Star Wars

[emaculate]

Shit is deep.

I love the comparison of man to child.

"To a father the child is but an observation, manifestation of his decisions and

a product of his creations. A mirror of celestial imaginations.

To the son the father is a kaleidoscope of information.

Through his scope he sees an abundance of paternal miscalculations."

Even that is continued. I love it. Only q is on the title.

Maybe off topic off q and maybe I missed it.

But in the film scope darth was a bad dude by storytellings but in this poem you've wonderfully created where ultimately in the spectrum does he fall. Was that just metaphoric or does the holes represent the reality of the being? Was he wrong wrong at times or was he wrong misunderstood outside of the father son scope of things?

Jus trying to learn interpret and understand

Very dope poem

 

[emaculate]

Father to child or son I should say corrctively

 

[luke1733]

Father to child or son I should say corrctively

1st, thanks for reading it. Thank you.

On the other point, I only named it star wars because of all the astrological terminology I was using and the father and son conflict. After I wrote the poem, the relationship of Darth Vader and Luke came to mind pretty quick.

I wasn't really trying for more than that as far as the title went. I wasn't trying to follow the star wars movie as a blueprint. It was more of an after the fact situation

 

[emaculate]

That's dope. Great job and yes keep dropping the heat. Def looking forward to reading more great work.