the child of a fiend....

[Trollio]

shut up.............

 

[phantom0900]

That was deep man, i liked it

 

[Tupacfan]

Thanks for sharing this piece with us first and foremost..

It was truly felt and very deep, i must say..i can relate to this jawn.. fa real!

 

[Aquaf!nafloe]

wow this was very good...u could have made it deeper but it was right on..i could just picture the childs face and thoughts about this as i was reading it... good job hun,,

 

[damobb2deep]

wow this was very good...u could have made it deeper but it was right on..i could just picture the childs face and thoughts about this as i was reading it... good job hun,,

i kno i coulda made it deeper... but that was jus off the top of the dome.... usually its takes me days write things cuz i want it to be damn near perfect.... im deployed rite now the things i post in here will be ok.... my more complete works are in the states i will post them in here when i get back if thats what people would want.....