New Shenco: Standardized Slaughter

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Brian B.;5582276 said:
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BlackAX410;5581344 said:
Shenco u still pursuing rap as a career or u just doin it for fun?

u see dis question Shenco?

Trust me, he saw it lol.. & judging from some of the responses it makes sense why he avoided it

but Shenco since everyone ain't feelin the beat you need to do yourself a favor & d/l these beat tapes

brianb.bandcamp.com/

lol sometimes u gotta stop trynna pursue it as a career nd focus on ova things dats wat i did man when i start rappin again its gonna be strictly for fun da delusions of being signed or a star is ova
 
GovernmentCheese;5582228 said:
@shenco This joint was atrocious. It's crazy how Menace is actually starting to progress as a rapper but I can't say the same for you bro. It sounded like a lazy attempt at making a song. The beat was ass and sounds like some shit you would hear on a sailor moon soundtrack. Lack of emotion, flo, & delivery. What's the point of recording if you lack those 3 things?

Tbh, you fell off. You need to hop on a plane and head over to Tokyo with this shit.

Dead. Lmaooo
 
@ShencotheMC bruh every bar you dropped so far has been weak as fuck, no understatement... I thought it might just be your delivery and flow, but really bro its everything.

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Nobody tryna here that weak shit from a rapper b
 
On the real, you need another beat. Your lyrics aren't the problem. It's your delivery. Despite that there are some funny ass jokes in here, everyone in here had given constructive critisim. Just work on your mic presence, continue to practice your craft and develop a better ear for beats.
 
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(Nope);5580623 said:
Beat is terrible, oddly enough it's not a good fit for your off kilter, dick in the mouth, effeminate style.

You need to practice or you'll sound like a bootleg Von Pea with down syndrome for the rest of your faggot anime life.

LAAWWWD
 
sound like a song that would be playin in the background of a cafeteria shot in a movie like american pie or juno or a episode of blossom or some shit

or like when the new kid is walkin into his new school for the first time with a look of "oh boy, here we go" on his face

whoever said some boy meets world shit was deathly accurate

i mean that to say he was dead ass accurate
 
Also your voice doesn't fit this track. If you're going to rap over production with guitar riffs, you have to have some aggression. You sounded like you wanted to fall asleep on your own song B.

 
real talk shenco i ain't even bout to hate on you

but the beat, your voice, your flow, your delivery....all that shit was off

you ain't wack per se but all of them things need work

brian b all star ball cuffin ass is right, you need 1 of his beats

and maybe some dance lessons, idk, whatever teaches niggas rhythm

maybe you need some chitlins, give yo ass some soul

go watch roots or somethin

stop kickin it with greg and mark at buffalo wild wings playing beer pong n shit
 
We going to space next time around. Aside from the actual mixtape being released, the book is closed on DL2. Time for the follow-up
 
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