DOPEdweebz
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This 5th wheel swagger jacking in 2K16 now
eh. i'll go first.
http://www.isntiteyeronic.com/music
all 3 of my albums are there.
or....
http://www.soundcloud.com/eyerone
https://soundcloud.com/eyerone/stuck-in-forever-produced-by
http://www.isntiteyeronic.com/music
all 3 of my albums are there.
or....
http://www.soundcloud.com/eyerone
https://soundcloud.com/eyerone/stuck-in-forever-produced-by
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i ro ny;8644999 said:
and now, my albums, In Vitro and Stuck In Forever, are streamable on Apple Music & iTunes.
In Vitro ->https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/in-vitro/id1072768909
Stuck In Forever ->https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/stuck-in-forever/id1072735264
also available on google play, tidal, amazon and other streaming services..
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Money Machine
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i ro ny;8644999 said:
I like that "stuck in forever". The beat reminds me of some j cole but u got ya own style. Takes me back to the grimy ny sound, and im from the south.
Check my sig. The first one is called "Chilled & Dressed" ft Benzino, which happened b4 he tried to take our style and our 1st album title.
The second is called "Cocaine Fenders"
Money Machine
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Also go tohttps://www.reverbnation.com/moneymachinemuzik for more. Our first album "Another Planet" (the name Benzino took without permission) was "chopped not slopped" by DJ OG Ron C.
Production on both joints is dope... really like the way Chilled and Dressed comes in off the top...vocally it's its own joint but if I had to make a comparison I would say like a modern Goodie Mob
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Posting this on behalf of Se7ens which is made up of J Wyze and Kolor Brown backed by DTS on the 1s n 2s. This is the official video for "The System" Se7ens ft. NewBreedMC
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Posting this on behalf of Se7ens which is made up of J Wyze and Kolor Brown backed by DTS on the 1s n 2s. This is the official video for "The System" Se7ens ft. NewBreedMC
Louis Devinear
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j wyze;8675289 said:
First off. Peace to the Gods. Second off this shit is all around dopeness. From the lyrics to the visual to the beat itself. This is powerful music. Respect lord. My only complaint is that hi hat on the last dude verse that shit was annoying. But overall I give it a 10/10. Well done.
Check this joint out I did with my people. I'm on the second verse tell me what you think. Peace
https://soundcloud.com/devinear84/still-me-ft-jayo-da-ceo
ok ok ok i'm back at it
at first play i thought originators 98, i fucks with it. Don't change ya ways lol
here's a joint off my last project, excuse the quality. the studio i recorded it at got robbed 3 days after i did the tracks, the never got mixed down smh i have to do 8 songs off the project over this is another onehttps://soundcloud.com/neme-4/05-adore
Louis Devinear;8678077 said:
at first play i thought originators 98, i fucks with it. Don't change ya ways lol
here's a joint off my last project, excuse the quality. the studio i recorded it at got robbed 3 days after i did the tracks, the never got mixed down smh i have to do 8 songs off the project over this is another onehttps://soundcloud.com/neme-4/05-adore
Rum Middleton
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I peeped Louis D track, i didnt see the previous poster...but yo, i can dig that..i like the codeine line to the beastmode feastmode, lyrics are slick...beat is tight besides that loud ass string though..overall i can fuck wit it..im gonna follow you on the cloud...
Rum Middleton
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I just dropped this shit this month..called Human Nature ft The Rukh...
https://m.soundcloud.com/keynotegz/humannature
https://m.soundcloud.com/keynotegz/humannature
Rum Middleton
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I also dropped this bootleg video that I shot wit this app called Kinemaster..i dont be fuckin wit the video shootin, but im gonna start tryin..
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Rum Middleton ;8719933 said:
the song is cool. it was hard not to laugh @ the homie singing against that pole tho.
heres a new joint and video.
https://soundcloud.com/harleymac/harley-mac-x-eyerone-fuckin-fire
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i ro ny;8732238 said:
@"Rum Middleton " your flow, and lyrics ain't bad, the beat is meh, and that hook gotta go! lmao! I thought it was a parody at 1st. If that's what you're going for tho, its great!
@i ro ny. The beat is flames, and y'all riding the hell out of it, just wished the content was a bit deeper. It's like y'all reiterating the same point over & over without elaborating or establishing a real point. The 2nd dude did a little better than the 1st tho
Trying to decide what songs are gonna make the cut, honest opinions please!!!
