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Shit was flames big dog......

For 10 years, I seen my brother on that crack strip..

I felt his bullet holes when he was in the casket
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that shit struck a chord homey........real talk.......
 
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7thwardslim;3896743 said:
Shit was flames big dog......

For 10 years, I seen my brother on that crack strip..

I felt his bullet holes when he was in the casket
..

that shit struck a chord homey........real talk.......

Appreciate that homie...i try
 
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Now, the plot is perfect
But is it worth it?
Bars or the hearse kid, chasing them slim cream lean currencies
Denied my green like the atkins diet
I'm often wired of the Philly Phil filled with the illest kill
And the money motivates the will
Inspires me to do vile things in exchange of the dollar bill
I gotta have more, cheddar endeavors the cuzzo told me about a plot to stack it more beter
Said if I, was more patient, then the dough would flow more flagrant
Like dunkin hines, comfortable crutch that I can rest my thoughts on mindless artform in which i can speak my spark on
Thoughts form, like a hurricane of the costal plain rapid racing chasing the Cheese of course it's all profit
Add it up man Its gone amount to sumthin exclude bluffin, as well as frontin, yeah them niggas kill me
Dig in ya pockets ye'll see, pickin out lent and nothing, the lack of pocket stuffing keeps my stomach grumblin
Eyes open and scared of nuthin...

Well ..I forgot the rest ... Rhyme is like 2 years old.... Haven't busted a good ol "keystyle" in years hahaha
 
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Uh..In a position where i gotta hustle/
Im young focused n my mind is on stackin them bundles/
Gettin older set an example im a dad n Uncle/
A congolese puttin on word to Dikembe mutombo/
Watchin life on another level/
Dont wanna be viewin the dirt on the daily like fred be seein rubble/
Gotta stay up outta trouble watch the cream turn into doubles/
dont wanna get gassed lord give me strength to remain humble/
The government i rebuttal em/
ayo my life is trublesome/
ajob, I need another one/
Before this fuckin summers done uh/
Was young n dumb n my brain is numb from the stress n pain/
I was behind n now im pickin up n switchin lanes/
I know some dudes who on the run n some who dealin caine/
Who u to judge when u got money to not play the game/
Im in a world where u got god or got urself to blame/

1.

Beni Black aka Blackdemo IC fuck with me nigga. 57th ave Lefrak to Southside 110th i see u. Carolina hold it down. Peg city canada what it is. U already know y nigga, imma start droppin tracks on here soon n eat err rapper on here B, dead ass
 
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Dizzel3000;3899613 said:
Now, the plot is perfect

But is it worth it?

Bars or the hearse kid, chasing them slim cream lean currencies

Denied my green like the atkins diet

I'm often wired of the Philly Phil filled with the illest kill

And the money motivates the will

Inspires me to do vile things in exchange of the dollar bill

I gotta have more, cheddar endeavors the cuzzo told me about a plot to stack it more beter

Said if I, was more patient, then the dough would flow more flagrant

Like dunkin hines, comfortable crutch that I can rest my thoughts on mindless artform in which i can speak my spark on

Thoughts form, like a hurricane of the costal plain rapid racing chasing the Cheese of course it's all profit

Add it up man Its gone amount to sumthin exclude bluffin, as well as frontin, yeah them niggas kill me

Dig in ya pockets ye'll see, pickin out lent and nothing, the lack of pocket stuffing keeps my stomach grumblin

Eyes open and scared of nuthin...

Well ..I forgot the rest ... Rhyme is like 2 years old.... Haven't busted a good ol "keystyle" in years hahaha

damn dun. im feeling that. loving the internal rhyme schemes.
 
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MaalikBrown;3895429 said:
Some shit I just wrote tonight...

One thing that's certain for a man..

Tomorrow never promised, still Im searching for a plan...

Went to school but, its hard to see me working for the man...

When these crackers had daddies that was working the clan..

Im just trying get my green up..

Where I was raised, my nigga, life dont mean much..

My homie cousin got jerked, got set up..

Got merked, got wet up, body twitching while crackheads searched him for his cheddar..uh

This aint no rap shit, glorifying trap shit..

When I was young, caught my auntie suckin on that glass dick..

For 10 years, I seen my brother on that crack strip..

I felt his bullet holes when he was in the casket..


If heaven gates in the sky, I pray he passed it..

But if not, shit was real while it lasted..

Feeling like Im free falling..

Church on every corner, still the devil keep callin like..

yo....that shit was ill son.
 
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@ Threadstarter, I fucks wit your verse. Shit was fire

Here go some simple shit I wrote not too long ago

..........................................

I'm tired of you always askin me questions
I'm tired of all you fake shooters that don't have any weapons
Tired of all yall broke niggas that be actin like ballers
Then on the low pull me to side and ask for a dollar
Tired of fake rap niggas who be claimin they spit
And I hate fat bitches who be sayin they thick
I'm tired how every rapper out soundin like Drake
But do you cuz if you makin bread how can I hate
I'm tired of these soft faggots sayin they thugs
I'm tired of these false flaggers claimin they blood
Tired of white boys callin me nigga
Tired if facebook thugs actin hard in a picture
Tired of dudes flaugin and wanna lie on they dick
How you smash you aint even say hi to the chick
Tired cuz yall aint seein what I'm tryin to do
If you catchin feelings bout it then I'm tired of you
 
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Rey Negro;3900102 said:
damn dun. im feeling that. loving the internal rhyme schemes.

good look bro bro ... feel guilty tho i aint even pick up the pen in about 8months or so ...aint had no inspiration

S/O to TS i was fuckin with that verse too.... vivid picture painting
 
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Dizzel3000;3900471 said:
good look bro bro ... feel guilty tho i aint even pick up the pen in about 8months or so ...aint had no inspiration

Yeah I can't remember last time I wrote before that 16 I just posted...I been extra lazy.

And your verse kinda spilled just a lil over 16 bars. I used to pack a lotta words into my verses too but less is definitely more bruh
 
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FoolTime;3900496 said:
Yeah I can't remember last time I wrote before that 16 I just posted...I been extra lazy.

And your verse kinda spilled just a lil over 16 bars. I used to pack a lotta words into my verses too but less is definitely more bruh

Yeah it be like that niggas be workin do other things ... I usually just write to clear my thoughts or better articulate/understand what I'm thinking about ... And yeah I purposely did that in that verse at the time I was tryna do this mixtape centered around the movie dead presidents ... I wasjust taking scenes and interjecting my take ...I believe I was trying to put as many rhymes in as I could ala hov on dead presidents ....that one verse is actually way longer just couldn't remember the rest of that shit.. Lol
 
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