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@qwayshawn check out my website with +35 available beats
Rum Middleton
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@sweltobeats that beat is raw jack!! For me though, speed the tempo up and i'll bounce all over that one..
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@French-Bad-Boy Yeah, an industrial beat. Not bad man.
I think that the main idea is ok, just you can give more movement to the track, groove it is too much rigid IMO. Mix overall could be better, everything should sounds louder if you want to sell this joint.
I think that the main idea is ok, just you can give more movement to the track, groove it is too much rigid IMO. Mix overall could be better, everything should sounds louder if you want to sell this joint.
sweltobeats;8749130 said:My first post here.
I would like also to spend 2 words to introduce myself: I'm a rapper/producer from Rome.
I started to produce rap in 2001, in these years I have produced lots of artists in Italy and now I feel ready to push my music out from my country.
Trying to improve every single day since 2001, this is my philosophy.
Let's go with some short reviews:
@i ro ny: "Stuck in forever". Your rap is mature. Dope classics vibes. I like the main idea of that sampled beat, even though I think that some rhytm variations on the drum would help. Mix quality is good. I think that if you put a soul singer (call me crazy but I see a male white voice) for a melodic refrain you will have a professional and competitive single. Overall I like this track, you made a great job. "fuckin fire" video: the quality of the video is good, I like also the color correction. Movement of Mc's are natural, and this is good, but you need a history (also a very short hystory), maybe in another location with other people. Only playback videos are annoying watchers IMO. Beat sounds very good, rap is dope.
@"Money Machine" . First of all I like your nick name. "Chilled e Dressed". The quality of voice should be better, the rap of the verses isn't bad. The refrain idea works for live performances, but voices mixing is too confusing . Beat sounds a little beat weak, and it needs more arrangement on the refrain IMO. The song is too long: 5:46 are too much for an unknow artist. It is better to leave a good impression with a shorter song than risk that a person doesn't listen to the whole track. Remember that also for youtube SEO it is important the duration view, and in general it is better that a person want more to listen from you. My recommendation is to put your best rhymes in shorter verses, so you can make a better impression. Finally, I recommend you to make lyrics video, as I sayd, I'm not a native English, so If I listen to a recorded track I can understand around 20-30% of lyrics, but if lyrics are written I can understand 90% of it. Half world is like me, so let's start to think that your potential public is everywhere and not only in your country. "Cocaine fenders": same type of refrain. I see the same problem of the quality of voices. This beat sounds better.
@"j wyze" : I can't watch your video, the url is not working.
@"Louis Devinear" : "Still me". Professional flow, you are the best rapper I've listened here. Top quality rap for both verses, the first one is a little bit better IMO. Sampled beat is well done, quality of the mix is ok. I'm not a fan of the empty refrain, and this is the major critique I have to do. I think that a good refrain is the key to have a professional track. I think also that you could put more variations on the beat, maybe rhytm variations on the drums to let the work more dynamic. Overall this a really nice song, the best I've listened here!
@qawshun "05 adore". The audio quality you have started is ok, so I'm sure that the final work will sounds good. Rap is good, I'm not a fan of thys kind of beat, but it works. The beat could have more emotional variation, I see a piano or a string pattern on the second part of the verse, it should give you more movement to the song. As I said, I'm not a fan of the empty refrain, but this is just me. Overall it is a good track.
@"Rum Middleton " Human nature". Man, I really like this kind of beat. I don't like the sample sound of the hit hat on the refrain, but this is me. I think also that the drum should sounds louder. Singer goes sometimes out with notes, if you are not a fan of autotune, you can use the melodyne, waves tune or some plug-in like that to adjust the intonation. Apart from the voice quality that could sounds better, nothing to say about the rap verses. The video is too amateur, why don't you create lyrics video? Expand your public man, this solution works better than a not professional video. "slow motion": song quality is not good man. The voice doesn't have high frequencies, why? I apprecciate your efforts to shot scenes in different locations, creating an history, but the video quality is not ok. You need a color correction, some frames are really moved, the result overall is too much amateur.
@jon0hyfbg "Wishing Well". A Snoop dog type refrain. Am I wrong? The refrain works well, I listen to this song once and I'm sure that i will remember the melody tomorrow. I like these vibes man. The quality of the voice could be better, rap in verses is ok, but sometimes I feel that sounds not 100% natural. Why don't you try to record the verses in a more relaxed way? I like your chilly beat.
My latest:
This is a beat inspired to the track "White Iverson" of Post Malone.
If you really like it, you can lalso leave a comment on YT, I would really apprecciate that
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hey man, thanks for the in-depth review of the music.
imma check out more of your beats. i didnt get the "white iverson" feel from that particular track (which is cool), but i can tell you got some versatility to you.
