See, I wanna root for Shenco so bad, cuz I respect his story, as lame as it is. The thing is, he comes off as such an arrogant douche in real life that I no longer feel bad for the flack he gets, cuz God knows he needs it. This is... not SS, I'll say that much. The beat is actually tough this time, and could've been a banger in the right hands.
Shenco... ugh. Again, I respect the honesty, and fucks with the bars in the second verse minus the masturbation shit, you could've kept that to yourself. But you would think a 130+ page roast would light a fire under a person's ass and they would step their game up. Not the case here. Your delivery is still lackluster, and you sounded like you recorded this in the bathroom at your job the day you got fired. You sound like the human incarnation of Doug Funnie. Nigga you need a shot of testosterone, a bottle of scotch and pack of cigarettes to put some bass in your voice. But hey, your voice and cadence would go perfect for an anti bullying rap song in a GLAAD sponsored commercial, so it's not a real issue. But when you sound like Michael J. Fox can kick your ass in a fight, you need to tread lightly on certain topics.
Speaking of which, here's where my problem lies with Shenco. Someone this corny as a person should be one of the most humble people on earth, and be thankful their shit is getting attention, positive or negative, right? This nigga prolly gonna see this thread and call us "dickriders" or whatever the fuck for listening to it. My nigga, you can't act like you're untouchable when you've literally never been touched by a woman. "Let this virgin brace your mind"? Alright, some birds take longer to leave the nest than others, granted. But in order to have the caliber to talk that rah rah shit, you gotta be able to accomplish simple tasks such as, I dunno... GETTING PUSSY.
Then the shots at the IC... I swear to God you and Bruse Wane are two peas in the same fuck nigga pod. Y'all the type of niggas to put chrome alloy 10s on your Honda Civic talkin bout you keep em clean tho. Sion really gassed your head up with that interview. Your life and rap career starts and ends with the IC. Really think about that for a second. That entire first verse was about the IC roasting your DJ Conner swag havin ass. You mean to tell me no one else outside the internet even gave a fuck about you enough to critique you? I'm almost 100% positive you're a highly advanced spambot created by government to spy on hip hop, anime and porn sites, but got caught in an infinite loop when you decided you wanted to rap too. You takin bout you grindin, but why is the only feedback you get on the internet? And you from Philly too... the home of hardest working mixtape artists in rap. Fuckin shame b.
And don't get it twisted... the only reason why I'm wasting these words on you is cuz you need the inspiration. Clearly you don't have a father figure in your life or else you won't be masturbating in your mother's house. By the way, stop running up her electricity bill browsing hentai sites and do something productive with your fuckin life, like finding a job. Bottom line, stop talking shit, humble thyself, partake in some pussy... or don't partake in some pussy, I don't give a fuck either way. But goddamn my nigga, get your shit together before I find your social security number and claim you on my taxes.
