back where we left off *REAL POETICAL & jayy.prime collab*

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I read this joint a few days ago but this was da first time I had a chance to comment. You two always had some great chemistry when it came to joints like this. The build up to ya'll finally talkin to each other in that was crazy. Very detailed, I could picture some crazy club sence off of Casablanca or somethin ya know. That last line at the end RP killed it to me. We NEED to get this collabo goin soon! Much props..1
 
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thanks for the props....we most def need to get this collab on and ready...like i sad i got all the time in the world...its just a matter of getting together on one accord instead of chasing each other down lol
 
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Hey ya'll!

this is fiyah! I'm diggin this jawn very much, the collab and the vibe cheaaa..

My favorite:

all these men here..whats a girl to do? its boring and flooring, the lengths they go to...but then i meet eyes with who..he's so smooth and his looks so classicly new...i cant resist, but i hold back because his eyes have a familiar mist..that grin has a familiar twist..and it seems like a familiar risk...but i wink at him and switch the hips at em..in such a way that has to be witnessed as nothing else except "come and get it"

and this one:

snap out of it/ ego trip back to square one/ she approached me and quiet moments have begun/ break the ice break the ice/ you look like a past when i was leaning/ back when you were schemish/ love interest temporary/ why though its not scary to fall in love/ just hold my hand and pray above/ enough about the rambling/ one question to ask you?.....are you familiar a committee called M.I.C...if so do you remember a fellow named real to the p....if then when can you and he meet at the place that was left out of memory...undo the cuff and lets be free if you remember he as he is me

I enjoyed reading this..

Good job, the flow and the rhyme scheme was dizzope..
 
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