deaththreats
Funny how u think u can battle cats. ya flow wack
Im a lyrical lumberjack, you Garfield, Im He-man’s battle cat (2)
Get ya whole flow gift wrapped wit ya cheesecake raps,
I'll Diddy u like Da Band, you a she-man....where Cassie at? (4)
Lol. I like these lines. They made sense, cool metas.
Matter fact I aint sure if you're a girl or boy
but im sure ya end's near i'll end ya career.. Greg Oden..Brandon Roy (6)
Oh Boy, all man no boy Im a lyrical steroid
And I know you might Love Yal, but you won't Love ME after you been destroyed (8)
Kinda cool. Like the personals.
Lov got folks in the peanut gallery, against me, I see ‘em
Thedesolateone on ya clit/dick rabbit quick where some knee pads cause he needs ‘em (10)
Cause I would hate for both of yall to get arthritis,
him, for being on knees too long... and you for ya rhyme writing (12)
LOL. IDK, the personals just made me laugh. I like how you tied some metas in there with them in stead of just rhyming.
Yes sir..cause im a different breed boo, I need you to flee fool
or get embarrassed like being on ya period and u just had a bleed through (14)
Whooo...call me a newbie, newjack or whatever you want to
when im done wit'chu, i'll bet you'll warn the next person like "don't confront dude"!! (16)
Kind of fell off in the end. Overall, 7/10 verse.
love yal
This anit xbox 360 but I threaten this sucker for free
here's bomb, guts bloods splatter, watch your lines bleed
Terminator salvation you got confused for revelations, your verse is disappeared
Calling 25 hrs for atvator generation for help they turn against you and got 8 weeks of threaten
Yo. You're getting better. Sick 2nd line. I didn't get the last two lines.
So f your verse, yo ish well neva sell, the only time you rhyme hot, when u not battlin
You to embarrasing, don't wast your time, you can say what you say about my flow
This ish is professional miltary drama you get deathtreaten for free, I know what u going to say
The crowd already played out your verse, you probly gave brain to all them rappers
Mediocre lines. Nothing special here.
Now uza sucka givin brain to the community, you decided flirt with love, that's already death sentence
For get your karma, my boom rang gets thrown comes back cut your ish in half, like split lobe brain
I already check inside Occipital lobe, you watching horrible nightmares of yourself in constration camp
Can't hold your constipation in hell, you living room cover solid waste from digestive bodies constraint
I liked the ideas but they weren't punching to me. The second line doesn't make sense either. There is no such thing as a split lobe brain, the brain has 4 lobes and some people who have seizures sometimes undergo a surgery to split their brain down the middle through the corpus callosum which results in sight and recognition problems but the lobes aren't split but you are right that dreams are found in the occipital lobe lol and that line was okay.
Forget medulla oblongata your spinal cord distroyed, with this happy b-day punchline, you got disfunction
Your Eyes reflexes conduct impulses don't work, I don't know what plann seeing, your cerebellum power decreasing
Cortex decimating, losing your olfactory for being nosey, the ish I got in my frontal lobe is powerful same as my convolutions
Sorry I gots stop bragging, uza prevert for starring my pevlic area, you can't never match the ish in my cerebrum
Intelgents, you broke your brainstem now you can't function your pons, medulla and midbrain like Predator vs. The Aliens.
Are you into Psychology love yal? I noticed you use a lot of Psychology terms in your verses. I'm a Psychology graduate so I understood it but it doesn't translate into hard punches for me. You were spitting knowledge but it wasn't mixing for me man. Lol.
Weren't you the one to make the rules love yal? Why'd you spit 17 lines and not 16? LOL. Anyway. I already told ya'll what I thought of your lines. I liked deaththreats lines a little more. You've improved love yal but this time deaththreats was prepared. In my eyes anyway. Vote - deaththreats
