The structure of these verses are so bad that it literally gave me a headache. You have some ok punches but diggin' for them shits underneath all the titangraphs is harder than R. Kelly at a Miley Cyrus concert. You don't have to pack in all your punchlines into 1 line, and you don't have to post EVERY line of EVERY verse. It would be best to make a thread for each verse and structure it in a way that's legible for all involved to read it. I feel like I need to decipher coded language when reading through some of this shit and that's the last thing you want your reader to do.
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