{I guess voting is cool if you're doing it for the sport...cause the winners always gonna be the same*}
#FuqThePolls~https://soundcloud.com/jon0h/wishing-wellwwwjon0hcom
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Rum Middleton
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jon0hyfbg;8733548 said:
What do you mean, if thats what im goin for? The way the video shot? Lol thats the first video i did, i aint tryin to be a video maker though..
Rum Middleton
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i ro ny;8732238 said:
I agree wit dude who said ya'll rode the beat well...ya'll WAS killin that shit tempo wise...the lyrics were ehhh....though there were some lines that were fresh...the too short line up until step up in the booth wit it... im too legit LOL
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Rum Middleton
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This my new drop right, couple days ago...that Motion beat, wit an SP the ghost flow....
sweltobeats
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My first post here.
I would like also to spend 2 words to introduce myself: I'm a rapper/producer from Rome.
I started to produce rap in 2001, in these years I have produced lots of artists in Italy and now I feel ready to push my music out from my country.
Trying to improve every single day since 2001, this is my philosophy.
Let's go with some short reviews:
@i ro ny: "Stuck in forever". Your rap is mature. Dope classics vibes. I like the main idea of that sampled beat, even though I think that some rhytm variations on the drum would help. Mix quality is good. I think that if you put a soul singer (call me crazy but I see a male white voice) for a melodic refrain you will have a professional and competitive single. Overall I like this track, you made a great job. "fuckin fire" video: the quality of the video is good, I like also the color correction. Movement of Mc's are natural, and this is good, but you need a history (also a very short hystory), maybe in another location with other people. Only playback videos are annoying watchers IMO. Beat sounds very good, rap is dope.
@"Money Machine" . First of all I like your nick name. "Chilled e Dressed". The quality of voice should be better, the rap of the verses isn't bad. The refrain idea works for live performances, but voices mixing is too confusing . Beat sounds a little beat weak, and it needs more arrangement on the refrain IMO. The song is too long: 5:46 are too much for an unknow artist. It is better to leave a good impression with a shorter song than risk that a person doesn't listen to the whole track. Remember that also for youtube SEO it is important the duration view, and in general it is better that a person want more to listen from you. My recommendation is to put your best rhymes in shorter verses, so you can make a better impression. Finally, I recommend you to make lyrics video, as I sayd, I'm not a native English, so If I listen to a recorded track I can understand around 20-30% of lyrics, but if lyrics are written I can understand 90% of it. Half world is like me, so let's start to think that your potential public is everywhere and not only in your country. "Cocaine fenders": same type of refrain. I see the same problem of the quality of voices. This beat sounds better.
@"j wyze" : I can't watch your video, the url is not working.
@"Louis Devinear" : "Still me". Professional flow, you are the best rapper I've listened here. Top quality rap for both verses, the first one is a little bit better IMO. Sampled beat is well done, quality of the mix is ok. I'm not a fan of the empty refrain, and this is the major critique I have to do. I think that a good refrain is the key to have a professional track. I think also that you could put more variations on the beat, maybe rhytm variations on the drums to let the work more dynamic. Overall this a really nice song, the best I've listened here!
@qawshun "05 adore". The audio quality you have started is ok, so I'm sure that the final work will sounds good. Rap is good, I'm not a fan of thys kind of beat, but it works. The beat could have more emotional variation, I see a piano or a string pattern on the second part of the verse, it should give you more movement to the song. As I said, I'm not a fan of the empty refrain, but this is just me. Overall it is a good track.
@"Rum Middleton " Human nature". Man, I really like this kind of beat. I don't like the sample sound of the hit hat on the refrain, but this is me. I think also that the drum should sounds louder. Singer goes sometimes out with notes, if you are not a fan of autotune, you can use the melodyne, waves tune or some plug-in like that to adjust the intonation. Apart from the voice quality that could sounds better, nothing to say about the rap verses. The video is too amateur, why don't you create lyrics video? Expand your public man, this solution works better than a not professional video. "slow motion": song quality is not good man. The voice doesn't have high frequencies, why? I apprecciate your efforts to shot scenes in different locations, creating an history, but the video quality is not ok. You need a color correction, some frames are really moved, the result overall is too much amateur.
@jon0hyfbg "Wishing Well". A Snoop dog type refrain. Am I wrong? The refrain works well, I listen to this song once and I'm sure that i will remember the melody tomorrow. I like these vibes man. The quality of the voice could be better, rap in verses is ok, but sometimes I feel that sounds not 100% natural. Why don't you try to record the verses in a more relaxed way? I like your chilly beat.
My latest:
This is a beat inspired to the track "White Iverson" of Post Malone.
