meet at the place that was left out of memory...undo the cuff and lets be free if you remember he as he is me
I enjoyed reading this..
Good job, the flow and the rhyme scheme was dizzope..