This Is America Baby

[emaculate]

Very ill. I liked the rhymes and metaphorical imagery. The Dark knight on a dark night....

And I enjoyed we didn't make t one too. The way you ended it was crucial. From it was like you knew my heart so much i didn't have to speak...

Hope I didn't butcher any lines.

 

[TheCoach757]

@emaculate thank you i appreciate that and its cool atleast you paid attention to to what it was about lol

 

[yahwehprofet]

Lauryn hill like.....

Dope

My sister the world is yours

Love lost but never in the floss

Of your cross

Yahweh all day for those who pray and have the Faith

And see injustice

I can only trust this

Ours are few and unseen

Even in my iPod screen

Evils more like d'evils

The fallen are calling for my sou

Never that keep that Pharoahe's gold

 

[TheCoach757]

@yahwehprofet thanks i appreciate that

 

[yahwehprofet]

@yahwehprofet thanks i appreciate that

U got that Lauryn 2.0!

Right??? Laid it all out.... On MTVS DIME. How anointed and highly favored is that

 

[Tupacfan]

I loved this piece. One of my favorites thus far.. Please keep sharing, because this ish was ill all the way around.

 

[TheCoach757]

@Tupacfan thank you i appreciate that alot thanks for taking the time out to watch and listen to it