Suicide Lover (Inspired by real life events & this place I'm in)

[RuffDraft]

Increasing the popularity of suicide monogamy...

Don't know if you like that or not, but when I was reading I was hoping for another word at the end of that line.

Apart from that, wow, at this entire piece.... that's some deep and heavy 'ish... congrats on such a piece but sorry if any of it is true... the depth that you go into and the way that you draw upon life and death is a really nice touch... the way that you chose to reveal what you was talking about made the poem even better to me, to let us in and understand completely what you're stuck in.

Thanks for sharing, appreciate it.

 

[lovelycreation]

Suicide is for "COWARDS" that refuse to deal with their problems and looking for an easy way out, STRAIGHT TO HELL! lol

 

[Tupacfan]

Keep the head up, keep writing and expressing your self....

you are in control of you mind, body, and soul..

there is light at the end of the tunnel, no matter how hard and how dark and heavy it get's.. there is hope out there lingering..

peace.