MY STORY OF NOW by VSOP *written to: Alicia Keys-unthinkable* link inside

[VSOP]

damn----that was on some late nite shit lol always crazy readin somethin you wrote the next day with eyes wide open ya know?

comments welcome

 

[Tupacfan]

DAM VSOP!

this was on some late nite tip LMAO ..

Fa real fa real tho, I love the word play... it was beautifully written and while I was reading I listened to the beat too.. so it was just ill..

crazy story too lol. glad it was a happy ending..

 

[VSOP]

DAM VSOP!

this was on some late nite tip LMAO ..

Fa real fa real tho, I love the word play... it was beautifully written and while I was reading I listened to the beat too.. so it was just ill..

crazy story too lol. glad it was a happy ending..

you aint lyin lol i was messin around with music and that beat came on and it was automatic..i HAD to write to it

its crazy cuz you can see where i stopped to re-read so i could get back on track as far as topic but when i started typin again...i started with a different rhyme scheme lol i didnt even bother fixin it cuz it jus came out right

thanks for the feedback on this one though--this is definitely my story of now...and now is some crazy shit

 

[REAL_POETICAL]

you always dropping something epic with your own flavor to the epicness...i'm feeling this piece as it hit home in my fantasy where I was on the opposite...woman of my dreams all of the suddenly wanting to come out of the blue while you got a woman of lifetime underneath of your nose...lifes a trip but the ending of your piece is like a fantasy coming true..you killed that last part of the piece especially the uniform line....bottom line good work as always....keep dropping those lines of key to lock called poetry my fellow poet

peace

 

[VSOP]

you always dropping something epic with your own flavor to the epicness...i'm feeling this piece as it hit home in my fantasy where I was on the opposite...woman of my dreams all of the suddenly wanting to come out of the blue while you got a woman of lifetime underneath of your nose...lifes a trip but the ending of your piece is like a fantasy coming true..you killed that last part of the piece especially the uniform line....bottom line good work as always....keep dropping those lines of key to lock called poetry my fellow poet

peace

appreciate it fam-aint that how it always works? youll be single and WANTIN someone but right when you start movin on and find that even MORE perfect somebody-that ol flame lights back up like "hey how you doin?"

temptations like a mug lol

preciate the feedback homie-im proud of this piece cuz like common's song...."this is me"