WTE Challenge: Breath of the Month..

[RuffDraft]

I think that's a great idea, tupacfan!! It'd definitely make me wanna write and it would also be great if we did have a topic to stick to, maybe some months we'd have a topic and others we would not.

Or the topics that you choose can be interpreted in ways, i.e. your feeling at the very moment; so that it doesn't box the writer into discussing something that they're unfamiliar with, but all the same, it's great to challenge!

 

[Tupacfan]

I think that's a great idea, tupacfan!! It'd definitely make me wanna write and it would also be great if we did have a topic to stick to, maybe some months we'd have a topic and others we would not.

Or the topics that you choose can be interpreted in ways, i.e. your feeling at the very moment; so that it doesn't box the writer into discussing something that they're unfamiliar with, but all the same, it's great to challenge!

Thank you for your suggestion, I will definitley give that a serious consideration Ruff Draft. Sticking with a topic would be nice. And we can change that from month to month.

I agree, it's a great challenge for all of us..

Again, thanks for your suggestions ruff draft! preciate that!

 

[VSOP]

Poets of WTE,

Another IC mod gave me an idea a few months back, about creating breath of the month.. Thus would ential all the poets to join, and create a poem of 16 stanza's... about anything, or maybe I give a topic for ya'll to work with..Then I will have judges vote on them, and who ever with the most votes for their poems, can be breath of the month for WTE.. now the winner's poem that won, will have their poem posted as a sticky for the month that he or she won.

As for who the judges will be, I'm gonna have to speak to a few other's on here.. 'm thinking the other two wte mods, tha killa and blackrain...

YOUR THOUGHTS??????

anybody with suggestions, please don't hesitate to share em' with me.

I'm down for whatever lets get this jawn goin......

(Ill do my best to follow the rules of "Stanza" ...go back to the years of creative writing class, which was the only class that I was good at....but I failed, but Ill still try lol)

 

[Tupacfan]

I'm down for whatever lets get this jawn goin......

(Ill do my best to follow the rules of "Stanza" ...go back to the years of creative writing class, which was the only class that I was good at....but I failed, but Ill still try lol)

lol, fa sho VSOP! i' just waiting for the poets to come thru and agree that they willing to participate..

I think it's always gon be us 3 (me, Real p, and you) here thou.. cause man, ayebody just comea and goes lol..

 

[Tupacfan]

smh! i fell off HARD from this site!!!!

 

[VSOP]

we all did, once they did that big overhaul and people couldn't sign on or access it, they lost a lot of good ass people. whaddayagonnado

 

[Lhagic]

 

[onegod]

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[Tupacfan]

we all did, once they did that big overhaul and people couldn't sign on or access it, they lost a lot of good ass people. whaddayagonnado

Smh. Literally 7+ plus months later im reaponding.

 

[gemami]

The sun shines on my heart

I feel it radiate

The darkness parts

It beats loves rhythm

Can you feel it in the streets?

Can you tap it with your feet?

The forest of shadows

Grows ever so dark

When you let them in

To taste a golden heart

They try to hold you down

Tell you your not good enough

To move through the sound

The sound of misery

The sound of addition

The very sound that takes your spirit and kills it

When God lives within, they can’t win

God is greater than you and me

Greater than the demons that live in your head

They can’t sing the song of love

They can’t find the beat

They don’t have its rhythm

They will feel defeat

When they hear the song of LOVE

Tapping to joy, tapping for happiness

Making God tap is toes

Giggling and laughing at his foes

God knows a person’s intent

If it falls short, he reinvents

I’ve tasted death and lived through it

I’ve been held down and said screw it

Now is my time to rise up

Are you ready for a big cup of

I will not shut the fuck up

 

[geechiedanbuford214]

The sun shines on my heart

I feel it radiate

The darkness parts

It beats loves rhythm

Can you feel it in the streets?

Can you tap it with your feet?

The forest of shadows

Grows ever so dark

When you let them in

To taste a golden heart

They try to hold you down

Tell you your not good enough

To move through the sound

The sound of misery

The sound of addition

The very sound that takes your spirit and kills it

When God lives within, they can’t win

God is greater than you and me

Greater than the demons that live in your head

They can’t sing the song of love

They can’t find the beat

They don’t have its rhythm

They will feel defeat

When they hear the song of LOVE

Tapping to joy, tapping for happiness

Making God tap is toes

Giggling and laughing at his foes

God knows a person’s intent

If it falls short, he reinvents

I’ve tasted death and lived through it

I’ve been held down and said screw it

Now is my time to rise up

Are you ready for a big cup of

I will not shut the fuck up

I can definitely gig this jawn

 

[Tupacfan]

Keep em coming!

