DrMindbender122
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Excellent work. Is this about a loved one/relative or a guy thinking about a lost love? Either way, great poem.
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DrMindbender122;1650028 said:Excellent work. Is this about a loved one/relative or a guy thinking about a lost love? Either way, great poem.
L.I.P.;1652836 said:I have this feeling about my mom sometime.......thanks for sharing this i might post something i have similar to this sometime.
My favorite lines:
"You can remember her only
that she is gone.
Or you can cherish her memory
And let her live on,
You can cry and close your mind,
Be empty and turn your back,
Or you can do what she would want,
Smile, open your eyes, love, and go on. "
good piece!
Rocket Kidd;1657448 said:this hit me right in the heart.
tupacfan;83845 said:When she's gone,
You can shed tears that she is gone.
Or you can smile because she has lived.
You can close your eyes and pray,
That she will come back,
Or you can open your eyes.
And see all that she has left.
Your heart can be empty,
because you can’t see her,
Or you can be full of love,
That you shared.
You can turn your back
Tomorrow and live yesterday,
Or you can be happy for tomorrow,
Because of yesterday.
You can remember her only
that she is gone.
Or you can cherish her memory
And let her live on,
You can cry and close your mind,
Be empty and turn your back,
Or you can do what she would want,
Smile, open your eyes, love, and go on.
By 2pacfan 11/23/2010
felliwonda;c-8421668 said:Dope poem I like what you did there I could relate to it about another she but after you explained who she would be I said ok I see i see lol good poem