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Legend24

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Nice piece... short and effective. Simple to interpret and definitely gets the message across.

Not a metaphor but you don't know bad I wish it was
Took me 25 years to realize how bad I miss your hugs

I enjoyed that line. Not sure if you forgot to put the word "how" in between 'know' and 'bad' or if it was intentional, but it's a solid couple bars regardless. Keep up the good work.
 
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