MY GREY AREA by VSOP

[Legend24]

I like this one, very vivid. I liked the last two bars, good way to end it off. Keep up the good work.

 

[VSOP]

I like this one, very vivid. I liked the last two bars, good way to end it off. Keep up the good work.

appreciate the feedback

I actually had the last 2 lines jotted down on a scrap piece of paper from work and was waitin on the perfect piece to use it-i actually started writin this KNOWIN how I wanted to end it so..yeah i wrote this bitch backwards you could say

thanks for takin the time to read and reply fam-I tried to switch up my style on this one

 

[Tupacfan]

LOL at wrote this backwards!

Anything to get the creative juice flowing, I feel it VSOP,

This was like watching a movie on HD hehehe..

Thanks for sharing yo! Imma thrive off y'all's creativity soon.. Watch..

 

[VSOP]

LOL at wrote this backwards!

Anything to get the creative juice flowing, I feel it VSOP,

This was like watching a movie on HD hehehe..

Thanks for sharing yo! Imma thrive off y'all's creativity soon.. Watch..

lol what? i can't write backwards every now n then?!? lol

 

[DarcSkies]

my hands tattoo her ass for life like wet cement

nice.................

 

[Tupacfan]

lol what? i can't write backwards every now n then?!? lol

lol, never said you can't vsop. I just find it funny. But no, on the real, that's like one of thee best ways to write! and you've done a good job doing that..