Raw-Material versus love yal

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Raws best lines:

My words are weapons but more precise with laser sight to "end" him with the "dot", "period"/

NO HOMO but this is the result of him "going to Got Beef to get beat," I'm straight and he got curious

Im a text GOD with an electrical aura that attracts NOISE, put the hands on you and "shock you to death"/

Cuz I'm stimulating his Nervous System and robbed his crystal stock like I'm "Meth"/~8

Recognize you're battling a top dawg, 3-headed Hellbound guardian of LE, I only let the hotness through/

This runt's punches don't blast and "can't find the heat the compete" like he was kicked out of Firefighter

Lov Yals best lines:

What verse you dropping is probly bird drop

You couldn't come with better lines, even if they name you poetry

Fired from his rap, social exchange couldn't come raw, If I wrote his matrieal like prejudice group

You too focus as ethnocentrism how you individuating style as racial groups

I could see where you was trying to go wit these lines, it justed didn't come through

Street figher vs. Killer Instinct equals Mortal Kombat 10 densensitization into pieces of two

Love Yal had a better flowing verse this time, didn't always rhyme but it flowed better...Raw had a couple fillers wit some punches and nice metaphors

Punches: Tie

Flow: Tie

Metaphors: Edge to Raw

Punches: Edge to Raw

Wordplay: Tie

Multi's: n/a Tie

Overall Post: Raw

Vote: Raw....not by much, but enough to get the win
 
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