 

[yahwehprofet]

Riots how can I keep quiet

My soul yearns to preach

And reach anyone

There are plenty of us

Giants who triumph

When we're in a fire

Justice shoulda been

Coulda been

My next To kin

28. Not Mexican

Old and young

Freddy gray

Rest in peace

Your life was ochrestrated

Cuz pd was Masonic decorated

Glad some who hate it

 

[emaculate]

Sensual

Ice

Rubbed all over your body

Carmel cubes consumed

Laying on a bed of rose petals

I caress

You feel more comfortable

Slowly undress

You wiggle

tickled

As satin panties come off

The energy electric

Potential motion becomes Kinetic

Hearts sweat tears

Minds bodies souls

All Powerful together

Rain drops hit the window ceil

Thunder and lightning

Roar visible through the window pane

Love not lust

Enchanting how in this situation

We became tied to one another

Passions blasting

Climax in actions

Thrusts closed caption

Touch

Orgasims

At last it has happened

Thankful for a birth

Finally it's happened

Pleasure and excitement

Turns to quietness

Zzz of silence

Thankful for you

Grateful to be faithful

Thank you's to the Angels

To the Heavens

To the Most High

& 9 months later

A burst of new life

The time between was all but a dream

Reality a mix of peace

Pride power

Serene Difficulties

6 years deep

To one night of love

To create our love

Our blood shall run everlasting

 

[Tupacfan]

emaculate... That jawn was nice! I like the last stanzas. Thank you for sharing.

Yahwehprofet, I loved the multi rhymes.. And I felt this piece and I'm sure plenty folks can sympathize. Thank you for sharing... Jah bless!

 

[FiyahRaps]

Zoom zoom im racing escaping this reality grasping no concept calamity ive fallen cant get up mind altering steps faltering.Chasing a dream i think i fell and missedKiss of death times up no hope left so i turn the page ink stains my hands my hands they itch money green like yo bitch when she see meAint got shit to say cant beat me my mouth dont run but my hands they walk so ill walk on her face make her rethink twice bout swinging my waySidetracked i switch lanes back on it cant shake this thang my future calling but i wont answer still got messages from the past i left last present aint left yet so why talk to the future when my present still relevanyI teach a speech of a million words insults unheard of my insides they burn up see why they call me fiyah bc my flow hard and i burn hotter the more i write the harder i fightMy haters they motivate help me create let the words escape a destination unknown but in solice it will find homeIngrained n the membrane forever and alw!

ays so i treat the beat like a reverend and i praise it giving a voice to the voiceless choice to the choiceles

 

[FiyahRaps]

Wats the point of life to wake up one morning and watch it all crash and burn n the blink of an eye. Wats the point of love to wear your heart on your sleave jus to watch it get ripped off like a glove. Why feel when nothing is ever real why hope when all your gonna do is lose your soul why pray when uve asked god the same thing everyday with no change why care when your the only one fighting why trust when your blood just turns to must when the wounds r

open why give is u never get what's the point of trying when n the end your only good at dying

 

[Max.]

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[Tupacfan]

Fiyahraps,

You came with it. Thank you for sharing and keep dropping your material here.

 

[emaculate]

Greetings

Magnificent manifestations

From mental motivations

Magnified through inner lenses

Lenses from within

Him her who he she

We continue to speak without understanding listening communication is body language that’s when we are most in synch

Syncopy sinking sinking deeper than deeply

Thinking dreaming wondering pondering enduring persevering through it all

Was it a mighty fall? Was it a forceful plunge? What did you succumb? What have you become?

How have you come? The pausing in and out of salting cream with milk over ice and strawberries

This delicacy is a delicate dwelling divine

Where fusion of mind and the things upsetting

Meet and discuss differences and opinions after spare ribs

This was the beginning adding space and time

As we travel the mind the minds we all are inclined

To deliver lines and spells through turmoil to excell

Experience life as is so serious as is not to be seriously taken however there may be those scenarios we evolve forward fold fall foil

Peace be with you and with me may peace be

Rest assured you will overcome and become what is true to thee...thank you for your time.