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sweltobeats;8749440 said:
Whats the website?
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Aight, this the hook.....
You know its real when involved in street life/
Cause your curfew, aint the street light/
Its human nature, you do what you do to eat right/
You know its real when involved in street life/
Cause your curfew, aint the street light/
Its human nature, you do what you do to eat right/
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When i first started the song, i was gonna do the hook myself and rap it...but i wanted to get a singer...so I did...
But a parody of what?
But a parody of what?
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@"Rum Middleton " www.sweltobeats.com
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JunadStackz
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French-Bad-Boy;8749352 said:Hey SweltoBeats! I just listened your beat it's a good one. The equalization on your brass is good to feel this 808 bass. I like the clap part too. Maybe you can decrease the volume of the main melody a lil a bit but it's just a detail. Good work, good beat!
Here is my last one:
https://soundcloud.com/this_is_mozeez/no-future
That beat is nasty, I could see Pusha T or A$AP Rocky body bagging it. I just followed you on Soundcloud and dropped a like.
We just dropped a love song for Valentine's Day a team collaborated track from three of our label's rappers and one singer.
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JunadStackz;8763643 said:French-Bad-Boy;8749352 said:Hey SweltoBeats! I just listened your beat it's a good one. The equalization on your brass is good to feel this 808 bass. I like the clap part too. Maybe you can decrease the volume of the main melody a lil a bit but it's just a detail. Good work, good beat!
Here is my last one:
https://soundcloud.com/this_is_mozeez/no-future
That beat is nasty, I could see Pusha T or A$AP Rocky body bagging it. I just followed you on Soundcloud and dropped a like.
We just dropped a love song for Valentine's Day a team collaborated track from three of our label's rappers and one singer.
track was decent. The chick on the hook has a nice voice, and if I had to pick a verse that was the best, I'd say the 2nd one was it. I could see it getting some spins on a top 40/pop station since it's a love song, plus it wasn't too much cursing so it would be easy to do a clean version. The sound quality is top notch too, whoever mixed and mastered it did a nice job.
This is one of my latest track.
https://soundcloud.com/red-hall-aka-da-burglar/u-aint-on-my-level-produced-by-vic-dibiae
Produced by Vic DiBia$e and I mixed and mastered the song. Might rerecord it, but I wanted to post it on soundcloud for now to see what people thought of it.
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It started to pick up when you was like, "couldnt walk in my 13s, shooters only 13" but then the chorus hit and I was like damn..
It was aight..somethin cool to ride to..
It was aight..somethin cool to ride to..
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This my new shit just 16 hours ago... I CAME TO GET BUSY!!
GreenHatNicca
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Rum Middleton ;8805809 said:
Nice lil video straight to the point.wish it was longer but u did your thing
Here's my new track called Hood Nursery Rhyme.DJ Absolut has been spinning this and my other record Percocet in the strip clubs here in nyc so it's picking up traction
Listen to Young Ace Deuce - Hood Nursery Rhyme by AceDeuce #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/acedeuce/young-ace-deuce-hood-nursery-rhyme
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GreenHatNicca;8853412 said:
It was short because i got this thing goin on....16s For '16...i'll be droppin at least a verse a month, just to stay out there...but i'll be droppin songs along the way too...
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GreenHatNicca;8853412 said:
I wasnt feelin this track. The lyrics were simple as shit...i've never heard you rap or heard your lyrics before and i was finishin your verse with you...i doubt you ever been on the jet, my nigga...
https://www.dropbox.com/s/j45pxv0ztdfs3qs/How it goes Ct.m4v?dl=0
Wasn't really feeling the Hood Nursery Rhyme, but to each it's own. I'd have to hear something else to give further opinion from an artistic level..This is a track I'm putting out this summer.."How It Goes"....Sorry about the link but idk how to embed it, it's not on youtube.
Wasn't really feeling the Hood Nursery Rhyme, but to each it's own. I'd have to hear something else to give further opinion from an artistic level..This is a track I'm putting out this summer.."How It Goes"....Sorry about the link but idk how to embed it, it's not on youtube.
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GreenHatNicca;8853412 said:
This shit called Hurt Feelins......cause mufuckas been in their feelings after I dropped this...
https://soundcloud.com/keynotegz/skinnyjeans
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illestni99ainne
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Rum Middleton ;8805809 said:
Yeah I'm digging this hope there's an extended video you're gonna drop. Anyways I'm dropping this on behalf of my nephew Eric King. He aiight. But he's fam so I'm gonna support
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