a dream

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<-is gonna drop a piece called dreams so i can be cool too lol

good heartbreak joint Jay-me n you need to get off this broken heart shit that we've been on for the past few years
 
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mannn who you tellin? it seems like everything i touch turns to shit....blah....at least its good writing material....you do have a point though :-/
 
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shhiiiii..you think you got it bad...wait till you read my next piece I just wrote

thats "fucked up" in a nutshell lol
 
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ahhh Jay, this piece was just heartbreaking touching... surreal lol..

I think we could all relate..

it's crazy I ain't really mess with any love jawn's but I'm thinking of creating some from a previous unwarranted relationship..

These last stanza's

my love stayed

his departed

so quick...

the vibe is so different now

things feeling different now..

i wish so bad that

i could just have you now

but it doesn't work that way..

because your feelings aren't the same

while mine simply stayed..

stubborn, like me....what can i say?

but the devastating truth is,

you'll continue your dreams of her

i'll continue my dreams of you

and i'll remind myself that

"it was all a dream..."

it's insanely true and relatable lol..

Thanks for sharing this piece with us by the way.
 
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