TIME by Darxwell B-)

[Tupacfan]

This was just beautifully writen! I sooo enjoyed this Darxwell!

The word play, the metaphors is just bananas.. Makes me think further out the box, as far as metaphors..

I feel I can never top this at the moment hehehe.. so many lines just stuck and had me thinking as well.

But this one hit hard though

"I ripped the hands off my clocks, forever didnt seem different

I made no apologizes and surely wasnt forgiven

With no apologies made, I partook the forbidden

With no beginning or end with time in suspension

I daydreamed of better days, to my past, I paid no attention

With my love I walked barefoot through the garden of Eden

Long since abandoned, we found an apple unbitten

As she picked up the fruit we joined eyes for an instant

We knew love, we knew pain, we knew hate in all its Dimensions

We imagined what we'd know when even the word "when" was no longer a hinderance

I tried to travel to the future to get an answer to this

But "tomorrow" and "later" did not exist

With knowledge in her hand I asked, "answer me this..."

The air, the dirt, you, me, your scent...

if it'll always be here, Why appreciate it? "

Well done Darxwell, well done..

*gives round of applause..

and keep sharing with us right here.. You know I'll be reading and giving feedback. Plus you may inspire the people on writers block lol..

peace darxwell..