The scorn of the elderly to youth

[Tupacfan]

This is another dope piece coming from you..
I enjoyed reading this, and I loved the metaphors being dropped in here.. The word play was sick! Every line was felt and sooo vivid. This definitely gave me a vivid image..

A solid nice piece right here..

Thanks for sharing and keep on sharing with us..

 

[deaththreats]

I found truth in your tongue

and it was bittersweet

I ran from blades of fire

and found the green moon

But i was swept home on the wind

However, the ocean forever beckons

I answered her once

and found a siren. she returned to the ocean with another peice of my essence

I found the value of honesty in a dungeon

but my sentence finished too soon

The word seventeen is no longer in my arsenal

This was my favorite part...nice poetry..preciate you for posting

 

[TheCATthatdidntDIE]

thanks for the positive feed back.