Written Therapy

[Tupacfan]

Legend,

This was a nice piece and vee relatable all the way around. Writing is defintely a thearpy for a lot of us, another form of expression.

So many lines stood out to me but I'm mobile so I can't copy and paste, but over all good job and keep up the good work fellow poet!

Peace!

 

[raw-material_ahh]

It's like asking why safes have locks, why do banks have vaults? To protect our investments

I liked that part a lot.

 

[Legend24]

Thanks for the feedback guys. Tried a bit of a different style this time around; the first 16 bars were a lot more simple and straight to the point than I'm used to but I think it came out aight.

 

[VSOP]

yo im feelin this

great piece, definitely inspirational with the wordplay

Why does my pen cry?

To make up for all the tears that never left my eyes.

Why is this device the only key to my thoughts?

It's like asking why safes have locks, why do banks have vaults?

thas my shit

keep writin fam

 

[Legend24]

yo im feelin this

great piece, definitely inspirational with the wordplay

thas my shit

keep writin fam

Thanks bro, I appreciate you dropping in. Peacee...