If you really like it, you can lalso leave a comment on YT, I would really apprecciate that
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I would like also to spend 2 words to introduce myself: I'm a rapper/producer from Rome.
I started to produce rap in 2001, in these years I have produced lots of artists in Italy and now I feel ready to push my music out from my country.
Trying to improve every single day since 2001, this is my philosophy.
Let's go with some short reviews:
@i ro ny: "Stuck in forever". Your rap is mature. Dope classics vibes. I like the main idea of that sampled beat, even though I think that some rhytm variations on the drum would help. Mix quality is good. I think that if you put a soul singer (call me crazy but I see a male white voice) for a melodic refrain you will have a professional and competitive single. Overall I like this track, you made a great job. "fuckin fire" video: the quality of the video is good, I like also the color correction. Movement of Mc's are natural, and this is good, but you need a history (also a very short hystory), maybe in another location with other people. Only playback videos are annoying watchers IMO. Beat sounds very good, rap is dope.
@"Money Machine" . First of all I like your nick name. "Chilled e Dressed". The quality of voice should be better, the rap of the verses isn't bad. The refrain idea works for live performances, but voices mixing is too confusing . Beat sounds a little beat weak, and it needs more arrangement on the refrain IMO. The song is too long: 5:46 are too much for an unknow artist. It is better to leave a good impression with a shorter song than risk that a person doesn't listen to the whole track. Remember that also for youtube SEO it is important the duration view, and in general it is better that a person want more to listen from you. My recommendation is to put your best rhymes in shorter verses, so you can make a better impression. Finally, I recommend you to make lyrics video, as I sayd, I'm not a native English, so If I listen to a recorded track I can understand around 20-30% of lyrics, but if lyrics are written I can understand 90% of it. Half world is like me, so let's start to think that your potential public is everywhere and not only in your country. "Cocaine fenders": same type of refrain. I see the same problem of the quality of voices. This beat sounds better.
@"j wyze" : I can't watch your video, the url is not working.
@"Louis Devinear" : "Still me". Professional flow, you are the best rapper I've listened here. Top quality rap for both verses, the first one is a little bit better IMO. Sampled beat is well done, quality of the mix is ok. I'm not a fan of the empty refrain, and this is the major critique I have to do. I think that a good refrain is the key to have a professional track. I think also that you could put more variations on the beat, maybe rhytm variations on the drums to let the work more dynamic. Overall this a really nice song, the best I've listened here!
@qawshun "05 adore". The audio quality you have started is ok, so I'm sure that the final work will sounds good. Rap is good, I'm not a fan of thys kind of beat, but it works. The beat could have more emotional variation, I see a piano or a string pattern on the second part of the verse, it should give you more movement to the song. As I said, I'm not a fan of the empty refrain, but this is just me. Overall it is a good track.
@"Rum Middleton " Human nature". Man, I really like this kind of beat. I don't like the sample sound of the hit hat on the refrain, but this is me. I think also that the drum should sounds louder. Singer goes sometimes out with notes, if you are not a fan of autotune, you can use the melodyne, waves tune or some plug-in like that to adjust the intonation. Apart from the voice quality that could sounds better, nothing to say about the rap verses. The video is too amateur, why don't you create lyrics video? Expand your public man, this solution works better than a not professional video. "slow motion": song quality is not good man. The voice doesn't have high frequencies, why? I apprecciate your efforts to shot scenes in different locations, creating an history, but the video quality is not ok. You need a color correction, some frames are really moved, the result overall is too much amateur.
@jon0hyfbg "Wishing Well". A Snoop dog type refrain. Am I wrong? The refrain works well, I listen to this song once and I'm sure that i will remember the melody tomorrow. I like these vibes man. The quality of the voice could be better, rap in verses is ok, but sometimes I feel that sounds not 100% natural. Why don't you try to record the verses in a more relaxed way? I like your chilly beat.
My latest:
This is a beat inspired to the track "White Iverson" of Post Malone.
If you really like it, you can lalso leave a comment on YT, I would really apprecciate that
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Rum Middleton
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I'll take the critique on the video cuz, i appreciate it.....i know it aint professional (shit)...im just gettin these bars out here brotha...im bout to drop another one soon...stay tuned..time to surface!!
French-Bad-Boy
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Hey SweltoBeats! I just listened your beat it's a good one. The equalization on your brass is good to feel this 808 bass. I like the clap part too. Maybe you can decrease the volume of the main melody a lil a bit but it's just a detail. Good work, good beat! 
Here is my last one:
https://soundcloud.com/this_is_mozeez/no-future
Here is my last one:
https://soundcloud.com/this_is_mozeez/no-future
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